Sonic Unleashed
Sonic Unleashed
Sonic Unleashed by TheGameArtCritic

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
Date Submitted
Views 4519
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 10
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Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 HOURS!!!
Reference PLAY Magazine May Cover (Sonic Unleashed)
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 HOURS!!!
Reference PLAY Magazine May Cover (Sonic Unleashed)
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MacalaniaMan on November 17, 2009, 12:08:34 AM
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mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 3:04:00 AM

Lightning: what do you....?
Mikenno: we have to free the others. HURRY!!
*all start heading back to base*
MEANWHILE!!!
Twilight: ECLIPSE!!! where'd he go???
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 9:03:11 AM
mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 9:38:39 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 10:08:19 AM
mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 2:16:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 8:38:07 AM
mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 9:22:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 9:36:49 AM

Rosette: oh no! WHAT IF HE TURNS HIM AGAINST US?????
Me: i think that's what he intends, but not in the normal mind control, or manipulation trick.
Rosette: than what?
Me: brain washing.
Rosette: whaaaa?
Me: Inderretta had a machine that messed up people's memories, originally used to extract the memories of enemy soldiers in an upcoming war that never happened. Unfortunatally, you can also put memories in. FALSE ones.
Rosette: so like KH: COM?
Me: yuppers.
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:48:13 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:41:44 AM

Rosette: that's a good plan. I'm going with you guys!
Me: a brave move. Are you up to it?
Rosette: ummmm duh. He means a LOT to me, Critic. You just expect me to step aside and hope for a safe return? I'M NOT PRINCESS PEACH, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
Me: oh ok.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 24, 2008, 9:22:05 AM

Aria: Then I'll go help with Eclipse. Never know how much a good kick to the head can help…
Me: *Deadpan expression* You're horrible.
Aria: *Wide grin* But you love me anyways.
Me: In a totally platonic fashion. I already have a boyfriend. ((I will get off my lazy @$$ and draw him one day… don't tell my boy though Mish…))
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:10:57 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:34:46 PM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:54:51 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:01:34 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 24, 2008, 1:12:11 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:17:20 PM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:33:56 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:44:21 PM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:48:49 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:55:27 PM
mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:59:49 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:08:41 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 24, 2008, 5:04:31 PM

Me: *Drily, obviously sarcastic* A veritable damsel in distress. Be careful… this is just… too convenient…
Aria: *Laughs* Don't worry!! I doubt even This Angel dude could stomach Cantible's guts…
Me: Nevertheless…
Aria: *Waves it off* All right, let's make like a banana and split!!
TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 2:52:14 AM
mechadragon13 on October 25, 2008, 6:17:05 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 6:24:15 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 25, 2008, 8:36:19 AM
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:36:32 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:51:07 AM
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:03:35 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:09:19 AM
mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:22:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:26:19 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 26, 2008, 12:23:08 PM

Me: *Watches them depart, before turning to the others* All right. I think I know what Cantible's done with at least two of the emeralds… and maybe the third… but I think she won't do too much with Acid's besides examine it… she's not stupid. Unfortunately.
mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:25:45 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 9:03:37 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 27, 2008, 10:20:03 PM
mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 7:48:53 AM

Vera: ohhhh...... *looks towards the floor* *under her breath* that's seven now....
Me: huh?
Vera: seven deaths, including multiple deaths by the same person.
Me: oh. didnt know you were counting.....
MEANWHILE!!
Twilight: i think it is...... *digs her heels in and screeches to a halt* should we go back?
Lightning: ..........
TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 8:51:59 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 28, 2008, 10:26:09 PM
mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:22:59 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:32:27 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 29, 2008, 10:23:24 PM
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 11:21:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 12:02:33 PM
mechadragon13 on October 30, 2008, 12:04:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 30, 2008, 1:50:22 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 31, 2008, 4:18:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 31, 2008, 7:26:58 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 1, 2008, 9:46:33 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 1, 2008, 11:36:27 AM
mechadragon13 on November 3, 2008, 6:26:55 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 4, 2008, 9:25:20 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 5, 2008, 9:04:45 AM

Me: how do you know all this?
Rosette: I read the other rp's.
Me: ah.
Eclipse: ... ... ... huh? Wait, wait wait wait... STOP. HOLD ON. Can SOMEONE PLEASE explain to me what's going on, why am I here, WHERE am I here, and... er... *embarresed* who am I?
Rosette: THEY DIDN'T EVEN LEAVE YOU WITH YOUR NAME????
Eclipse: who left me with what now?
Rosette: *facepalm*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 7, 2008, 9:31:35 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2008, 11:45:17 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 12, 2008, 9:24:47 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2008, 12:22:34 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 18, 2008, 9:26:05 PM
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 4:28:38 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 24, 2008, 6:04:06 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 24, 2008, 6:02:24 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on November 4, 2008, 9:25:05 PM
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 8:48:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 9:05:10 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 6, 2008, 10:21:41 PM

Aria: Sadist... Just you wait til the next time we meet face to face...
Fugue: Don't antagonize her...
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 3:23:47 AM

Me: ...lightning?
Lightning: not too sure about this...... critic?
SIM ROOM!!
Acid: he's right, ya know. with cantible in the driver's seat, who KNOWS what she'll do....... she has access to all my files..... she knows EVERYTHING about me....
Vera: not everything......
Twilight: ???
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 6:07:49 AM
mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 9:02:07 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 7, 2008, 10:22:54 PM
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 3:08:44 AM

Me: Twilight could run if necessary, but vera's a better negotiator..... critic?
SIM ROOM!!
Twilight: ........
Vera: ........
Acid: ........they betterlet me out soon...i dont think i can take it much longer.....
TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:53:56 AM

Rosette: Eclipse, i have no idea what you just said, but i agree with you fully!! ^^
G. Eclipse: :|
Rosette: ^^
G. Eclipse: :|
Rosette: ^^
G. Eclipse: :|
Rosette: ^^
G. Eclipse: <um... alright...>
menwhial
Me: I thinkit we should be letting Vera out. Cantible seems more reasonable then Eggman. We can use her to our advantage.
mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 10:41:41 AM

me: oh yeah, we need to tell ger we need acid's emerald....
SIM ROOM!!
Acid: *ear twitch* ....someone wants my emerald........ *crosses his arms tightly* ...........no.
Twilight: ...how does he know that...?
Vera: he sort of knows when someone's talking about it.... its kind of like a built in sonar......
Twilight: coooool.......
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 8, 2008, 10:20:49 PM

Cantible: Type in there. Be warned though, I'm monitoring what you're typing, and if you try to do anything else but communicate to Acid, Vera and the rest, then the deal is off.
Aria: *Thinking* What is she up to??
Me: *Worried look on face* All right, looks clear. Let's hurry, before she changes her mind.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 5:41:24 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:01:39 AM

MEANWHILE:
Twilight: ...... *ear twitch* they're letting one of us out. not sure who, though.
Vera: if we're being held hostage, it's definitely not acid.
Acid: ......... *takes something out of the inside pocket of his jacket. it is a shiny black chaos emerald* .........if only they had given me chaos control....... grrrrrr........ *clutches the emerald tightly* the others want this emerald. im sure of it.
TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 9:24:51 AM
mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:49:03 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 10, 2008, 10:40:15 AM

Cantible: *Types in a short code, in the simulation room, Lightning's message appears in Blood Red letters* All right, I've transmitted your message. You have until next Friday, 7 pm. I'll be waiting at the aforementioned drop point then. If you collect the needed items before that… the Kitsune can reach me. *PA clicks off*
Aria: She's gone…
Me: She still here. She's just not speaking.
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 10:51:03 AM

Acid: *as soon as he reads "acid's emerald" he yells* I KNEW IT!!
Vera: acid...... if we all wanna get out of here, i need that emerald.
Acid: *clutches it tightly* you know im not giving this up, right?
Twilight: acid, it's out only chance if we all wanna get out alive......
Acid: ......
Vera: ......
Twilight: .......
Acid: .......fine. just fine. *reluctantly gives the emerald to vera* keep it safe, will ya?
Vera: *nods* with my life. eclipse, i need that vial. apparently im the only one allowed to leave.....
MEANWHILE!!!
Lightning: *slumps back in his chair and groans* ugh.... what has this world come to...?
Mikenno: thats life, lightning. there are both triumphs and losses.......
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:11:55 AM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:28:07 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:46:09 AM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:04:40 PM

Acid: *grabs her free arm to stop her*
Vera: *looks back at him*
Acid: ....come back, ok?
Vera: *smiles at him* i will. *briefly kisses him, then goes out through the door*
Acid: *watches her as she leaves, and when she's gone, he leans against the nearest wall and slides down into a sitting position. he sighs*
CONTROL ROOM!!!
Lightning: and she should come out right... about... now.
Vera: *comes out of the sim room carrying the emerald and the vial* ugh. glad to be out of THERE...... but i hate having to leave acid in that terrible place....
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:07:47 PM
mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:26:31 PM

SIM ROOM!!!
Acid: *is still sitting against the wall, staring at the floor*
Twilight: *walks over to him and sits down next to him*
Acid: *glances up at her, then resumes staring at the floor*
Twilight: ...... you're really lucky ya know? luckier than most.
Acid: *still staring at the ground* and how is that?
Twilight: you have someone. someone who cares about you. someone who will stand by you no matter what the situation. most people i know arent that lucky.
Acid: *closes his eyes and laughs once* i guess you're right on that one.
TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 2:22:30 PM
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:14:21 AM

Twilight: *looks around*
MEANWHILE!!!
((copied fugue's comment))
fugue: As long as we keep up our end of the bargain, everything will be fine… now, what about the two other emeralds??
Aria: Are we just going to do NOTHING and let her get away with this??
Fugue: *Glares at Aria and mouths* Later.
Aria: *Rolls eyes* Whatever…
Lightning: we have two more. i just gotta go get them. they're in a very secure room.
Me: *phew*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 11, 2008, 11:07:21 AM
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 12:42:57 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 3:37:05 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 12, 2008, 4:02:02 AM

Aria: Will not!! I'll just…!
Me: Want to kick her head off and rip her guts out. And then we'll end up nowhere. I'll go. Aria, you stay here, to ensure she doesn't try anything else. Cantible's bound to bring at least one of the Crystals with, just in case it comes down to something…
Aria: Fine. Who else then?? I don't want just you and Vera going…
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:07:36 AM

Lightning: *comes back winth two chaos emeralds, a red and a dark blue* i got em.
me: hey light, will you go with vera and fugue to meet cantible?
Lightning: *nods* definitely.
Mikenno: ....im coming too.
Lightning: ?
SIM ROOM!!
Acid: *still staring at the floor* chill out, eclipse. there's nothing we can do now except wait.
Twilight: ...or we could explore.
Acid: .....what??
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:33:32 AM
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:44:18 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 12:18:07 PM
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:23:40 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 12:41:50 PM
mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:52:05 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 13, 2008, 7:39:03 AM
mechadragon13 on October 13, 2008, 7:49:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 8:48:29 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 13, 2008, 8:59:52 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 12:11:00 PM
mechadragon13 on October 14, 2008, 2:57:52 AM

SIM ROOM!!
Twilight: *continues down the hallway until she sees a door marked: "experiment room"* hello. what do we have here? hey guys, wanna go in?
TOWER!!
Lightning: *is tapping his foot impatiently* you said she wouldnt be late......
Vera: calm down, lightning, you're getting me agitated.
TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 8:33:58 AM
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 2:29:54 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 9:58:41 AM
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:21:37 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:35:29 AM
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:04:44 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:05:43 AM
mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:16:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:18:12 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 15, 2008, 10:24:18 PM

Cantible: Good afternoon. How are you today??
Me: Let's just get this over with.
Cantible: *Laughs* So where are the emeralds and the ectoplasm??
mechadragon13 on October 16, 2008, 10:50:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 16, 2008, 12:47:56 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 16, 2008, 10:25:18 PM

Cantible: This disk has the code required for their release. My emeralds, and my ectoplasm please.
Me: *Eyes her supsiciously* What do you want with those anyways.
Cantible: You'll find out soon enough....
((Critic... are you talking to me, or to me in the rp?? I'm unsure....)))
TheGameArtCritic on October 17, 2008, 8:48:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 17, 2008, 10:59:27 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 17, 2008, 11:31:47 AM
mechadragon13 on October 19, 2008, 9:40:36 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 19, 2008, 12:15:50 PM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 7:13:56 AM

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:51:02 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:02:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:11:30 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:19:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:26:27 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:33:30 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:41:29 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:55:32 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:02:44 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:23:20 AM

Me: lynn and freya belong to lynn_the_fox.
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:28:41 AM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:40:07 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 2:02:55 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 20, 2008, 10:25:28 PM
mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:28:27 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 10:09:53 AM
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:15:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:18:18 AM
mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:35:05 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:37:48 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 21, 2008, 10:24:16 PM

*On the EggCarrier*
*Cantible is pulling out what used to serve as the Crystal Mark Five's Eyes and replacing them with the chaos emeralds she got as part of the deal with HN. Part of The Ectoplasm has been placed in a machine, which is running tests on it*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 10, 2008, 12:26:51 PM
mechadragon13 on October 11, 2008, 5:12:18 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 6, 2008, 10:21:26 PM

