Ryo Shoji
Ryo Shoji
Ryo Shoji by Neko_Ojo_Ichigo
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Urraca on July 17, 2008, 11:58:57 AM
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Lei on March 23, 2006, 2:38:36 PM
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My comment:
1.put more efforts on his hair and dress,you know what i mean...
2.less tone/shading on the hair and dress
3.how long is the wand he's holding?I don't think he's holding it 'cause the stick is not in the right position.(logically,i mean)Or does it float?
4.is the wand glowing...?
5.Work more on the background
Marks:5/10
#You're very creative on creating your own character,and the dress too! Excellent work!
1.put more efforts on his hair and dress,you know what i mean...
2.less tone/shading on the hair and dress
3.how long is the wand he's holding?I don't think he's holding it 'cause the stick is not in the right position.(logically,i mean)Or does it float?
4.is the wand glowing...?
5.Work more on the background
Marks:5/10
#You're very creative on creating your own character,and the dress too! Excellent work!
for a sec. >.< srry!!
but kool picture