At the Burrow

I believe I agree with uptop! The drawing itself is definately not bad, its good! And, I think he's pretty cute like that! In a non-child-hunting way, of course...

The drawing itself isn't too bad, but the coloring...It's not even so much the way it's been colored as the colors themselves, because that style does work in certain situations. Next time, you'll want to use colors with more contrast; here you're using black, brown, dark red and green, a dirty sort of sea green, and yellow. You might want to change the sky into a brighter blue, and the grass into a more vivid green. The barn is good, but I always pictured the Burrow as a more colorful place. Of course, if you really only wanted to emphasize Charlie, you could leave everything else in those colors and the sort of hazy coloring and put him into sharper relief, with brighter clothes and more defined lines. Otherwise, you are a very talented beginner, or an adequate intermediate. (BTW, can you tell I'm an avid art student/tutor?) Sorry to lecture, though. ^^;