Aria: Sadist... Just you wait til the next time we meet face to face...
Fugue: Don't antagonize her...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 26, 2008, 9:30:19 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 9:56:06 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:36:48 AM

Twilight: i'll take em there.
Lightning: cool. *runs down the other hallway*
Twilight: this way! *heads in the opposite direction*
Acid: *follows reluctantly*
Vera: *is literally pushing him forwards*
MEAnWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: who's there?? *shows his sharp teeth. show yourself!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:49:14 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:03:11 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:09:24 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:19:40 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:23:20 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 26, 2008, 11:31:06 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:35:02 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 26, 2008, 11:40:53 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:44:30 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:51:56 AM

Twilight: we're here!!
*lightning and an orange aviwolf wave from a window in the control room, then point at a door nearby*
Twilight: *opens the door* IN! ^^
*everyone goes in*
Lightning: ok acid, the door to the simulator is over there. *points to a door with a red stop sign on it* just go in there and tell us where you wanna go and what type of enemies ya wanna face.
Acid: .....okay. *goes inside and stands in the seemingly plain room* ........
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: come on, critic, you've had worse than thaaaat... *stands her up*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 26, 2008, 12:09:51 PM

Aria: *Sniffs in disdain* Cantible would love to get her hands on this…
Me: She already has one of her own…
Aria: *Laughs* She'd love just to see it, if only to figure out how it works, the little b&*(^
*On the EggCarrier*
Cantible: *Sneeze*
Crystal: *Robotically* Are you all right Mistress??
Cantible: Fine. Though I have a speaking suspicion that somebody is talking about me…
TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 12:13:00 PM
mechadragon13 on September 27, 2008, 11:30:50 AM

Acid: ......the arc. robots. lots and lots of robots.
Me: makes sense, considering that grudge he has against gerald and robotnik.
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: *lets out an involuntary "mrrow" of laughter, then catches himself* jeez, keep forgetting im a flippin' CAT!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 27, 2008, 12:40:45 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 27, 2008, 1:36:24 PM
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 7:19:48 AM

Acid: *shakes his head* god, how i HATE this place.....
Me: you see, unlike shadow, he was just a plain hedgehog before the arc. the experiments they did on him... *shudders* i dont even wanna begin to think.......
Lightning: loading robot programs...... done. knock yourself out acid!!
Acid: *laughs* i think i'll try not to, thank you very much. *faces the robots that have appeared in the hallway* here goes everything!!
MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: heheh. i kinda stormed into HNHQ in my demon form. ^^;; so everyone was giving me weird looks. i had to get a new disguise. as soon as everyone stops freaking out, i'll go back to hedgehog. blech. i hate fuzzy....... meow. GODDAMMIT!!! *smacks himself*
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 9:02:35 AM

G. Eclipse: <oh... there has been a change in things can come...>
Me: so you sensed your future child?
G. Eclipse: <don't i have to be alive for that?>
Me: we'll find a way. So... Mikki... how good are you with kids?
menwhiarl
Rosette: it's worse then i ever imagined... everything is so bleak and sad...
mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 9:26:04 AM

MEANWHILE!!!
Vera: yeah, from what he told me, it must have been horrible. *looks at the screen* oh boy. there he goes.
Everyone: *STARE AT SCREEN*
Acid: *his pupils have become snake-slits, and his fang grew somewhat*
*teh robots are all around him, guns pointed*
Acid: heheheheheheheh..... *suddendly leaps forward, then seems to pass right through one of the robots. as he lands on the other side of it, the robot explodes*
Lightning: WHOA. that's SOME power.....
Vera: you haven't seen the half of it.....
Acid: *grabs the next robot and it advanced towards him, then literally rips it in half. he throws the pieces of robot and some other robots nearby, and they explode. all during this, he has been laughing insanely*
Twilight: *wide eyed, she takes a step away from the door to the sim room* i can see why he didnt want to show us at first.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 1:13:54 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 30, 2008, 12:08:18 AM

Aria: I don't see anything wrong... Fugue, you're imagining things.
*On the Egg Carrier*
Cantible: *Is typing rapidly into a computer. Crystal mark 5 watches silently, hooked up to said computer, to accelerate the process*
((November 18th, It comes out. Sonic Unleashed))
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 2:21:14 AM

Vera: he's done. turn it off.
Lightning: okey. *types some stuff into the computer and the room returns to normal*
Vera: *runs into the room and goes towards acid*
Twilight: whoa, wait!! is he safe??
Vera: if hes on his knees like that, he's expended all his energy. so, yes. *kneels down next to him* acid? hon? you ok?
Acid: huff...yeah...huff.... *looks up towards the control room, and yells* TOLD YA IT WOULDNT BE PRETTY! huff...huff....
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: *is dead serious* eclipse, you know i would never refuse to help you. *puts a hand on eclipse's almost non-existent shoulder* if you want me to take care of your child, i will.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 30, 2008, 5:19:28 AM

*Lines of data start to pop up on the computer screen. They start appearing faster and faster. All of a sudden the Simulator reactivates, however, the coding does not allow those in the control room to see what is going on in the Simulator. In the simulator, a scene from Acid's past is being contructed around the two inside*
Aria: What's going on??
* On the screen, an emblem of two mechanical dragons, curled into the Yin Yang circle, pops up. Underneath the emblem is written: Chaos is the score upon which reality is written.*
Me: It's Cantible! We need to get them out of there!!
*In her room on the Egg Carrier*
Cantible: *Leans back in her chair* The die is cast. Let the fun begin!! *Laughs*
Crystal: Program completion: 57 Percent.
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 5:25:48 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 30, 2008, 5:30:21 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 7:56:49 AM

Twilight: i dunno!! lightning what are you doing?!
*no response from the control booth*
Twilight: we're being hacked.
Vera: not cool. especially in this place. not good at all.
CONTROL ROOM!!!!
Lightning: WTF is going on???
Talon: the room's being hacked! *frantically starts typing into the computer* this code's gonna take a while to break. hope the program they're in isnt too dangerous....
MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: i know. and you know, i'll never hesitate to help.
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:06:15 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:38:15 AM

Me: i gotta call mikki, this is getting too outta hand. *presses the red button on her watch and typre in the number 666* come on mikki, git over here....
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: *nods* agreed. *something beeps on his wrist, then metal band on his wrist has a flashing light on it* and not a moment too soon! eclipse! can you fly? *turns demon*
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:58:26 AM
mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 9:04:20 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 9:31:36 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 30, 2008, 10:24:35 PM
mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 2:47:38 AM

Lightning: *frantically typing* tell me about it!!
Talon: *urgently* virus is spreading, lightning.
Vera: *checks on rosette* she's not doing well at all. we need to get out. NOW. that one might blow too. *pointing at acid*
Acid: *rage is building, but he'sdoing his best to contain it*
Twilight: rosette's fate isnt up to us.....
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: yes you are, critic. *grabs eclipse by the wrist (which is possible for demons) and takes off* dont let go, eclipse!
TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 11:44:42 AM
mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 12:11:31 PM
TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 1:14:24 PM
mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:05:12 AM

Talon: *typing frantically, does NOT look away from the computer screen* we've been hacked!
Lightning: *also typing frantically* yeah, and vera, acid, twilight, and rosette are trapped inside.
Me: we can't open the door, beacuse if we do, there's a very likely chance that they'll be terminated along with the program.
MEANWHILE!!!!!
Mikenno: *flaps his wings faster* dont worry eclipse, we're almost there.
TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:12:28 AM
mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:33:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:37:01 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:03:16 AM

Talon: *tying faster* hopefully we wont need you.
Me: and so we wait.
SIM ROOM!
Vera: .......
Twilight: ........
Acid: ......... RRRARGH!! *suddendly stands up and punches a wall, making a dent in it*
Vera+Twilight: O.O
Acid: ...... *sits back down* sorry. needed to get that out of my system ^^;;;;
Vera+Twilight: -_-;
Twilight: you could have warned us, ya know.
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: we need to get to the sim control room. *turns into his cat form*
Vector: FIND THE COMPUTER-----
Mikenno: *kills vector*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:08:20 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:52:45 AM
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:55:19 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:12:41 AM

MEANWHILE!!!
talon: grr.... THIS CODE WONT CRACK!! *is highly frustrated*
Lightning: thats a robotnik for ya. *still typing*
Me: *taps her foot impatiently* that cantible sure is a sneaky one......
INSIDE!!!
Acid: *still pacing*
Vera: *so quietly only twilly can hear* he's getting nervous. he seems to be controlling himself ok, but he's not sure how long it might last....
Twilight: *nods*
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:16:01 AM
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:35:21 AM

Twilight+Vera: SHHHHHHHH!!! 8|
Acid: huh? *looks over to the three girls and notices rosette is awake* oh, you're up.
OUTSIDE!!
Me: .... *still tapping my foot*
Talon: *suddendly* THATS IT!!! lightning, we havent tried attacking the source! crash their system before they can overload ours!!
Lightning: that is GENIUS my friend!! *turns back to the computer* let's roll. *both start to type frantically again*
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: we're here. *knocks on the sim room door*
Me: huh? *open the door* mikki! critic!! eclipse!
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:39:00 AM

G. Eclipse: *lightly punches me in the shoulder*
Rosette: Eclipse! :D
G. Eclipse: <Rosette!>
*Rosette and Eclipse try to hug, but Rosette goes through Eclipse and falls down, Eclipse, still not used to the weird feeling of being walked through, falls down as well*
Me: *cough*lol*cough*
mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 6:01:24 AM

Mikenno: he's a ghost. the laws of physics dont apply to him.
Lightning: huh. odd. he shouldnt be able to get into where the others were......
Talon: antivirus program, created. launching program now. *typing*
INSIDE!!!
Twilight: eclipse? how did you...? oh.
Vera: so eclipse can get in.
twilight: apparently so.
Acid: ah! you too, eclipse? it's like a freaking reunion in here!
TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 8:34:53 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 4, 2008, 2:20:08 PM
mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:10:25 AM

