The Art of Phoenix

Oh, this picture sucks! It's so flat and unreal - especially the wall. Obviously, I must've rushed it. And it was more of a "try an idea" sort of sketch. Or maybe I'm just in a "I hate myself, so I'll critique the hell out of my own art" mood?! Anyway, feel absolutely free to say whatsoever you honestly think about any of my work. ...oh, and I was about ~16yr/old at the time...