Shounen Koibito Cover -TOI- by SumaMaehara

Shounen Koibito Cover -TOI-

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See "Shounen Koibito Cover -DEUX-" for story line thus far. Yuki's the shorter one and Akira's the tall one with his eyes closed. They are a Yaoi couple but this is just a shounen-ai picture. I'm pretty much post-poneing the yaoi stuff until later. Pretty please comment. I need the feedback.

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Category Comics » - Original Comics
Date Submitted May 29, 2004, 3:59:14 PM
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Eli_Kaitou on June 3, 2004, 2:54:40 PM

Sexy.

grace91390 on May 31, 2004, 1:34:13 AM

Scratch out "color closer to their bodies." You already did that ^^ It's just on that one part next to that guy's leg where it's not as close as the rest of the picture.

grace91390 on May 31, 2004, 1:32:54 AM

I like the pretty pink XD Maybe if you inked the people and colored a little closer to their bodies and/or colored them it'd look a little better. Yet, it's already really good ^^~