Me: The only way that Cantible will let us get around the code is if breaking the code causes more chaos than letting the code stay online. And if we take too long…
Aria: She'll just start screwing with the computers for a little fun.
Cantible: *Has hacked into the PA system* Am I really that predictable?? How unfortunate… *Simpering giggle* I digress… I wish to speak with whoever is in charge of Hybrid Nation. And the Kitsune.
~~~
Lightning: whoa, hey, talon hold up. what do you want, cantible?? haven't you caused enough trouble already??
MEANWHILE!!!!!!
Acid: *starts pacing again* .........
Vera: ......
Twilight: .......
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 5, 2008, 11:25:33 AM

Me: And if we refuse?
Cantible: Acid was one of my Great-Grandfather's experiments. I have the data available to recreate the experiments in the simulator…
Aria: You're such a b^&(^
Cantible: *Laughs* Sticks and Stones love.
TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:39:32 AM
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:08:35 AM

Vera: unfortunately, i dont think she's kidding.....
Twilight: ooh, when i get my hands on that girl..... *her fur fluffs out in anger*
CONTROL ROOM!!!
Lightning: grrr.. that girl's starting to get on my nerves......*thinks* how about another chaos emerald instead of eclipse's ghost? does this sound good?
Mikenno: *thinking* just like lightning to not give up a friend...... but do we even HAVE three emeralds?
Me: .........
TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:41:55 AM
mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 8:46:31 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on October 3, 2008, 10:00:32 AM

Aria: She'll just start screwing with the computers for a little fun.
Cantible: *Has hacked into the PA system* Am I really that predictable?? How unfortunate… *Simpering giggle* I digress… I wish to speak with whoever is in charge of Hybrid Nation. And the Kitsune.
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 8:59:34 AM

Lightning: *puts an arm around her, tears also flowing freely* .....
Mikenno: oh god..... *falls to his knees, unable to hold it in anymore, and sobs*
Me: *bow her head, and falls to her knees next to mikenno, but isnt sobbing as much as mikenno* ....eclipse......
Fria: *tears flow, but the song doesnt stop*
so tired of the straight line
and everywhere you turn
there's vultures and thieves at your back
and the storm keeps on twisting
you keep on building the lie
that you make up for all that you lack
it don't make no difference
escaping one last time
Me: *joins this verse*
it's easier to believe in this sweet madness oh
this glorious sadness that brings me to my knees
*everyone else in the room joins in for the last verse of the songeveryone but mikenno, who hums the melody a few octaves lower. the sound is almost eerie*
in the arms of an angel
fly away from here
from this dark cold hotel room
and the endlessness that you fear
you are pulled from the wreckage
of your silent reverie
*everyone sings louder, almost overcome by grief*
you're in the arms of the angel
may you find some comfort there
you're in the arms of the angel
may you find some comfort here...........
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:29:03 AM

Rosette: *tries to calm down* s-so... so he's a GHOST?? *sobs again*
Me: well... yeah. But he's a SMART ghost. He's not the type who is stuck in some time period, or does something over and over. If he tries hard, he'll be able to interact with us...
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:37:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:44:45 AM
mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:10:08 AM

Me: mikki....... *hugs him* its ok, mikki, we'll be able to see eclipse again...come on, dont be sad.....
Mikenno: *in between sobs* i....i'm not sad. *looks up at mish and critic, eyes brimming with tears and a smile on his face* they're tears of joy......
Me: *realizes* oh my gosh... wait, since mikki's a demon, then.... technically.... he's a ghost, right??? wouldnt he be able to talk to him?????
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 20, 2008, 11:06:56 AM

Aria: *Is in other room, but can sense Eclipse's passing. She is silent, her beak pressed shut tightly*
((I can't get on during weekdays anymore… officially… I can try to sneak on during school… before school actually, but my ability to participate is going to drop… Mish, if I don't post regularly, feel free to control my characters… I'd really appreciate it…))
TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 2:29:54 PM
mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:46:20 AM

Mikenno: ...i know it will work. *stands up, but wobbles a bit* whoa. jeez. *manages to stand straight* dizzy. not fun. *looks over to critic* im gonna go look for him. will you come with?
Me: ....good luck.
Acid: ..............
Vera: ..............
Fria: *wipes tears away, then tilts her head towards the door* (........i'm gonna go check on my brother. call if you need me....) *walks out of the room*
TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:22:37 AM
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 2:57:39 AM

*nameless hybrids stare at him*
Mikenno: ........... looks like they all saw me. time for a new disguise...... brb. stay here. *goes down another hallway*
MEANWHILE!!!!
Me: ......
Lightning: .......
Twilight: ......
Acid: ......
Vera: ........
Me: ok, thats it. i can't take extreme silence!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:34:53 AM
mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:41:17 AM

MEANWHILE!!!
Me: grr..... *sits down on a nearby chair with a thump*
Lightning: she hates quiet. it unsettles her.........
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:58:07 AM
mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 11:49:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 12:34:40 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 23, 2008, 10:20:00 PM

Fugue:*Is leaning against a wall* My lips are sealed. Anyway... what is the state of the rest of Hybrid Nation?? There must have been some fall out...
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:44:51 AM

Acid: *hangs his head* .......
Vera: *gives him a hug and snuggles against him*
MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: .......... do you wanna walk? or fly? *grin*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:33:19 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 8:47:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:09:30 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:23:22 AM

Vera: *huggles* that's not true, acid.
MEANWHILE!!
Mikenno: oof! heheh. this is gonna be an interesting takeoff. hang on critic! *crouches down, then leaps into the air, flapping his huge wings to get himself aloft. he seemed to be struggling to stay up, then he caught an updraft and rose up to a dizzying height* ah... finally. *spreads his wings all the way and glides lazily with the updraft* greenhill city, here we come!
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:43:32 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:51:40 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!
Acid: i may have control over what i do, but being a thief is in my DNA. i can't stop. it's like an addiction. *to himself* f***ing gerald and his f***ing experiments.......if he was alive i'd f***ing kill him.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:56:05 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:07:13 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!
Acid: *shakes his head* its not as easy as you'd think....... i was MADE to kill. i was made to thieve, to scheme, to destroy. it takes all of my willpower to supress the killing urge..... im just simply not capable of supressing the others as well......
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:11:53 AM
mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:29:01 AM

MEANWHILE!!!
Acid: WHAT?!? HOW DARE YOU EVEN SUGGEST THAT???? ARE YOU INSANE??? DO YOU-----
Vera: *suddendly puts a finger over his lips, silencing him completely* acid..... a no would have been enough. *enbraces him in a hug*
Acid: !!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:36:36 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 24, 2008, 10:25:01 PM
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 2:55:29 AM

Vera: trust him on that one. i've seen it before, and it's not pleasant.
Me:...maybe...... a controlled environment?
Acid+Vera+everyone else: ???
Me: put him in a room with some sort of target!! he can release his control of that part of himself and see what happens.
Acid: .....are you out of you goddamn mind??? thats pure insanity!!!!
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: ......chao. lets see, what places hold the most memories for him?
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 11:08:25 AM
mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 11:58:57 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 2:29:05 PM

*the alleyway is dark, and gives you a depressing feeling. It is also unnaturally cold. Where Eclipse stayed during his childhood, blood has splattered, and dried, neglected of any rain that may have come over the years, for a roof over it blocked any water from washing away the hedgebat's painful memories. There are broken glass shards that were never cleaned*
me: *a shiver is sent down my spine*
meanwhile
Rosette: it will help you vent your needs... please, Acid, just try...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 25, 2008, 10:24:22 PM

Aria: Professionals do. You don't want amatuers, aka us, trying it on our own. And we don't...
Me: *Raises eyebrows* We don't?
Aria: We are not asking Cantible. We are not... She's Eggman's neice, and if you remember, the last time we talked with her, we ended up running away with our tails between our legs!!
Me: So??
Aria: Ack!!
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 2:49:08 AM

Acid: .......fine. but if i hurt anyone, i blame you.
Vera: you wont. we wont be in the same room.
Lightning: i know the perfect place. follow me pleez!
Twilight: wait, what about......?
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: .......ECLIPSE!!! are you here???
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 26, 2008, 5:02:43 AM
mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 8:52:59 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:08:35 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:12:17 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:20:11 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:30:08 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:34:25 PM

Ryu: GGGGRRRARGH!!! *is overwhelmed by the sheer number of attacks coming at her, and cant hold her form, she reverts to her original appearance* agh.... *falls to her knees*
Mikenno: *stands over her* not so high and mighty NOW are ya, ryu? *grins*
Ryu: *looks up at him* grrrrr.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:36:59 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:45:59 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:47:34 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:52:09 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:55:15 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:57:52 PM
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:58:58 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 16, 2008, 8:15:21 PM
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 2:36:32 AM

Me: so she couldnt take his soul..........
Mikenno: exactly.
Lightning: *his stripes return to their normal color* fugue's right. we can let our guard down yet...... come on, lets head back to HQ......
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:32:21 AM
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:37:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 9:54:29 AM
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:02:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:09:00 AM
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:26:50 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!!
Neo: *is pacing anxiously just outside the base* they shoulde be back by now.....
Mikenno: NEO!
Neo: huh? *looks up at mikenno who is carrying eclipse* whoa, mikki? what in the name of---
Mikenno: no time. medical room. NOW.
Neo: *nods and runs into the base, closely followed by mikenno*
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:31:19 AM

Rosette: a NEW host..? But... doesn't he get one every CENTURY?
Me: not this century. This century is filled with so much hate, war, discrimination, and other problems like that, that Condemned can stay here as long as he wants. It's like his own all-you-can-eat buffet.
mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:38:20 AM

*they approach the base*
Manny: *runs out of the base right up to lightning* lightning, sir, neo wanted me to tell you that the black and white hedgehog is in medical room umm.... *thinks* OH! D-13!! this way! *runs back into base*
Twilight: come on. *runs in after him*
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:47:58 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 17, 2008, 10:56:40 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 11:06:09 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 17, 2008, 10:24:43 PM
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:26:53 AM

Scorch: b-but.... why?
Twilight: dude, your arm is bleeding.
Scorch: oh. ow. *goes to the room down the hallway*
Manny: right here! *points to a door marked "critical"* hes not doin' too good......
Lightning: thanks manny.
Manny: no problem, sir!
Lightning: *knocks on the door once, and it is opened from the inside* .....come on. *walks into the room*
*twilight, fria, acid, and vera follow*
Neo: hey guys....... *looks towards a hospital bed, where eclipse is. he has a heart monitor and an IV*
Mikenno: *looks at the others with obvious sadness in his eyes, he knows there is no way to change this* hes not going to last much longer.........
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 18, 2008, 4:29:17 AM

Me: *Looks down at him stoically* Is this to be the end then? *The words are quiet, echoing slightly in the room. Fugue herself looks uncomfortable. She is reminded eerily of her grandfather's deathbed scene, and it draws unpleasant memories to mind.*
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 8:49:09 AM

Heart Moniter: *slows down*
Rosette: oh god!!!! *sobs*
Me: Condemned will free himself tomorrow. Tomorrow. We will find Lupe on Emerald Street in Greenhill City. If we hurry, we will get to him right before he's possessed... not now, though. Tommorrow. Now we stay with our harmed friends.
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:19:03 AM

Lightning: *stares blankly at eclipse's deathbed* .....
Mikenno: *an unforseen event occurs, he closes his eyes, and begins to weep*
Me: m-mikki.....? oh, mikki..... *goes over to him and embraces him in a tight hug*
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:23:56 AM

Eclipse: hff... hff... hff... *slowly opens his eyes* ow...
Rosette: omg look!
Eclipse: how long... hff... was i out...? Where's... hff... Ryu?
Me: she's been sent back.
Eclipse: *eyes fall upon Mikenno* oh god... hff... is he...?
Me: no.
Eclipse: Mikenno... I'm glad... hff... you're back...
mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:29:15 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:36:30 AM

Me: you talk funny.
Eclipse: i'm like like... hff... a fish out of... hff... water... *glares at me*
Me: 'love you too, man.
Eclipse: hff... what's... hff... happening...?
Me:... to you? I'd rather not talk about it... you just sleep...
Eclipse: I'm afraid... hff... if i sleep... hff... I won't wake up again...
Me: are you tired, though?
