Lanaris
Lanaris
Lanaris by Phantomdragoness
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dragon45 on January 24, 2006, 9:50:08 AM
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hey,I love dragons to and I like that tiger ti's to cool and do you like to see my drawing too?
ouija-phantom-wolf on October 4, 2005, 6:46:23 AM
Astronamymage on September 30, 2005, 2:05:02 PM
Good: Shape and color of flames. Color and color pattern of tiger.
The shape of the face is well
Fire on the tail and the forehead is an awesome effect. You got the two tone of the tiger correct. I like the style of wings. I like your cliff; it is simple and looks great.
Bad:neck is a bit small for a tiger. the top of the back legs should be a little thicker. The front feet should be closer together than the back legs when a tiger is standing. The second wing should be more to the left and angled differently. The way you drew it, it looks like it is bent next to the other one which should be physically impossible.
Advice: If you need to create a realistic coat stripe of spot pattern, look at a picture of the animal in question. Keep the angle of the wings in mind. Yours should go more to the left and show the back of the tiger's right wing flowing behind the tiger's head and to the other side of the tiger to nearly touch the ground.
I hope that was a helpful critique. I really like this drawing. You should add a short story/background for him in the picture's description.
The shape of the face is well
Fire on the tail and the forehead is an awesome effect. You got the two tone of the tiger correct. I like the style of wings. I like your cliff; it is simple and looks great.
Bad:neck is a bit small for a tiger. the top of the back legs should be a little thicker. The front feet should be closer together than the back legs when a tiger is standing. The second wing should be more to the left and angled differently. The way you drew it, it looks like it is bent next to the other one which should be physically impossible.
Advice: If you need to create a realistic coat stripe of spot pattern, look at a picture of the animal in question. Keep the angle of the wings in mind. Yours should go more to the left and show the back of the tiger's right wing flowing behind the tiger's head and to the other side of the tiger to nearly touch the ground.
I hope that was a helpful critique. I really like this drawing. You should add a short story/background for him in the picture's description.