Shaman King 2, Page 19
Shaman King 2, Page 19
Shaman King 2, Page 19 by TakeshiAsakura
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Panel 1: Ichiro: Jess...<br />
Panel 2: Jess: Sorry Ichiro, This is Yoh!<br />
Panel 3: Yoh: Hiya!<br />
Panel 4: Takeshi: Asakura Yoh?<br />
panel 5: Ichiro: I think there are too many asakuras here!<br />
yay page 19 lol well PLEASE COMMENT ^___^
Panel 2: Jess: Sorry Ichiro, This is Yoh!<br />
Panel 3: Yoh: Hiya!<br />
Panel 4: Takeshi: Asakura Yoh?<br />
panel 5: Ichiro: I think there are too many asakuras here!<br />
yay page 19 lol well PLEASE COMMENT ^___^
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nocturne_dune on March 22, 2005, 5:16:24 PM
shaman_girl on March 10, 2005, 11:06:05 AM
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nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3Cara on March 10, 2005, 8:32:50 AM
Cara on
Cool. Awesome job. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*inuyasha_stalker on March 9, 2005, 9:01:09 AM
yay! good job takeshi!!! X3SecondFlame4710 on March 9, 2005, 8:11:48 AM
Page 19 at last! Cool pg. I like the colors, and another great page of the comic that will one day be popular among the manga. +favs.ren_fan on March 8, 2005, 11:52:56 AM
ren_fan on
yaaay! It finally loaded ><Very good Chris. I'll get to work on page 20!!! ^^'
~H~
1 > the drawings are good, but you seriously need to take up some lessons on PROPORTION. this is what most mangakas/manwahers lack skills on. proportion depends on the style of what you're drawing. take for example shaman king. these guys usually have slender bodies right? take your last panel for example. his eyes is actually on the cheek, where as they should be a bit higher, like under the bangs
2 > you're definitely not a wiz on backgrounds, but i'll bet you hate doin' em as much as i do. why not collaborate with someone?
3 > if ya cant write nicely why dont you just edit your dialouges on your pc so you dont have to write it all over again at the description space on this page?
4 > work on your choreography ,this is how the panels are arranged, in manga terms.> tis kinda boring this way.
5 > try to make your work a little neater and cleaner.
if i have the time, ill view the other pages of your comic as well, which im sure will turn out great.
please dont hate me, as the whole world already does.
ciao!