Eclipse: *weakly* very.
mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:20:26 AM

Me: he's never felt this much grief since becoming a demon...... its too much for him.....
Twilight: *is trying to supress tears, but is failing*
Lightning: *shakes his head in disbelief* *thinking* this cant be happening.......
Neo: *he bows his head, also trying to supress tears*
Fria: *does something highly unprecedented. she sighs audibly and begins to sing*
Spend all your time waiting for that second chance
For the break that will make it ok
There's always some reason to feel not good enough
Me: *still hugging mikenno tightly, she joins*
Mikenno: *is still unable to speak, but shakily hums the melody*
And it's hard at the end of the day
I need some distraction, oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins
They may be empty and weightless, and maybe
I'll find some peace tonight
Twilight: *manages not to cry and joins in*
In the arms of an Angel, fly away from here
From this dark, cold hotel room, and the endlessness that you fear
You are pulled from the wreckage of your silent reverie
You're in the arms of an Angel; may you find some comfort here
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 8:50:18 AM

Me: oh. You still live in this picture... but for how long?
Eclipse: *annoyed* as long... hff... as i want... I don't want... hff... to leave my... hff... friends...
Me: i know... *holds his hand and rubs it with my thumb*
Eclipse: I won't... hff... leave you... all...
Heart moniter: *slows down even more to a tiny bump in the line every five seconds*
Eclipse: ... not now... please... hff... not now...
Rosette: oh god... no... no...
Eclipse: ... i... hff... i can't do it...
Me: Eclipse?
Eclipse: i see the reaper... *finally closes his eyes, and just lays there*
Heart Moniter: *loses all bumps, and emits the long, always-dreaded "eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...." noise*
Rosette: *tears falls down her cheeks*
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:34:54 AM

Me: *desperately shakes her head at critic, breathing heavily with fear, her claws slide out* *thinking* dont do it critic... its not worth it....
Scorch: *grins* i'll only pay if ya git ovah here!!! *hands are covered in flames, and he takes a fighting stance*
Twilight: i have to do something!! *tries to get up, but is still too weak to stand*
Lightning: whoa, there, twilly! you're not all healed up yet!
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:46:05 AM

Condemned: NRAAAARRRGH!!! *charges at Scorch, ready to strangly his scrawny little neck...*
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:51:23 AM

Fria: *rolls eyes* (that boy's gonna get himself killed......)
Mikenno: @#$%!!! *duck in time to miss the bullets, but is hit directly in the FACE by the potato* AAGH! WTF??? *grabs teh potato and crushes it in his claws* allright, thats IT! *turns back to mish and raises his claws, ready to stab her*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 13, 2008, 11:38:26 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 12:10:35 PM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 6:19:55 AM

Mikenno: grrrr... RARRG! *flips around and claws at aria, trying ti get her off* let me go you little brat!!!
Scorch: AAGH! *clutches his arm* jez.... ya really did get me....
Fria: (okay, intervention time.) *runs up to scorch and puts a hand on his arm, freezing the wound so it wouldnt bleed. then she jumps in between scorch and condemned* (okay you little a--hole, BRING IT ON!!)
Daemontwilight: okay, thats IT!! *reverts no normal form and joins scorch and fria against condemned* NO ONE hurts my big brother and gets away with it!!!!
Lightning: 8sigh* you cant keep that one still for long..... HOLY S---!!! *has to leap out of the way to avoid a shadow rising out of the ground* what the hell??
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 6:46:28 AM

Condemned: you think you all can defeat ME?? HAHAHAHA!!! I've been supressed much too long by that little b******, Eclipse... I'm ready for some more killing practice... *goes after Twilight, and sends his fangs deep within her shoulder, breaking it, then hops back, away from them, thinking of his next move*
Me: damnit!!! WE CAN'T HANDLE TWO DEAMONS!!
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:04:42 AM

Ryu: heheheheheh........... *takes the outline of a dragon, looks sorta like a heartless, but a dragon, with big black torn-looking wings and giant claws. the mouth isnt defined, and her eyes are closed* prepare to meet your fate, mobians. i'll meet you all in hell!! *her eyes open, they are blood-red pupilless spheres*
Mikenno: *manages to shake aria off and flies down to ryu's side, grinning toothily*
Lightning: so you just made him your slave. thats really low, ya know??
Ryu: *innocently* i'm not doing anything. he is consciously doing this. look at his arm. the mark isnt glowing.
Me: ....its true. it's all him.......
Mikenno: *stares hungrily at mish* you know, i still wanna have a taste of hedgefox..........
Me: *holds the wrench out in front of her, scared for her life. her claws slide out again*
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:12:08 AM

Condemned: *turns to Ryu and Mikenno* What?! Why would that weak demon do that? Has he finally found the truth?
Me: don't turn your back on your enemies, Condemned.
Condemned: ah. So true, Critic. Heheheh... here's something cute... *lets Eclipse come back, but Eclipse's eyes are still pure red, so he's limited to what he can do*
Eclipse: AGH!!! W-what's going on???? G-guys... i didn't know he would do this... i... GODDAMNIT IT FEELS LIKE MY HEAD IS ON FIRE!!! *clutches his head with both hands*
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:55:29 AM

Mikenno: *is still staring hungrily at mish*
Me: *cant help but stare into mikenno's eyes, and seeing that her friend isnt there, she trembles in fear, clutching the wrench tightly* ehh........
Twilight: eclipse!!! you're still in there!
Scorch: what the hell, man! ya gotta fight that thing! dont let condemned use you! you're stronger than him. fight him!
??: hey, leave some of that fighting for us!!
Lightning: ??? *turns around to the source of the voice, and gunshots come from the spot, heading towards mikenno and ryu*
Mikenno: *sidesteps the bullets, glancing back at mish*
Ryu: *leaps into the air, avoiding the bullets*
Fria: *grins* well it took ya long enough!!!
*Vera walks out of the shadows holding two smoking guns in her hands, and acid is standing next to her, a grin on his face and a chaos emerald in his hand.*
Vera: *blows the smoke away, then smiles* what did i miss?
Acid: yo, lightning! catch! *tosses a black box towards him* talon told me to give ya that.
Lightning: *looks at the box carefully, then grins* heheh. my thanks to talon.
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:00:21 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:17:30 AM

Twilight: we know you're there, mikki, you have to fight it!!!!
Ryu: he has no choice! as long as i remain in my true form, i will have total control over him!!!!
Lightning: then we'll just have to get ya out of your true form, then! *grasps the box tightly, and electricity crackles around it* thank god for talon's volt boxes.... *starts draining power out of the box, and his stripes start glowing*
Ryu: hahahaaa!!! your attept will be futile, mutt.
*the three wolfidnas growl*
Acid: *looks at mikenno, who is staring at mish again, then at mish, then back again* *whispers to critic* i know that look..........
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:44:29 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:52:31 AM

Vera: *aims a gun at condemned* oh nuthin' much. just the fact that we're here, murderer. *glares at him through narrowed eyes, never forgetting what he did*
Mikenno: *stares at mish*
Me: mikenno, stop that..... please.......
Mikenno: *grins, not looking away* why should i?
Me: please, mikki, just dont.......
Mikenno: *stares some more*
Lightning: *is still draining power out of the box, and his stripes glow brighter, brighter......*
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:56:17 AM
mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 9:26:49 AM

Mikenno: *still staring at mish* i hear you.........
Me: *takes a step back*
Mikenno: *takes a step forward*
Me: *steps back again*
Mikenno: *step forward again*
Ryu: patience, mikenno, you'll get your chance......
Mikenno: *whimpers in disagreement, but steps back to join ryu, still staring at mish* grr...
Scorch: *to critic and acid* ya know... that kinda reminds me of that one book twilight.... ya know the one with the vampires and stuff. you know how vampires were always drawn to bella's scent? thought she was the nicest-smellin' thing ever? maybe mikenno feels the same way, sorta.....
Fria: (you know.... thats not such an outlandish conclusion..........)
Vera: *still holding the gun up* oh, yeah, like i'd go, "oh, its ok condemned, you just killed me. i dont mind." pfft. as if. murder is unforgivable, condemned, and you know it.
TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 12:16:02 PM

Me: i leeerrrrv that book... OMIGOSH! Then Mikenno has a taste for artists! DAMNIT!!! MIKENNO!!!! I REALLY LIKE THE OTHER YOU BETTER!!! YOU REMIND ME TOO MUCH OF CONDEMNED RIGHT NOW!!!!!
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:25:45 AM

Mikenno: *grins at critic* then i must be doing something right then. *licks his lips* i'll have you for dessert, maybe........ *grins*
Me: ohhhhhhhhh lord...... *is too scared to look away from mikenno, who has resumed staring at her*
Twilight: this is not good. *looks around* hey, anyone seen lightning?
Ryu: *laughs* HA! he probably abandoned you in f---- ARGH!!! *gets knocked over by a whizzing blue ball of electricity and does a total faceplant* WHAT IN THE NAME OF------???
Lightning: *gets out of his electrical spinball, stripes glowing a bright electric blue* HECK YEAH! OWNAGE!!! run away? pffft. as IF!
Twilight: *laughs, then says to herself* thats my lightning....
Acid: *smiling* is he always like that?
Twilight: *sighs* yes he is, acid, yes he is........
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:19:14 AM
mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:21:18 AM

Mikenno: *ducks, completely avoiding the ice cream*
Ryu: *gets hit in the face by the ice cream* HEYY!!!! *glares at mikenno* grrrr.....
Mikenno: pfffft......... *is trying to hold back a laugh*
Twilight: well, he still has his personality XD
Me: *still not looking away from mikki* umm... critic? what does condemned mean by breathing issues??
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:56:11 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 3:04:31 AM

Mikenno:*looks at eclipse when he coughs and blinks slowly*
Ryu: well, thats one problem down. *grins* do what you will with the hedgefox.
Mikenno: *his grin slowly gets wider, and he turns to mish* diiiinner..........
Me: O.O oh god..... *takes a step back* help......
Twilight: mikki, dont!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 8:40:22 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 8:53:24 AM

Me: *eyes widen, and i hold my wrench up in defense* d-dont come any closer!!!!
Mikenno: *laughs once* sorry mish, but i havent had a decent meal in centuries..... *stares her down*
Me: !!!!!! *is totally freaking out, then calms down and stares back at mikenno* fine. if im gonna go down, im goin' down fighting.
Mikenno: a decent answer. *grins widely*
*both of them just stand there, staring at each other, waiting to see who would move first.......... then:*
Mikenno: *leaps into the air and dives down towards mish claws-first, like a hawk catching prey*
Me: *holds the wrench in front of her and leaps up to meet him. she comes off worst*
Mikenno: *barrels straight into mish, driving her to the ground. before she can even scream for help, he bites into her throat*
*everyone else, even ryu, watches in stunned silence*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 9:16:12 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 9:48:11 AM

Ryu: *grins* *to herself* thats my boy.......
Mikenno: *snorts and retunrs to mish, draining the blood out of her body like a vampire*
Twilight: *staring, stunned* he.... he didnt.........
Lightning: he did...............
Mikenno: *slurps, then gets up, licking his lips* ahhh.... that was good............ *returns to ryu's side, teeth still covered in blood*
Ryu: *puts a hand on his head as if he was an obedient dog* nice job mikenno. you have your rank back.
Mikenno: well, thanks, ryu, buti dont think i NEED THAT!!! *attacks her*
Ryu: what in the name of---??? *is knocked over by mikenno*
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 9:55:43 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:00:10 AM

Aria: *Was knocked unconscious*
Fugue: *Has been staring around in confusion for a little bit, but goes into shock after Mikkenno bites Mish. The next words come out hurt… lost, like a young child's((Which she is, in demon terms))* Mikenno… why?
------
Mikenno: JUST SHUT UP AND HELP ME KILL HER!!!! *is trying to claw at ryu, but gets blasted off by a surge of black flames*
Ryu: FOOL!!! you had your post secured!!! why this sudden change of heart?
Twilight: *follows critic to mish and puts a hand on her shoulder, after a second or so, she lowers her head* ....... she's dead.
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 10:06:17 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:28:48 AM

Twilight: ........ *stands up* im helping mikki. *goes daemon*
Lightning: but how can you help him after what he did????
Twilight: .... i have a feeling he has a plan....... *dashes off to join mikenno against ryu*
Mikenno: heh. glad to see ya joinin' up.
Twilight: mikki, i have NO idea what you're doin, but whatever it is, it better be good!!!!
Lightning: .....................
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 11:51:03 AM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:11:00 PM

Twilight: HELL no. *jumps in front of the blast and counters with a huge waterblast. it all explodes in a big cloud of steam.* aghhh!! i HATE steam! *backs out of teh steam cloud*
Mikenno: got it. *flaps his wings hard and blows the steam cloud towards ryu*
Ryu: *is in teh steam cloud* grrr.... you clever little fiends...
Lightning: im just.... confused..... if mikenno was planning to rebel, why did he.... *words get caught in his throat* kill mish?
???: kill? huh?
*everyone's heads turn at once*
Me: *seems perfectly fine, except for tiny pricks in her neck that are still bleeding* ...what? *grins* ya didnt think mikki REALLY killed me, now didja? ^^
Everyone else: O.O????
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:41:53 PM
mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:48:52 PM

Twilight: estimated time of defeat, mikki?
Mikenno: if we can get lightning and a few others in here, not long. GUYS?
Lightning: ......... ok, now my head hurts.... *holds his head* owwww... im gonna need a tylenol... fine i'll go. *stripes glow a freakishly bright blue, and he runs over to join the fight*
Me: rosette? critic? wanna join the fight? im too freaked right now to fight...ehh.... i think im just gonna fall over any second now....
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:58:06 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 16, 2008, 9:55:49 AM

Aria: *Was knocked unconscious*
Me: *Has been staring around in confusion for a little bit, but goes into shock after Mikkenno bites Mish. The next words come out hurt… lost, like a young child's((Which she is, in demon terms))* Mikenno… why?
mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 6:13:17 AM

DaemonTwilight: *double voice* well, mikenno? are you going to fight us or not?
Mikenno: .......... grrrr...... *leaps into the air and tried to dive at her back*
