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Rain?

Rain?

Rain? by RazeTora
Rain? by RazeTora

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RazeTora
Small hand is small.

Critique plz.

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
Date Submitted
Views 1020
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Vote Score 1
Comments 3
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 25 minutes
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StonerPenguin on November 30, 2008, 9:40:17 AM

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StonerPenguinTHE HAND, EZZ BEAUTIFUL. Once again, there's a great overall 'smoothness' to your drawings. It's nniiiiiicccce. Good shading.

I'm sort of apprehensive when it comes to critque, but you asked for critque so I'll just say this; Her jaw line needs to be a bit 'steeper'. Sorry, but the way it is now it makes her face look a bit 'bottom-heavy'.

It's a good concept tho. She's got a nice facial expression :D. I like how you draw hair~

RazeTora on November 30, 2008, 10:13:52 AM

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RazeToraYeah, you're right, her jaw is kinda slack. Thanks, I'll think about that next time I draw!

StonerPenguin on December 11, 2008, 11:30:42 AM

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StonerPenguinCool, You take critque very well :] Good on ya~!