Razell Guitarist in Human Form Redux

I've already drawn him once, but the first picture was disproportionate and the jaw was all wrong, I think this may be closer to the actual character.
The symbol at the top is the band's symbol, it says Jukadan, if you can't read my awful handwriting..
I wanted to do just a shoulders up portrait, as I did with Gregole or Ramotith, but I just had to put in those dog-tags...dang OCD...
Please, no profanity in comments or I will delete them,
Thank you.