DaemonTwilight: *flips around at lightning-fast speeds and smacks him away with one paw*
Lightning: whoa. thats the same move she used on condemned in the base......
Mikenno: *falls to the floor with a thud* ow. nice shot.... *gets up*
Daemontwilight: *double voice* did you think that was nice? you have seen nothing yet...... *her colors waver again, and she becomes mostly ice-blue* heheheh.... *her front paws become covered in ice and the air around her is suddendly very cold*
Mikenno: *thinking* whats is she DOING?? *looks around, and makes eye-contact with fria*
Fria: *starestare* (what?)
Mikenno: *starestare, is conveying a message*
Fria: *stares, then nods* (i gotcha.)
Scorch: *whispers to critic and rosette* do you think i should attack ryu? both of us use fire... maybe i could distract her for a while......
Ryu: *thinking* that girl Twilight has more power than i thought......... she really IS a Daemon...... *grins* she might be useful........
TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 8:45:57 AM
mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 10:27:08 AM

Daemontwilight: *rears up on her back legs and slams her front paws onto the ground. giant ice spikes shoot out of the ground towards mikenno*
Mikenno: @#$%!!!! *leaps into the air, dodging the ice spikes*
daemontwilight: grrr..... *colors change again, this time to mostly crimson red. smoke comes out of her mouth and her paws become covered in bright flames* *double voice* dodge THIS! *breathes a wide stream of flames towards mikenno*
Mikenno: AAGH!!! *lands and shields himself with his wings, which are then burned*
Daemontwilight: *colors return to normal and she stumbles a bit* agh... that was fuuun.......
Mikenno: are you kidding!!! you BURNED ME!!
DaemonTwilight: huh? *notces mikki's burned wings* AAAH!!! FIRA, YOU RETARD!!! *slaps herself across the face*
Ryu: *thinking* so she still doesnt have full control.......... hmmm........
TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 1:36:44 PM

Me: *whispering to Mish* Oh. Eclipse is being an idiot again. Check it out, you can see him trying to sneak up on a DEMON.... heh.... he's gonna get hurt....
mechadragon13 on September 8, 2008, 10:51:29 AM

Mikenno: *ear twitch* *thinking* Ryu's hurting eclipse..... and i cant do anything about it!! WHOA! *ducks to avoid a paw swipe from twilly* JEEZ TWILIGHT, RIP MY FREAKING HEAD OFF!!!!
Daemontwilight: sorry mikki, but i have to!! *tries to swipe again, but misses*
Mikenno: *thinking* grrrr.... fira burned my wings... i cant fly! *looks at fria*
Fria: *nods, then goes to over to mish, fugue, critic and rosette are* (mikenno wants me to tell you why he's doing what he's doing. do you want to hear it?)
TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 11:13:57 AM
mechadragon13 on September 8, 2008, 11:19:29 AM

Me: O.O thats why.... he's rather kill us and let us spend the afterlife in a good place than have ryu kill us and have us suffer...........
Ryu: i see that. *puts a hand on his forehead* i know everything about you. everything. and i think i know an excellent place for you....... *puts her hand on his shoulder*
Me: OMFG STOP HER!!! SHE'S GONNA BRAND HIM!!!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 8, 2008, 8:24:21 PM
mechadragon13 on September 9, 2008, 6:38:05 AM

Critic: OMIGAWD!!!!!
Rosette: *freaks out, and fumbles around for her gun*
Eclipse: SHE'S GONNA - ACK! - SHE'S GONNA WHAT????
Me: *takes out the wrench* she's gonna do the same thing she did to mikki!! *runs towards ryu, wrench in hand*
Ryu: mikki?
Mikenno: RRRHGH!!! *leaps in front of mish, blocking her path and causing her to fall backwards*
Me: EEP! *holds wrench in front of her as a shled and tries to scramble back*
Mikenno: *raises a hand as if to slash her*
DaemonTwilight: RAAAAAARGH!!!! *crashes head-first into mikenno, knocking him sideways*
Ryu: hmph. *faces eclipse again, and puts a single claw on his shoulder* this will only hurt a little bit. *stabs her claw into his arm and starts scratching in the same symbol on mikenno's shoulder*
Me: STOP HER!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 9:35:22 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 9, 2008, 11:20:08 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 2:08:29 AM

DaemonTwilight: grrrrr..... *fur turns red* not for long...... rrrrrrrrrrrrrrAGH!! *charges right through the wall of fire, dissipating it, then charges straight at ryu* LET HIM GO!!!
Mikenno: AGH!! *gets in front of twilight and grabs her snout* stay. *he flips her over onto her back*
DaemonTwilight: *yelps loudly*
Ryu: heheheheh........
Me: STOP HER!! *throws her wrench at ryu*
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 8:51:56 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 10:41:46 AM

Mikenno: *glances back and sees what ryu's doing* *thinking* damn, i feel horrible right now...... grrrr.... i gotta do something---WHOA!! *has to jump up from a tail-swipe from twilight*
Daemontwilight: RAAAA!!! *stands up*
Me: *seriously freaking out* WE GOTTA FREAKIN' DO SOMETHING!!!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 10, 2008, 10:56:58 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 11:28:27 AM

Me: O.O F***!!! I KNOW WHAT SHE's DOING!!! GET OUTTA THERE!!!
Ryu: *suddendly melts into the ground, leaving aria fugue and eclipse a few inches away from the armed bomb*
DaemonTwilight: NO!!! *bashes into the three of them to knock them away, but is then caught in the full force of the bomb* ARGHHH!!
Lightning: TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:41:03 AM
mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 11:47:22 AM

Lightning: *is already at twilight's side* shhh..... dont overexert yourself twilly........
Ryu: *reappears a little ways off* awww, how sweet. *grins* how i LOVE chaos.
Me: grrrr.... i hate you, ryu. you're the only one i hate.
Mikenno: *would be beating himself against a wall if it wasnt for ryu's hold on him* grrrr......
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:59:04 AM

Me: you got him angry.
Eclipse: you will PAY for your evil...
Me: you shouldn't have done that.
Eclipse: *suddenly uses Condemned claws to pierce his skull, and rip out something small, square, and drenched in blood. He cries out in pain at first, and blood gushes from his head, but suddenly, his groans and whimpers siece, and his eyes slowly turn red*
Me: he's LETTING Condemned take full control.... he's doing the one thing he promised Sonic he would never again do... letting his anger control him... and he's willing to endure major brain damage in order to do so... that idiot.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 10, 2008, 8:15:32 PM

Aria: Is that even a word?? *Moving towards Ryu*
Me: *Snaps* Whatever. The point is, I would have been fine. Aria would have been fine, we've had worse things go off in our faces. Why'd you have to let your stupid hero complex take over… gah! *turns to Eclipse* Don't you dare do that… We have enough people with damaging Hero Complexes here!
Aria: *Under her breathe* Including you… *Is close to Ryu now*
mechadragon13 on September 11, 2008, 3:10:55 AM

Mikenno: *horrified* eclipse, NO!
Ryu: *grin* finally......... *is surrounded by black flames* a worthy opponent. prepare to face my true power. RAAAH!!! *the flames rise up in an inmense column, and ryu's outline becomes distorted*
Mikenno: GET OUT OF HERE NOW!!! GO! NOW----- ARGGGHHH!! *falls to the ground clutching his shoulder* aggh.... LEAVE! or we will all die!!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 1:02:20 PM

Me: he's out of practice. We're doomed.
Rosette: everything's going wrong...
Eclipse: *tenticals wrap around his body, and turn him into Condemned* no... NO!!!..... n...
Condemned: freedom.... YES!!! *looks at Ryu* bah. Tis another demon... this will be fun... *stretches his claws out bit*
Me: aaaaaand he's gone.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 12, 2008, 10:11:12 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 7:24:37 AM

Lightning: *angrily* im not scared of that demon!
Mikenno: im not...talking... about her......
Me: O.O f***.
Ryu: *insane monstrous roar* RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!! *the flaming column suddendly fizzles out, and ryu is gone*
Scorch: where the hell--- WHOA!! *jumps back as a black shadow seems to leap out of the ground under him* WHAT THE HELL???
Mikenno: *suddendly writhes in pain, the red flame mark burning intensly* RUN!!!!!
Me: and so it starts.... the beginning of the end..... for one side or the other.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 7:28:25 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 7:37:35 AM

Fria: *is frantically searching the ground for ryu* (SHES IN THE GROUND!!!)
everyone else: *is watching the ground carefully*
Me: mikki?? *runs over to mikki and tries to comfort him* stay with us, mikki, dont let her take ya over like that.... come on mikki, stay with me!
Mikenno: *is writhing in pain, the suddendly stops and stares up at mish. his eyes are bloodshot* i told you to run. *suddendly jumps up at mish*
Me: S***!!! *cant dodge fast enough and is pinned down by mikenno*
*an evil laugh is heard emanating from the ground*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 13, 2008, 7:42:02 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:00:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:04:21 AM
mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:14:31 AM

Mikenno: *still pinning mish down, he looks up at critic* watch out for that trench there. *a big trench suddendly appears out of nowhere in front of critic, and mikenno grins*
Me: walk through it, critic. you wont fall. just walk----
Mikenno: *puts a hand over mish's mouth, silencing her* shut it.
Scorch: *gets the wind knocked out of him* RAAGH!! grrrrr.... *puts both hands on condemned's leg and sets them on fire, burning his leg*
Twilight: what the hell is going on lightning?? *is almost fully healed by the daemons*
Lightning: umm... you dont wanna know.......
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:25:38 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 11:23:36 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:46:52 AM

Fang: so he was pretty much her servant?
Me: correct. he did all the dirty work. but after a long while, he got tired of it. he left. he told me that the pain was so extreme it was almost unbearable. but he made it out of hell into our world, thus attaining the status of "fiend" or escaped demon.
Meanwhile:
Mikenno: *eyes narrow* what are you thinking.......?
Ryu: heheheheheh.......... your friends are coming. i want you to fight them. as if they were your enemies.
Mikenno: no. i wont. i refuse to---AGH!!! *falls to his knees again, holding his shoulder*
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 12:00:08 PM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 12:18:11 PM

Twilight: we cant let this Ryu take our friend away just like that!!
Me: thats why we're flying over there. to get mikki back.
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: augh!!! *the red flame on his shoulder burns for a bit, then fades* uuurgh......... *glares up at ryu* have i ever told you how much i hate you?
Ryu: yeah, about three times today. *grins* so.... *puts her still-hooded face right in front of his* you'll do that for me will you?
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 1:29:59 PM
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:09:46 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!
Ryu: *laughs* looks like we have some company come out here hybrids!
Mikenno: *ear twitches, then he shakes his head* you two are idiots......
*fria and Scorch emerge frm their hiding place*
Scorch: we heard everything ryu. let mikenno go! you're outnumbered!!
Fria: *crosses her arms and nods* (the rest of HN is coming. you have no chance.)
Ryu: *grins* thats where you're wrong, Fria.
Fria: *ear twitches at the sound of her name and she narrows her eyes* (how do you know my name, demon?)
Ryu: i know everything about you, fria. i know your ability is ice, and your weakness is fire. I also know scorch can control fire and is weak against ice.
Scorch: whoa there. how do you......?
Me: Mikenno!!! *runs into the clearing, wrench in hand* dont worry buddy we came for ya!
*everyone else follows*
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 2:15:35 AM
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:21:53 AM

Mikenno: *quietly* let me go, guys. i dont want you get hurt.....
Ryu: awwww, isnt that cute. tring to portect your friends, eh Mikki?
Lightning: we're not leaving you Mikenno. not in a million years! *charges up power so that his stripes glow*
Ryu: you must be lightning. leader of Hybrid Nation. i must say, i expected you to be a wee bit, older......
Lightning: heh. ryu, huh? thought you'd be taller. oh well.
Me: pwn.
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 2:24:38 AM
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:41:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 2:53:36 AM

Rosette: oh god... this is going to end up with someone getting hurt...
Me: The chip in Eclipse's head is still there.... if he gets angry enough, there's no stopping him from killing Ryu - if that's possible...
Eclipse/Condemned: NRRAAAARRRGH!!!!
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:57:51 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 3:05:41 AM
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 3:10:51 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 3:23:56 AM

Me: little known to people who look at Condemned at first glance, his wings are actually razor sharp. If he flies past you, and hits you with his wings, you WILL get sliced.
Rosette: what does THAT have to do with anything???
Me: um.... it's sport commentary?
Rosette: THIS ISN'T A GAME!!!
Sonic and Shadow: *look at each other*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 4:57:49 AM

Ryu: *releases the unfinished fireball towards the ground, causing some of the others to have to leap back a bit* grr... annoying demekarr. *eyes glow red, and her claws grow three times their original size. she speeds towards condemned and slashes one of his wings*
Mikenno: *stands and runs over to the others* she's too busy to watch me. do we have a plan?
Twilight: umm.. we were hoping you knew what to do, mikki...
Mikenno: *sad head hang* she block my vision. im powerless around her.
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 6:44:16 AM

Condemned: RAAAAARRRGH!!! *wing gets slices off. It's broken contents fall to the ground. Eclipse struggles to keep in the air, but falls. His wing cannot regenerate in time* I HATE FLYIIIIIING - *crash. He lands on his own razor sharp wing, and is impaled through the chest, arms, and legs* damn it.
Rosette: OMIGOSH!!!!!!!!! *runs over to him* are you alright????
Condemned: *grunts a bit when he tries to move* ow. Yeah, i guess. It's just a little cut. I'll get her...
Black Knight: it's only a flesh wound!
Rosette: JUST A CUT???? ARE YOU KIDDING ME???!!!!!!
Condemned: hey. I'll get better. i ALWAYS get better. *gets up, now dripping in his blood* ok, you cheap demon SCUM... LET'S SEE WHAT YOU GOT ON THE GROUND! *his wing folds back up and turns into his spike again. The other spike tarts to regenerate*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 8:00:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 8:07:48 AM
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 8:21:20 AM

Mikenno: i cant!
Lightning: why cant you fight her??
Mikenno: you'll see....... *turns to his demon form and jumps into the air, then immediately dives down towards ryu, claws first*
Ryu: no ya dont. *holds one hand out towards him, and the red flame burns on his shoulder. one of his wings suddendly folds in, and he falls to the ground with a heavy thump*
