Winged Foes

These are two of my Dungeons and Dragons characters (thus far, only the girl has been brought in since she's my main one). Mandy and Cormac absolutely hate each other, since their families were respectfully created by Heaven and Hell. I don't want to give away too much info since I do want to get the story written and published someday. <br />
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Again, I'm trying to work on my shading tactics. Yes, I'm aware that they still suck. Initially, i was just mad that my scanner always puts those stupid lines on my pictures, but I'm butting my head into the wall over something else with this image---the shading on Mandy's face. <br />
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Note to self: Never use two different colors when trying to shade with colored pencils! <br />
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Another gripe I have with this picture is that Cormac's wing came out alot smaller than I would have liked. I think the shading on both wings is the only thing that came out really right.