TTM OC: Mew Mew Karin

Well, this is my first submittion here and yes, it's a little bit off 'cause i was a beginner at corel paint shop. You see, this is my Tokyo Mew Mew: Mew Karin. Here's her bio:

Name: Karin Kamiya

Age: 14

Signuture Color: Reddish-Black

Birthday: July 10th

Grade: 3rd year in middle school

Height: 5ft

Blood Type: A

Hair Color: Brown with light brown highlights

Eye Color: Brown

Likes: Reading, Flowers, Music

Dislikes: Preppy and/or mean Girls, People saying that she's a goth, Cute things.

Favorite Food: Noodles

Mew Mark: Bat-like wings on her lower back

Love Intrest: Keiichiro Akasaka

Animal: Unknown, Possibly an animal from another planet

Weapon: Harmony Bell

Attack: Melody Check
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Bio

Karin had just moved to Tokyo from Osaka after a divorce between her parents. She didn't want to move because her life was at Osaka. Karin was in a bad mood about it for a few weeks after she moved and one day went to Cafe Mew Mew to get something to eat. That's when she met Ichigo and the others.
At first, Karin didn't like her attitude because she thought she was too preppy and also thought that she was one of those girls who think of themselfs. That made Ichigo mad and got her to accidently slip Lettuce, which made the food (Lettuce was holding) spill all over Karin. Karin was pissed off about it and was even in a bigger bad mood until Keiichrio offer to help clean her up. After he was almost done, Keiichrio said that not all girls(that are preppy) are mean and that made Karin to crush on him. When he said that he'll be right back, Karin was a little bored but then she notice a weird machine. She sneak off to take a look at it and suddenly, a glow appeared and hit Karin. Ryro, Keiichrio, and the other girls started to notice the light and ran to it. Keiichrio and Ryro tried to save Karin but it was too late, Karin was starting to turn into a Mew Mew.
After the incident, Karin notice that she was dressed very diffrently and started to freak out when she realize that she has bat-like ears on her head and wings like a crow. Ryro explained that she turned into a mew mew. Karin couldn't believe it. Yeah, she heard about the superheros, tokyo mew mew, but she would never thought she would turn into one! Karin hoped that she was just dreaming but she had to face it and it was real.
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MORE INFO COMING SOON!!!!
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Personailty: Karin is usually sarcastic, quiet, and a little mean but once in awhile, she's really nice. She usually blushes whenever she was around Keiichrio. Karin also thinks that the girls(except Zakuro) are sometimes annoying and are always to happy all the time, but she's actually glad that she's friends with them.

Karin is really good friends with Zakuro, which made Mint jelous of her 'cause Karin mostly spends time with Zakuro.
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so, what do u think of her bio? a little off?