Mikenno: agh...... thats why........
Ryu: i told you not to get involved, dear mikki. *turns back to eclipse, her hands become covered in black flames* let's see how you deal with this one.... *puts her hands together and then brings them apart, creating what looks like a small wyvern out of the flame. she launches it up in the air, her hands still covered in flames, and the dragon-flame grows, until it is twice eclipse's size* heheheh... dodge THIS, big guy. *aims both her hands towards eclipse, the dragon flame immediatelly dives down to where he is, jaws agape and wings open fully*
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 9:39:16 AM

Condemned: I've let them suffer enough... *takes the hit, then falls onto his hands and knees, panting like a dog, and wincing. He is now terribly burnt and weak. Other elements wouldn't be a problem, but Condemned can't take fire, and sonics, plus he was already hurt from impalement*
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 9:59:55 AM

Mikenno: *slowly gets up* ryu... dont........
Ryu: *turns her head to mikenno* oh? does dear mikki have something to add?
Mikenno: dont kill him... please.
Ryu: *thinks about it* well......... ok. just because you asked nicely. ^^
Mikenno: *breathes a sigh of relief*
Ryu: i'll let you kill him.
*everyone turns to ryu wide-eyed*
Mikenno: ARE YOU INSANE!? I WONT KILL HIM!!! hurt me all you want, but i wont touch him!!!
Ryu: oh, i'm not giving you any options, mikenno. *stares right into his eyes, as if conveying a mental message*
Mikenno: *the mark on his shoulder glows brightly, but doesnt seem to hurt him. instead, his eyes widen, and he stares at ryu in disbelief. then, he hangs his head, closes his eyes, and turns to the others. a tear rolls down his face* i'm sorry, guys...... i hope you'll forgive me. *turns to his full demon form and looks around the group, then, leaps towards eclipse, claws-first*
Me: NO!!!
Mikenno: *is about to sink his claws into eclipse when something barrels into his side, knocking him away* rrrg.... *he snarls at eclipse's defender*
DaemonTwilight: i hope you'll forgive me mikki..... RAAAR!!! *pounces towards mikenno, claws unsheathed*
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 10:12:12 AM

Rosette: Twilly!!! Be careful!
Me: I can't believe he seriously did that... and then Mikenno... and Twilight.... wooooooaaaaaaah....
Rosette: *can't help but weakly giggle* don't break, Critic...
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 10:20:35 AM

Lightning: grrr.... i just cant stand here and do NOTHING!!
Scorch: you have to!! look at what happened to eclipse! how do you think twilight would feel if you ended up like that??
Lightning: ...........
Fria: *puts a hand on his shoulder* (twilight will be fine. you have to trust us.)
Lightning: ....okay. i trust you.
Mikenno: *ducks under twilight's attack, and stands up* i dont want you Twilight!!!
Daemontwilight: well, you're not taking eclipse, so DEAL WITH IT!! *slashes at him*
Mikenno: *barely dodges it, then counters with a slash of his own, which hits*
Daemontwilight: *now has a large slash mark across her face* ARRGH!!! *backs away, a paw over her face, eyes closed* grrrrrr.....
Mikenno: *looks ashamed of himself, then composes himself* i told you. i dont want you.
Daemontwilight: *puts her blood-covered paw back on the ground* sorry to disappoint you, mikki. *crouches down and if she was gonna pounce, then suddendly puts her head back and* AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Mikenno: ??? *takes a few steps back, wary of her next move* *thinking* damn!! i cant read her!!
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 10:26:12 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 6, 2008, 11:15:17 AM

Me: *Glaring at Ryu. She is standing apart from the others, and away from the fight* Leave him alone!! Mikenno belongs to himself, not a half-wit like you!!
Aria: Don't egg her on… *Whispers* She's out of your league… you're only a six-tail. Maybe in a few years you could take her, when you reach nine, but…
Me: *Shrugs it off* I don't care. *eyes narrow* I won't let her treat Mikenno like this…
mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 11:21:58 AM

me: *puts a hand on fugue's shoulder* hold it. we gotta let twilly do her thing.
DaemonTwilight: *still howling, her- aqua-blue color becomes distorted, and it seems to grow darker in some places and lighter in others. Parts of her fur is turning crimson red, the other, light blue. she stops howling, and she opens her eyes. both have turned completely black, except for the irises: one has turned red, the other, almost white. there are no pupils* *grins, than speaks in an eerie double voice* Do you still want eclipse rather than us, mikenno?
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 6, 2008, 11:25:40 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 2:18:50 AM

Me: methinks they are too much into the battle to listen now.... I still wonder how Eclipse could have gone down so fast... i also wonder why he's not regenerating as fast, either... maybe Ryu seems to have some sort of affect on ALL demons.... it's odd....
Eclipse: stop... stop fighting......... please just stop.... *manages to get up, but struggles a LOT in the process. When he's on his feet again, his legs wobble, and his knees are bent*
Me: *still watching the fight* don't over-exert yourself, Eclipse.
mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 12:13:10 PM

Lightning: .........i dont get it. whats going on?? why does the badger-demon suddendly care about eclipse so much????
Mikenno: *eyes widen as if he just realized something* ........... f@#$. *turns to his demon form and busts a hole in the ceiling and flies off into the night*
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:59:34 PM

Mr. Inderretta: I actually have some stunning news that I have realized should help the hedgebat and i bond a little more...
Rosette: oh YEAH? What's that, you pompous PIG?
Mr. Inderretta: badger. Anyway, that piece of information is a secret... but I'm at the same time upset that my good pawn was taken off the chess board...
Rosette: WHAT???
Me: it means he knows Eclipse is going to die.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 30, 2008, 10:56:18 AM
mechadragon13 on August 31, 2008, 11:49:33 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:30:26 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 1, 2008, 4:08:08 AM
mechadragon13 on September 1, 2008, 11:42:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 12:07:55 PM
mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 10:47:40 AM

Everyone else: *confuzzled*
Acid: ehhhh... *gets up* oww..... what happened?
Me: *listen, listen, then smiles* you didnt. you did? no freaking way. are you joking around with me? *listens* ......you arent, arent you? *listen* medical room D? okay. i'll take him over there. *disactivates watch* ACID!!
Acid: *starts, then relaxes* ...what?
Me: come 'ere. *walks off to a different hallway*
Acid: ...okay then... *hesitantly follows*
MEANWHILE!!!!
Fang: *is searching for mikki* where in the world did he fly off to?? *looks down and sees him standing near the outskirts of town* MIKKI! *lands near him*
Mikenno: ....leave, fang.
fang: whatsa matter with you mikki? this isnt like you.
Mikenno: i have to leave.
Fang: why?
Mikenno: *turns to his demon form* you wouldnt understand.
Fang: why not??? stop treating me like a kid, mikenno.
Mikenno: i dont want you to get hurt. *suddendly slashes at the air in front of him, and a large slash appears in the air, and it grows slowly until it is a sort of diagonal portal. thw rold beyong is almost exactly like this one, but looks very bleak.*
Fang: ...mikki...?
Mikenno: leave. he's coming........
Fang: who?
Mikenno: *under his breath* ryu...........
TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 2:54:56 PM

((Ryu?))
menwhial
Rosette: what? What's going on? *follows Inderretta also*
Mr. Inderretta: *his shoes make a click-clack noice against the floor, echoing in the empty, now peacful halls of Hybrid Nation HQ* *he enters the medical room, and places Eclipse on a bed*
Me: Vera. *grin spreads across my face*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 2, 2008, 8:19:46 PM
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 8:44:40 AM

Neo: O.O you're kidding.
*a loud "no f-ing way!!" and a delighted squee are heard from down the hallway*
Me: does that answer your question? ^^
Twilight: *cringes from the high pitched squee* oww. yes.
Me: you can go over there if ya like---- *looks down the hallway and sees an orange aviwolf and a red-orange avichidna walk out of the room, if this was an anime, they'd have HUGE sweatdrops* umm.... lets give them some time XD *gets serious again* so..... has indy done anything?
Neo: we just got here. we're gonna have to wait.....
Zenith: umm, guys? has anyone seen fria?
Twilight: *looks around* scorch is gone too!!!
Me: ...crap.
MEANWHILE!!!
Fang: ryu? who da frick is ryu???
Mikenno: someone i'd rather not have you meet. go. *urgently* NOW. she's a vicious demon. she will destroy you.
Fang: i'm not gonna leave ya alone! if she's as dangerous as you say, you'll need all the help you can get!!
???: yes you will mikki...yes you will..... *malicious laugh*
Mikenno: *immediately turns back to teh portal and growls*
???: *slides smoothly out of the portal, is wearing a long hooded cloak, so she is not visible* well well well. if it isnt my little buddy mikenno...... i missed you.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:53:54 AM
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:07:57 AM

Neo: ..so...... whats gonna happen with eclipse? why do we need to strap him down?
me: like he said. you'll see. *door opens and she goes out. she comes in with a rolling heart moniter, a lenth of somewhat clear rope slung around her shoulder and a muzzle clanched in her teeth* *muffled* can fumeone grad fiss?
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:22:11 AM

Me: i really can't believe you're going through with this...
Mr. Inderretta: *straps the muzzle onto Eclipse, then ties him down to the bed. He hooks him up to the heart moniter, and turns it on, automatically making it emit a forever "eeeeeeeeeeeee...", and showing a flat line, upsetting Rosette even further*
Me: ok, what now?
Mr. Inderretta: now we give him a little "kick" to get him back up. *gives Eclipse a temporary rabies shot*
Everyone: WTF????????????????????????
Eclipse: *a quick shiver runs through his body, but suddenly, his eyes snap open. They are bloodshot*
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:32:39 AM

neo: O.O
Manny: OoO..... *leaves*
Meanwhile!!!
MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:41:08 AM

Mr. Inderretta: oh do shut up. *places Project Nocturnal on Feral*
Feral: *colors fade to a reverse color, and he becomes puppy-like, and calm. Feral still feels uncomfortable with the muzzle, though. He sneezes. It itches.*
Heart Moniter: *shows the heart beating at a pace much faster then it should be*
Mr. Inderretta: *gets out a styringe and takes a sample of blood from Eclipse/Feral* I'll have to clear out the rabies later...
Rosette: *suspicious* um... what are you doing?
Mr. Inderretta: hm? Oh! Nothing! Nothing!
Rosette: >:(
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:52:57 AM

Neo: *stops the sryinge from shattering against the ground and floats it up to mish*
Me: *grabs teh sryinge* thanks neo. *hands teh sryinge to critic* do with it what you will........
Meanwhile!!!
Mikenno: *eyes widen, then narrow angrily* you lie.
Ryu: no lie. see? *grabs his right arm*
Mikenno: hey! *at first, nothing. then, a red flame-like mark appears on his shoulder. his eyes widen in disbelief* no.....
Ryu: *grins* yes.
Fang: *stars backing into an alley* *thinking* i gotta get to HQ.....
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:59:12 AM

Me: *hands the styringe to Inderretta*
Mr. Inderretta: hey, thanks :D
Rosette: WHY DID YOU DO THAT??????
Me: because i need another villain other than Inderretta and Incogneto.
Rosette: *facepalm*
Mr. Inderretta: When Eclipse turns back to normal, i wish not he attack me, so i will leave. *does*
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:03:41 AM

*from outside the room* MIIIIISH!!! TWILLYYY!!! LIIIIIIIGHT!!
Me: O.O wtf what? *goez out of the room* fang!!! where's mikki???
Fang: *gasping for breath from flying so fast* mikki........demon.....slave......ryu.......contract........gahh......
Lightning: what? who's ryu???
Twilight: what contract???
Me: *eyes widen* RYU?! ...........f#$%. we have to get over there. NOW. CRITIIC!!! we gotta GO!!! *runs like hell to the airplane hangar, closely followed my fang, lightning and twilly*
MEANWHILE!!!
Mikenno: .....so now what? you just gonna take me back?
Ryu: *grinzz* no.. i have other plans.....
Mikenno: *wide eyez of disbelief* on=h no you wouldnt.
Ryu: *devilish grin* oh, i would..... heheheh......
Mikenno: i refuse. i wont. not in a million years! AUGH!! *falls to his knees, clutching his shoulder, the flame mark burning brightly*
Ryu: *suddendy serious* you cant disobey me without facing the consequences, mikenno. *grinz again* you have no choice.
Mikenno: *disgusted* you're sick.
TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:35:56 AM
mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 10:59:32 AM

Lightning: *hops in next to mish*
Twilight: *gets in behind lightning*
Fang: *gets in next to twilly*
Me: aria and fugue are comin' too.
MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: grrrr....
Ryu: come on, mikki..... lets see if this still works. mobian. now
Mikenno: *growls at her, but when the fire symbol burns again, he reluctantly turns back to his mobian form* i hate you.
Ryu: *grins* oh, i know you do.....
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 5, 2008, 10:03:14 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:19 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:22:04 AM
mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:27:48 AM

Me: *opens the hangar door and flies the hell outta there*
Lightning: ...i hope mikenno's ok.....
Twilight: he can take care of himself. so...
Fang: who's ryu?
Me: *cringes at the sound of the name* ehh...... it's a very interesting story....
Ryu is a Chaos Demon with extraordinary power. She's pretty high up in the Demon Ranks...... Mikenno, on the other hand, is the opposite. he has quite a lot of power, but his ranking was almost rock-bottom. Ryu took a liking to him, so she took him in, but also put her symbol on him to make sure no one would try to harm him. in reality, she was marking him as her property....
Meanwhile!!!!
Mikenno: .....so what now? you just gonna take me back? just like that?
Ryu: i have other plans.......... *malicious grin*
TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:34:55 AM

Me: it's so ironic. The fact that he's part bat, AND has the ability to fly, and yet he's terrified of flying in machines... anyway, Mish, please go on with your story.
Eclipse: what story?
mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:12:09 AM

MEANWHILE!!!!
Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:25:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:31:14 AM
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:43:36 AM

Mikenno: *is staring at eclipse then acid, his eyes barely open. the blackish-purple stuff is almost across his chest*
Me: *to herself* when it reaches his heart, it's all over....
Fang: *is silently sitting by mish*
Manny: *runs up to where mikenno, fang and mish are, and sits by mish* we can't save him, can we?
Fang: *shakes his head*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:49:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:58:28 AM

Me: *bows her head* goodbye, friend.....
