Mini-comic thing~

Yeah, these are my two OCs Surk and Nevon, from a story I'm writing (And will post >.>; once I think of a title.)

Read the Japanese way... I was goin to make it American but I messed up on Girly Surk -x- It took me forever... and then I'm like, "How about I shade him for fun :)" I know Girly Surk's face sucks... if anyone has constructive critism I'll take it gladly. The rest sucks... 'cept for the last panel and Nevon's face in the second.