Batul Al-Sharar

Is the chainmail stitched on to her face?! Ouch!

The belts look good, but I think her right pauldron looks a bit out of place. To me, it doesn't look as though it's sitting properly on he shoulder. Or maybe it's just me :P

It is very true about the pauldron, this is a true picture of my problem with perspectives, I tried but I know it is very wrongly placed, a thing I really need to practice on.

Oh, and it isn't chainmail on her face. Those a small fake gemstones, one way or another put on her face, to hide an awful burn-mark, that was branded on her face by a man of the race, High Angerians, who oppresses her race, Common Angerians. As she not only had a title as her surname, which is an insult to the High Angerian society, as only they are allowed to have titles in their names. And she also spoke up against a man and a higher race, to put her in her place, he branded her face. Of course, that didn't knock her out yet.

Ohhhh, cool! So is that a world of yours, or part of a game?

Part of the world that my characters are from, my ideas mixed with ideas from my boyfriend, but the Angerian culture is my ideas.

Awesome! I think it's really cool when people make up their own world and races (I would call it "fantasy world", but folk might take that the wrong way ;P)

Well, it is a fantasy world, since it doesn't exist.

But the style of the world is quite interesting, it is slightly in the future, but fantasy clash with it since this is our world, but a more alternative universe. History also is a little different from ours. But both sci-fi, steampunk, occult and fantasy clash in this story. And trust me, I've been known here on FAc from those who know me well, that I master storywriting for characters and worlds.

Oh, and my boyfriend that I share the world with, is Chaoscontroller1992, if you're interested.

Now that is a fashionable left face!

At least better than burn marks, I assure you!

Have I mentioned her hair is pretty?Because it is~.

And gold eyes for the win!:D