Manny: *closes his eyes and sobs quietly*
Acid: *senses mikenno's passing and raises his head. he looks over to where he lies, and then..........he completely loses it* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! *his eyes turn a bright purple, and he glares at those in the room* you all will die........... HISSSSSSSS!!!
Lightning: oh no..... acid's gone berserk!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 5:02:24 AM
mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 5:14:09 AM

Fang: i wont let you hurt my friends!!!!! *bite harder*
Acid: HISSSSSSSS!!!! foolish child. *swings his tail around and prys him loose*
Lightning: *thinking hard* berserk, berserk..... how did we deal with berserk??? *lightbulb* THATS IT!!! Twilly!!
twilight: yeah?
Lightning: we need to immobilize acid!! it'll calm him down!!!
Twilight: yes, sir!! *goes daemon and jumps for acid's head*
Lightning: everyone!!! we need to get acid immobilized!! it'll stop his rampage!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:13:32 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 24, 2008, 12:37:55 AM
mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 9:56:41 AM

Lightning: that gun might work.... if it doesnt, we gotta try to hold him down.
daemontwilight: i'm on it. *leaps up on acids head and lands HARD, forcing his head to the floor*
Fang: *bites down on acids arm*
Zenith: *is trying to get acid's tail to stop moving, but it getting tosses around* this guy's strong, man!!!
Manny: hiiiiiiiYA!!! *delivers a strong kick to acid's back, causing him to fall over* who's all tough NOW????
Acid: *starts pushing himself back up with his arms, hissing argrily*
Fria: (NO YOU DONT!!) *freezes his hands to the floor*
Acid: HISSSS!!!!! *is straining to free his arms* i wont get caught like this again!!!!! *open his jaws wide and spits venom cobra-style*
Fria: (WHOA!) *dodge* (sheez.......)
Lightning: thats it guys, almost there!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:56:32 PM
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:45:44 AM

Me: his scales are rock hard, nothing can penetrate them!! rosette, if you shoot him, you wont kill him! just give him a bad bruise XD
Lightning: *sends an electric current through acid's tail*
Acid: GGGRAAGH!!!! *tries to get lightning off, but zenith's holding his tail down* grrr.... AGH!! *cries out as he feels someone bite down on his neck. he turns around* HISSSSSSSS---- *stops dead as he sees his attacker* n-n-no way........
Everyone else: *looks and freezes* ....O.O
Mikenno: *stops biting acid and looks around. then he laughs* what? didnt i SAY i couldnt be killed?
Lightning: uhh... *nervous laugh* heheh, oops!
Acid: O.O b-but... you....... *he suddedndly goes limp and his head drops to the ground*
DaemonTwilight: *gets off his head* ......... did he just........ faint???
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:16:32 AM

Me: you... you traitor.... *falls over*
Eclipse: hm. I never said i was your friend again... *hand charges up with lethal energy, and he gets ready to kill Acid*
mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:32:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:45:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 26, 2008, 1:25:44 AM
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:34:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:04:45 AM
mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:06:16 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:08:59 AM
mechadragon13 on August 27, 2008, 6:43:05 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 8:57:46 AM

Eclipse: *does not dodge the energy in time. It hits him, shocking him with, like, i billion volts of dark electricity* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *falls to the ground, twitching, and shaking as energy still pulses through his veins*
Rosette: *screaming so loud that her voice cracks* ECLIPSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: oh my god.....
Eclipse: *falls unconcious. His breathing is irregular*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 27, 2008, 10:00:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 11:26:48 AM

Rosette: *now sobbing* not again... oh god... i can't handle you dying twice...
Me: i know he was trying to kill Acid, and all.... but he WAS out friend.... we need to help him!!
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 6:34:17 AM

Mikenno: *reverts back to the mobian form and stands quietly for a moment, then turns to aria* i dont think acid will be a problem. *pointz*
Acid: *has returned to his normal self, but is still unconscious*
Mikenno: *walks over to critic* *whisperz* eclipse will not die. if that blast could have killed him, i would not have countered. *starts walking back over to acid when he suddendly freezes*
Me: umm... mikki? mikenno?? OMG what happened???
Mikenno: *suddendly smiles* heheh..... it's a surprise..... *keeps walking towards acid and sits next to him, waiting for him to wake up again*
Fang: okay, lets recap....... eclipse could possibly die, we have a dead rattlesnake in the med room, and a possibly lethal hedgehog-hybrid that could possibly kill us. what now??
Me: ..........
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:30:15 AM

Eclipse: *dying*
Me: oh well THAT sucks... fuggin heart-stopping electricity trick... gave him a heart disorder.
Rosette: O_O heart..... disorder? *breaks down sobbing again*
Me: *facepalm*
Mr. Inderretta: *comes running in the scene, then stops and stares at the after-battle. He looks full of anguish* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! NO!! NO!! NO!!! WHAT HAPPENED?????
Me: why do YOU care?
Mr. Inderretta: *completelly ignores me*
mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:39:44 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 9:28:57 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 29, 2008, 9:32:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 10:08:05 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:41:05 AM

Mikenno: acid's right..... eclipse SHOULD be scared.
Lightning: oh jeez. if mikki's saying that, then we should all be scared....
Acid: *voice echoes again* you should listen to the demon, eclipse..... heheheheh..................
*suddendly someone screams, causing a whole bunch of other people to scream*
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! what the hell???
*there's a sudden hiss...*
Mikenno: ECLIPSE!!! DUCK!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:22:45 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 18, 2008, 10:47:05 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:30:02 AM

Daemontwilight: *still seems to be looking around frantically*
Lightning: what do you see, twilly???
Daemontwilight: acid. i can see him in the dark. my senses are better in daemon form. i can see him, hear him, and scent him. he's fast.............
Acid: *echoing again* heheheheheh........
Me: *singing softly, shaking slightly*
It's a thief in the night to come and grab you
It can creep up inside you and consume you
A disease of the mind it can control you
It's too close for comfort.......
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:55:49 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:59:21 AM

*everyone takes a few steps back*
Acid: heheheh. not scared of the dark? you should be...........
Me: *still singing, still shaking*
Your mind is in disturbia
It's like the darkness is the light
And it's scaring you tonight
It ain't use to whatcha like
Disturbia..............
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:18:58 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:25:33 AM

*stunned silence*
Me: *shaking even more, her voice wavers*
Oh what the pretty lights
Your in the city of wonders
Ain't gone play nice
Watch out you might just go under
You better think twice
Make sure you follow the alter
But if you may falter be wise
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:36:04 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:50:00 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:52:04 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 19, 2008, 9:41:39 AM
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:54:58 AM

Acid: *hissssssssssss.................*
Mikenno: *his eyes widen, and he starts taking a few steps back* oh no..........
*silence, then, and unexpected noise*
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIP!!!!!
DaemonTwilight: *turns her head towards the noise* what the--- *she lets out a mix of a yelp and a gasp, and jupms back, her eyes wide. she's so freaked out, her voice cracks* umm...... guys? we have a BIG problem.
Lightning: how big????
Daemontwilight: VERY big....... bad bad bad bad bad....... *keeps backing away* mish... get the lights.......
Acid: NO! you touch that switch and you face the consequences........... *his voice is slightly different, almost like a hiss..........*
Me: O.O *is freaked out, she shuts her eyes tightly and keeps singing shakily*
when my time comes, forget the wrong that i've done, help me leave behind some reason to be missed...
Fang: I'll do it!!! *flies over everyone and goes right for the switch*
Acid: DONT TOUCH THAT!!!
Me: dont resent me, and when you're feeling empty, keep me in your memories, leave out all the rest, leave out all the rest.......
Fang: rrrrrrah!!!! *pulls the switch and all the lights come on*
*stunned silence, and a few gasps*
Acid: *is no longer just a hedgehog. he has become something similar to a rayquaza, a very large acid-green skake, with a pair of large spikes on it's head, and arms and hands with large talons. his fangs are now about half a foot long. his head was hovering over eclipse, his enormous jaws agape, but when the lights turned on, he recoiled and backed away from him* YOU IDIOTS!! I HAD HIM!!! *HISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!*
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:36:45 AM

Rosette: ACID! WTF HAPPENED TO YOU???
Me: right now, Rosette, I think he should be focusing on not getting killed by Eclipse.
Eclipse: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *shoots out short dark blasts like a machine gun*
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 5:54:23 AM

BOSS BATTLE: Serpent Acid (Hybrid Nation and Eclipse)ok, acid just turned into a giant snake, and is seriously out to get eclipse. His strenth and speed have skyrocketed, and so has his bloodlust!! so ya gotta defeat him before he gets eclipse!! make sure you avoid his fangs, even a tiny scrape can be deadly. also, watch out for his tail, which can knock you around!!
Acid: *laughs like a maniac* HAHAHAHAHAAA!!! my scales are hard as diamonds. you cannot pierce them!!!! *lunges at eclipse, jaws open wide*
Daemontwilight: OH NO YOU DONT!! *bashes head-first into acid's head, knocking him off-balance*
Acid: AGGH! *HISSSS* stupid demon. *knocks Twiight away with his tail*
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:56:47 AM
mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 7:06:31 AM

daemonTwilight: *stands up* im ok!!! *faces acid again* ACID!! cut it OUT!!!
Mikenno: this requires my intervention. *goes daemon and stands at twilly's side*
Acid: i wont stop until HE *points at eclipse with one claw* is dead!!! *faces eclipse again, and sways back and forth like a cobra being charmed, then suddendly goes for eclipse*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 20, 2008, 8:35:48 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:56:50 AM
mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 7:33:39 AM

Mikenno: no you dont!!! *slams into eclipse, knocking him away*
Manny: MIKENNO!
Mikenno: *turns in time to see acid bury his fangs in his side* AAAAGH!!!!
Acid: *picks mikenno up, then tosses him across the room* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! i told you not to get in the way. now look what you have done!!!
Mikenno: *hits the wall HARD, then falls to the ground*
Me: *is completely freaking out* MIKENNO!!!! *starts running over to him*
Fang: *picks mish up and helps her get there faster* i gotcha, mish.
Manny: oh no... did he get bitten????
Lightning: no......... *glares angrily at acid* LOOK WHAT YOU DID!!! YOU KILLED AN ANNOCENT!!!!! *eyes glow strangely, and he starts taking his gloves off* you're paying for this, Acid.
TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:38:49 AM

Eclipse: MIKENNO DIDN'T DESERVE THAT!!!!
Everyone: *looks at Eclipse, suprised*
Eclipse: HOW COULD YOU???? MIKENNO WAS ALL OF OUR FRIENDS!! HE WAS STILL MINE!!! HE WAS THE ONLY ONE I WASN'T TRULY ANGRY AT!!!! HOW COULD YOU?????????? *runs up and slams his fist against Acid's snout*
Me: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 4:47:56 AM

Lightning: *glares at critic, then his eyes return to normal, and he tugs his gloves back on* you're right. no more.
*mish and fang get over to where mikenno is lying*
Fang: *drops mish near mikenno*
Me: *practically leaps towards mikenno* MIKKI!!!! *kneels down next to him and inspects his wound*
Mikenno: *groans. he has bite marks on his sides, and the area around the two largest holes was rapidly turning dark purple. he groans again, then looks up at mish* sorry 'bout that...... i just couldnt let him get eclipse.......agh...
Me: *is starting to tear up* i know why you did it, and it was the right thing to do, but..... i cant believe you're leaving us.......
Mikenno: *looks her right in the eyes, as if he was telling her something, then glances at his wound*
Me: *looks at his wound. then my eyes widen and my mouth opens as if to say something.*
Mikenno: *stares at mish for a bit, as if to tell her to be quiet, and suddendly, he hisses in pain. the purple area had spread almost up to his arm, and across to his back*
Fang: that looks terrible....... is there anything we can do?
Me: *tears are flowing freely, but she keeps her voice even* no....... there's nothing we can do for him now...... *she lays his head against his side, and begins to sob*
*everyone who was watching from the sidelines bows their head*
Daemontwilight: *returns to her normal form and goes to lightning, resting her head against his shoulder, her eyes watering*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:14:56 AM

Me: Eclipse... please...
Eclipse: NO!!! I'M NOT BOUND BY YOU ANYMORE!!! *goes full Condemned* you will PAY for what you've done, Acid... YOU WILL PAY.
Rosette: no... NO! NOT AGAIN!!!
Eclipse: *charges at Acid, eyes intent on slaughtering him*
Me: NO MORE DEATH!!!!! STOP IT!!!!!!!
mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 6:41:33 AM

Acid: *is having a mega guilt trip* i didnt mean it..... i swear i didnt....... *eyes widen* oh no...... *realizes it's the second time he's caused a death* grr.... again... not again........ AGH!!! *starts bashing his head against the wall*
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:06:48 AM
mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:52:05 AM

Me: *small yelp*
Mikenno: *turns to mish* you ok?
Me: *nods* yeah........it's just....... i'm scared.... *shakes head, then starts singing again*
I dreamed I was missing
You were so scared
But no one would listen
Cause no one else cared
After my dreaming
I woke with this fear
What am I leaving
When I'm done here
Mikenno: *to critic* she sings to calm herself down..... she must really be scared....
mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:03:16 PM

Daemontwilight: *stops next to him* what happened, mikenno. TELL ME!
Lightning: *stops next to them, still on all fours* *in a sort of growly voice* are we too late???
Mikenno: *his eyes are wide, and he is silent for a moment. then, he nods*
Daemontwilight: oh god. what did he do???
Mikenno: everyone at the base is in danger. WE GOTTA GET BACK!!! *immediately turns around and starts a dash to the base*
daemontwilight: oh no!! *starts running after him*
