Last Stand (unfinished)

Ummm...ok this is several months old and as the title suggests it is unfinished. I am not happy with this because when i did it i had not read the Halo novels, now that i have it doesn't really tie into the story AND there must be a million and one mistakes eg where the armour has come off, there are only minor cuts when in actuality there may not be a lot of leg left.<br />
The finished version, if i ever get round to it, will have more Covanant surrounding her.<br />
Enjoy.