Okora

It looks good to me. Please forgive me for this, but whenever I look at art of any type (good or bad) I find myself going into critique mode. As with most art, there are good portions of this drawing and not so good. The not so good I notice right off the bat are the head and the closest back foot. There is a lack of distinction between the front of the body and the back. While this may not necessarily be a bad thing, in this case I find it distracting. I like to keep my post relatively short, so now I'll point out the some of the good. The colors you choose stand out and contrast nicely. I appreciate the fact that you shade different materials differently and that you seem to have a concrete direction that the light is coming from(I think it may have been better if you went darker). Overall I think that it is good.

thank you so much for the critiquing ^^ it always makes me happy when I read comments about my art with critiques like this because it shows that you true looked hard enough to see what is right and wrong with it, and it helps me become a better artist. If I even revamp this picture I’ll keep that in mind =)

Very good! love the vibrant colours!

thank you, you have great art yourself

^_^ Thanks!