Negative Space WIP by MeruMeru

Negative Space WIP

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This is an assignment I'm doing for my AP art class. Just wanted to know what you guys think of it. I would like if anyone can maybe throw in some suggestions. Thanks.

Charcoal is evil.

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Date Submitted January 9, 2009, 5:26:22 PM
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harmony on January 19, 2009, 2:02:41 AM

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MeruMeru on January 19, 2009, 2:17:21 AM

Thank you!

andycb2000 on January 9, 2009, 9:32:07 AM

I would go in to the top of the nose bridge and bring it IN a little
the angle of the nose isn't harsh enough
also, are you going to take the hair like REALLLY FAR? I don't get what's happening with that one piece unless you're gonna do a bunch of 'em

I REALLY like the shading on the clock face... do NOT go back in and smoothen/develop it anymore; it's cool and stylistic

the hand is drawn well; i can see your directionals and little sketches and it's good

what's the plan for the clock hand? how is the value going to work in all those polygons?

MeruMeru on January 9, 2009, 9:45:58 AM

Thanks. The nose has been bothering me but I was not sure what to do. I didn't want to screw it up so I kept as it is for now.

The hair I planning to make other strands flowing all over. But that might change.

As for the clock hand, I'm not sure exactly at the moment. The polygons I just put there out of bordem. I will most likely erase them. Or should I keep them there?

And thank you again for the comment :)