Maria and Chibi Chibi

We had to do a visual for our term paper and so this is my visual! My topic was Japanese festivals and this was the reference I used: http://mangastyle.net/book3/3-43.jpg. I like how it came out execpt the faces look kind of strange. The kimonos drove me crazy though they were so detailed I was afraid I would miss something. If anyone is wondering who they are it's my fan character Maria and Chibi Chibi. Chibi Chibi is just older in this pic. I'm thinking about doin a fan manga feat. Sailor Cosmos. Plz tell me what u think of that idea.