First Realism Attempt by RazeTora

First Realism Attempt

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I took my first shot at realism here. The overall suckiness can be improved over time and practice. But the mouth is wonky, and I'll probably fix it soon.
I intend to start studying realism more. After all, it's the base of art, I can't do much without it.

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Category Real People » Women
Date Submitted May 18, 2008, 7:25:30 PM
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Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 40 minutes
Reference pictures around the house

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StonerPenguin on November 30, 2008, 9:31:48 AM

Neat! Pretty good for you first try! Wee bit of critque; the biggest 'visual' offset is the angle of nose isn't quite in sync with the angle of her face (overall). (I hope I didn't phrase that too harshly D:) I like her eyes and hair tho It's cuuuuuuuute~

That's kinda funny :O I'm currently intensly studying realistic art. (That's the reason I haven't posted much...) It's totally confusing, because I have to 'let go' of my previous conceptions and methods, it hurts D:

I'm using 'Drawing the Head & Figure' by Jack Hamm, It's pretty good but why is it that ALL anatomy books only teach you to draw either curvy chicks with fat hair OR buff, muscular, middle-age dudes?

Where's the anatomy book on drawing average looking skinny-@$$ dudes?

Sorry went off on a rant XD, But it's good! When drawing realisism you've gotta be okay with 70% of the stuff you draw at first is gonna be crap. I FEEL YOUR PAIN SISTEEEEEER. lol

RazeTora on November 30, 2008, 10:01:31 AM

HOMG CRITIQUE :D

Thanks for the input.
[I've never posted these here, but here are two other later realism pieces I did for comparison:
http://guardian-suri-ka.deviantart.com/art/Realism-2-93321569
Even MOAR recently:
http://guardian-suri-ka.deviantart.com/art/Girl-on-the-Boat-98464711]

StonerPenguin on December 11, 2008, 11:32:23 AM

YOU HAZ IMPROVED! HOMG :D

nikki001997 on May 20, 2008, 9:35:56 AM

that's really good for your first try!