Rain? by RazeTora - Fanart Central

Rain?

Rain? by RazeTora

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Small hand is small.

Critique plz.

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
Date Submitted November 17, 2008, 2:52:00 AM
Views 1026
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Comments 3
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 25 minutes
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StonerPenguin on November 30, 2008, 9:40:17 AM

THE HAND, EZZ BEAUTIFUL. Once again, there's a great overall 'smoothness' to your drawings. It's nniiiiiicccce. Good shading.

I'm sort of apprehensive when it comes to critque, but you asked for critque so I'll just say this; Her jaw line needs to be a bit 'steeper'. Sorry, but the way it is now it makes her face look a bit 'bottom-heavy'.

It's a good concept tho. She's got a nice facial expression :D. I like how you draw hair~

RazeTora on November 30, 2008, 10:13:52 AM

Yeah, you're right, her jaw is kinda slack. Thanks, I'll think about that next time I draw!

StonerPenguin on December 11, 2008, 11:30:42 AM

Cool, You take critque very well :] Good on ya~!