Chronicles of Ancient Darkness

Well, this is a 1st attempt at putting some of my work up on FAC- It's Torak, Renn and Wolf out of the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness series. It's not very well-known, but C.O.A.D is a book series we're reading in my English classes at the mo. I know, I know, it sounded so neeky and boring to me too, at first. But it's not so bad. This pic is actually supposed to be part of my English homework, so I need some opinions as to whether it's good or not- I want to get a high-ish mark in my English as reports are going to be written over the next few weeks! The colour kept on smudging and Wolf was a dog to draw- please comment xxx