Don't you wish you had a humanoid computer?

Hello ladies and gentlemen.
I haven't been here for an eternity; sorry! I have been very busy doing various crap for school, and working on a doujinshi of mine, called "Cyber Soul"-this submission is the title cover to volume 1 (haha, like I'll ever get more than 1 volume!!). In the end I would like to have about 5 or 6 volumes. The character shown is Chihiro, a Cy-Sapien, a type of humanoid computer. Clueless, lonely,shy,and a bit mistrustful. Yeah, that basically describes her. Her former owner abandoned her,and threw her off a roof, where she fell into the hands of the broke, perverted, pretty stupid Minoru, who is completely computer-illiterate. But I don't wanna go into any details now; don't want to scare everybody away with my rants.LOL.So PLEASE, PLEASE GIVE ME SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!!! I need it to improve!Please and thank you.
(By the way, Lain is my new nickname. God, I change nicknames like every year.)

Have a nice day, till next time,
Lain ;)