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Creege

Creege

Creege by Moon_the_blue_neko

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Moon_the_blue_neko
this is my character creege.... lets start from point one ::sighs takes deep breath:: complicated stuff okay here we go

Chris, a preppy jock on the soccer team spent the night drinking with his sluty girl friend and friends. he told off the gay goth kre. later that night creege drove home drunk as a pig. he hit a tree with his car.

he opens his eyes in the hospital room.but its not chris. creege sits up and looks at his body and smriks. chris had finally died the body was now his to control beacues chris spirit no longer resided in the human shell.

creege's spirit was in chris body a rencarntaion. of some sort. okay get that? now creege was a ninja in the fedal times he fell in love with his master kray.

kray was a handsom swordsman but there love was fobiden you see because he was already marryed. kray's wife found out and had kray.

killed creege witness the brutel assassination. he held his dieing lover in his arms. consumed with greif he threw himself over a cliff.

in the future kre is krays rencarnation, when ever kre is nocked out kray comes out

every one thinks creege is chris. that all changes. chris dumps his girlfriend, quit the soccerteam and joined the kento team.

he was even initiated into the goth group in school in the girls bath room. make up, peariceings and what not. owie... anyway yeah kre and creege fall in love and wut not.... yeah okay please tell me you understand what i am explaing?

COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Male » Teenagers (13-18)
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E1pnvn on June 25, 2006, 4:18:08 PM

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E1pnvnHello there. Sorry, but I didn't understand very well what you were saying, but it IS 1:00 AM and I've gone without sleep for a few days so it's probably not your fault. I got the basic idea, though, and it certainly sounds intriguing. As for the picture, you might work on making your lines a bit less choppy, but it's still a thousand times better than anything I can do on a paint program. Great job! ^^