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ray-ray by Razieljr83
ray-ray by Razieljr83

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Razieljr83
I was bored in art classso I decided to my own original character. My friends liked him so I hope u like him 2! Plz comment! And give me some tips. Plz

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Characters & Fanart
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mangacheese1818 on December 21, 2005, 4:38:01 AM

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mangacheese1818Ow. That scabbard looks like it must hurt.

Pinstriped_Butterfly on December 21, 2005, 4:05:33 AM

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Pinstriped_ButterflyYou definitely need to work more on your body proportions. He looks really stiff - this is probably caused by the fact that his shoulders are like two blocks. Let them hang naturally.

His face is pretty wide - you should try narrowing it a bit. The feet are kind of lopsided. One of them doesn't have a heel. xD

Congratulations on picture of the hour, and keep working at it. I'm sure you'll improve.