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Xoe & Feill

Xoe & Feill

Xoe & Feill by SethsRazorbladeBitch
Xoe & Feill by SethsRazorbladeBitch

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SethsRazorbladeBitch
Feill, with the long hair, isn't mine. He belongs to a friend on DA.<br />
This was part one of her birthday gift ^^ I'm not happy with it, so I did a part two. I dispise the shading...<br />
Drawn in .7mm lead.<br />
Comments? Questions?

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Couples/Pairings » Yaoi
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Andieh on October 5, 2005, 11:49:10 AM

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AndiehGood. ^^ I just have some tidbits of critique, if you don't mind much ...

The shading is way off. It looks greasy, almost ... try shading wherever there is an overlap. It makes things a lot easier. Also, their anatomy is like a girl's ... dA has TONS of tutorials on how to draw. Check them out. ^^

Good luck, and I look foward to seeing improvements in your art!

Rataiga on September 14, 2005, 5:52:03 AM

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RataigaThey have a little too much hip, and the shading's a needs some work. Otherwise, this is good ^^