Lightning: *follows, and thinks* why is the base in danger??? is inderetta attacking?? or worse. is condemned out of control? oh god, i hope we get there in time.....
MEANWHILE!!! at the base.....
Me: *is talking into teh watch/communicator thing* yeah i need that preserver, like, right now.
Neo: what are you doing?
Me: we need to make sure that nothing happens to vera while we're away. so i'm getting talon to fix it for us.
Neo: oh. doe she need help?
Me: nah, dio's workin' on it too.
Manny: who're we talking 'bout?
Neo: some good friends that helped start the Nation.
Acid: *shudders* i have a feeling something's... not right.
*a white and black shadow appears in front of them*
Me: Mikenno? oh god, what happened??
MikennoIllusion: the base is in danger. if you see eclipse, do NOT, i repeat, do NOT let him get into the base. we'll explain when we get to the base. *disappears*
*Acid, manny, neo and i look at each other with horrified looks*
Me: CRITIIIIIIIIIIC!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:37:12 PM

MENWHIAL AT TEH BASE :D
the doors: *blast open with a loud explosion*
Eclipse: *strides right in. He wears a red trench coat, and pants. He also wears an extremelly angry expression*
Rosette: E-Eclipse...?
Eclipse: *shoots her a glare of pure rage, so intense, it could have made Sephiroth shudder*
Rosette: *backs away a bit*
mechadragon13 on August 15, 2008, 12:05:22 PM

DaemonTwilight: *stands by rosette* eclipse isnt himself. inderetta implanted a chip into him.
Lightning: *stands on the other side of rosette* he found our about your...... *glances at her* job.
MEANWHILE!!!! somewhere else in the base.......
Me: ACID!! get vera to room D13. then, meet back by the north entrance. eclipse is in.
Acid: ...got it. *rus to where vera is, picks her up and runs down a hallway*
Me: neo, come with me.
Manny: what about me???
Neo: it's too dangerous for you. stay here.
Manny: but---
Me: thats an order, manny. you're part of the Nation now. your priority is to save as many lives as possible, not go out and risk your own.
Manny: *opens his mouth to argue, but then nods* yes sir, ma'am.
Me: *smiles and nods* lets go. *runs to where the confrontation is at*
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 1:04:50 PM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 2:57:25 AM

Neo: this whole thing has INDERETTA written all over it.
Mikenno: it's true. inderetta implanted a chip into eclipse's head. it turns eclipse's sorrow into rage, nd gives him full control over condemned.
Lightning: *surprised* full control???
Mikenno: sad to say, but yes.
Acid: *runs in and sees eclipse* whoa. what happened to HIM?
Me: he's been turned against us.
Acid: what?? i swear it wasnt me.
Me: we know it wasnt you, acid. but we gotta make sure eclipse doesnt hurt any innocents.
Manny: *runs towards them* EI!! 'perame!!
Me: *between gritted teeth* i thought i told you to GIT OUT.
Manny: hey, you cant kick me out without lettig me see some action first!
Me: *exasperated sigh*
DaemonTwilight: *ear twitch* someone's coming through the south entrance.... *eyes widen* i know who it is!! neo, go get her.
Neo: *nods and runs off*
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:24:46 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:31:06 AM

Neo: *runs back with an enormous grin on his face* hey, guys, look who came to visit!!
Shidako: *walks in, her enormous sword in hand* hey guys. miss me?
DaemonTwilight: knew you'd come ^^
Lightning: sweetness.
Zenith: *lands near them* OY! dont leave ME out of the fight!!
Scorch: *runs in with fria* hey, you ain't leaving US out either.
Fria: *nods in agreement*
Fang: *swoops in and lands next to lightning*
Lightning: how ya doin' little buddy?
Fang: not bad, not bad. *competitive grin*
Me: alright eclipse. bring it on.
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:37:47 AM

Me: OH MY GOD!!!!!
Eclipse: *then raises his hand all the way up, and does the same thing to the base, cutting the power, and making the whole building go black with darkness. The only light there is now is Eclipse's glowing hands. Of, course, those soon went out too*
Rosette: oh god... oh god... *is shaking*
Me: I can't even see my hand in front of my face...
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:43:59 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:48:09 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:55:10 AM

Me: oh phew...... *wipes brow*
Lightning: ok, we need power, NOW. *looks up at the ceiling* twilly, i needja to give me a boost. get me to the roof. *turns to her* room's gonna go dark for a bit, so watch the others.
DaemonTwilight: *nods, then grabs lightning and throws him to the roof, the light goes out* stay close you guys, i can hear him....... *snaps her head to wherever condemned is and growls*
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:58:12 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:00:32 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 4:07:41 AM
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:44:51 AM

*suddendly, the lights come back on, and what seems like a bolt of electricity falls from the ceiling onto eclipse. It was actually a charged-up lightning dropping fist-first from the ceiling*
Lightning: *bounces off eclipse and lands on his feet* whoo!!! that was intense! *looks around and see twilight* TWILLY!!! *runs to her* twilight? *he puts his ear to her chest to listen for a heartbeat* still alive...... *stands up and glares angrily at eclipse* what. did. you. DO?
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 5:45:16 AM

Me: he knows his elements... he can't use dark energy on Lightning, or else Lightning will just absorb it, so he's using something else...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 16, 2008, 10:43:43 AM

Aria: This is worse than when I was bagged… can't see a blooming thing.
Me: *Sarcastically* No, I can't believe it.
Aria: *Rolls eyes and is very happy when the lights come back on* Be careful Lightning!! Clipsy's pulling a Benedict Arnold! Cept he's not doing this for more money or because of lack of recognition…
Me: We get the point. *A contemplative looks emerges on her face, she speaks to Eclipse* Thou art a traitor, and a miscreant; Too good to be so, and too bad to live. *Takes a step forward* Et tu, Brute?
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 12:24:50 PM

Twilight: *unconscious*
Mikenno: *has reverted to his hedgehog form, and is checking over twilight* she's uncoscious, but she'll wake up soon.
Me: ....this may not end well......
Acid: *clenches his fists and growls very quietly* grrrr.....
Everyone Else: *watches in freaked out silence*
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 2:58:42 AM

Me: *is hit* ow. You suck Eclipse! YOU'VE BEEN FREAKING BLINDED BY INDERRETTA!!!!
Eclipse: he has not blinded me, but simply opened my eyes. I thank him, and shun you all as enemies.
Me: YOU ASSHOLE!!!!
Rosette: Eclipse... what on earth has that badger told you to make you act this way?
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 7:05:00 AM

Lightning: *while dodging* ECLIPSE!!! WE'RE NOT YOUR ENEMIES!!! INDERETTA LIED TO YOU!!!
Mikenno: grr..... he wont listen.......
Acid: *clenches his fist tighter, and growls audibly*
Manny: umm... acid?
Acid: *snaps his head towards manny, and glarez*
manny: O.O .........
Acid: *looks back at eclipse and lightning near the middle. still trying to contain his anger, but is beginning to fail*
Scorch: heh. fire? no problem. *jumps out between Lightning and Eclipse* rrrrrrrAGH!!! *spins once and draws all the fire towards him and concentrates it all into a ball. then, he shoots the ball at eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 10:04:03 AM

Me: pfffff hahahahahahahah....
Eclipse: *shoots a nasty glare at me*
Me: hey, when you turn on us, we show.... um... Acid?
Eclipse: *looks at Acid, and notices him growling* angry? Is it because I killed Vera? Maybe I should end your misery... *charges up some dark energy*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 17, 2008, 10:39:25 AM

Aria: I'm burning your Shakespeare when we go home… honestly. *Looks at Eclipse* Least he has a sense of fashion now…
mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:41:48 AM

Me: whoa, whoa, WHOA!!! guys! outta the way!!!! *gets out of acid's way*
Everyone else: *gets the heck outta his way*
Acid: *snarls loudly, then slowly but surely starts making his way towards eclipse*
Lightning: oh hell no. *runs to twilly* twilight.... git up.... ya gotta get outta here....*
Daemontwilight: urrrg........ *comes to* whahappened?
Lightning: nothing yet, but somethings gonna happen soon. *tilts his head towards acid*
Daemontwilight: *eyes widen as she sees his rage* eclipse didn't... remind him about.......?
Lightning: unfortunately he did. comeon... move! we dont wanna be in his way.
Daemontwilight: *clambers to her feet and moves out of the way*
Acid: *is still advancing towards eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:45:03 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:49:58 AM

Me: ...what??
Acid: DO IT!
Me: what are you gonna---
Acid: *hisses loudly* JUST DO IT!
Me: ehh...... *hesitantly goes to the main power switch and heaves it to the off position*
*all the lights go out, acid's laugh echoes off the walls......*
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:13:06 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:23:13 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:31:20 AM
mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:35:31 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:43:16 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:25:57 AM

Lightning: *is still trying to comfort her...... but seems to be failing*
Mikenno: *punches the wall with both hands this time, but then falls to his knees as his hands slide down the wall* goddammit...... *a tear rolls down his face*
Me: oh god... i've never seen mikenno like that...... *slowly starts going towards him*
Neo: ......this really isnt a good day....................
Manny: O.O *is trying to grasp the fact that someone has died* did.... did that snake girl.......is she really......?
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:29:01 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:43:22 AM

Me: *over by mikenno* critic!! i need some help here......
Mikenno: *is grumbling angrily and incoherently at himself*
Daemontwilight: *still sobbing*
Lightning: come on, twilight, he's still alive!!
Daemontwilight: *shakes her head, says nothing*
Lightning: *sighs* rosette? i need some help.
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:48:49 AM

Me: *to Manny* yes is does. *runs off again to Mikenno* Hey Mikenno... this isn't your fault... I don't think Vera could have been saved anyway... you know how Condemned is, he's unpredictable... no one could have seen this coming...
Rosette: Hey Twilly... I'm sorry for what has happened... but i know you didn't do this... you just weren't in control... that's all...
mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:02:33 AM

Lightning: *sighs* .....rosette? we need to show her that eclipse is still alive. so you think you could...... you know...... make him regain consciousness?
Mikenno: no....i could have done something........ i should have SEEN this coming.......... am i weakening.....?
Me: NO! mikkeno, you're not getting weaker. that was an on-the-spot decision, there's no way we could have known.
Manny: *finally realizes the severity of the situation* people.... DIED..........
Neo: *puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok, manny. here, lets go find you a room....
Manny: NO! ....no. i wanna help.
Acid: ..........................................
TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:11:03 AM

Eclipse: *wakes up, but immedietelly winces in pain. There is a puddle of blood growing slowly beneath him* Ugh... Rosette... thank god...
Rosette: *notices something and gasps* Eclipse! Your eyes are a darker shade of blue!
Eclipse: they are? Nnnngh... *rubs them a bit*
Rosette: it's probabally from Condemned, but never mind that, you need to see Twilly...
Eclipse: *gets up real fast, and nearly falls down again, but regains balance* what's wrong?
Rosette: uh... just... come on... *supports him*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 10, 2008, 11:25:31 AM
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:42:09 AM

Lightning: come on twilly........
Daemontwilight: *skakes her head and whimpers some more*
Lightning: gahh...... *stands up and walks around to her head, then kneels down in front of her* twilly........ *grabs one of her paws and lifts it off her head* twilly.......... look at me.......
Daemontwilight: *opens her eye slightly, but closes it immediately at the sight of lightning* hrrr.... *gently takes her paw out of lightning's grip, then puts it back over her head*
Lightning: ....this is impossible....... *sees eclipse* eclipse? eclipse!! *stands up*
Mikenno: *is attempting NOT to tear up, he looks at Fugue with one eye* ...................you're right. *is now
attempting to compose himself*
Me: there. thats more like it.
Acid: *is still kneeling by vera's body, crying quietly* ...........................................
Manny: *confused* abilities? OH! im a ninth-degree black belt ^^
TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 10:00:57 AM
mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 10:08:21 AM

Lightning: yeah, it's him.
Manny: *to critic* ajá!! ill show you later, if you like.
Acid: ............
Mikenno: *stands and brushes the dirt off his knees, then walks over to acid and stands next to him, putting a hand on his shoulder*
Acid: *glances up at mikenno for a split second, then looks back to vera* ..................................................is there any way to save her?
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 11, 2008, 10:50:31 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 1:52:17 PM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 1:47:47 AM

Daemontwilight: eclipse!! it IS you!! I DIDNT KILL YOU!!! YAAAY!!! *pounces on him, then immediately gets off* whoops. sorry, a little overexcited...... *grins a big wolfy grin, then lies down sphinx style with eclipse between her front paws* i am SO glad you're still alive. *wolfy nuzzle*
Lightning: ^^ shes back to normal ^^
Mikenno: *nods to fugue* yeah.
Acid: *sighs deeply* then i guess thats it, then. *starts to stand up, then stumbles backwards*
Me: whoa there. *catches acid beore he falls and helps him up* be careful.
Acid: .......thanks.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 2:20:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 2:28:41 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:41:37 AM

Lightning: she's right. we can only blame condemned and inderetta for that.
Acid: ..............so can we bring her back?
Mikenno: *closes his eyes and is deep in thought*
Manny: we can... bring her back?
Neo: they did it with lightning.
Manny: O.O lightning died???
Lightning: yeah. *moves his chest fur around to reveal a long scar* condemned stabbed me with his claws. *smooths his fur out again*
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:11:31 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:22:46 AM

Lightning: *nods in agreement*
Mikenno: *still deep in thought*
Manny: *waves hand in front of mikenno's face* hello? whassup wit 'im?
Neo: he's looking into the future, manny. dont touch him.
Manny: oh. coooool..........
Mikenno: *eyes suddendly open* i....... i couldnt see anything.
Everyone: WHAT???!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:29:45 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:11:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:28:36 AM
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:41:39 AM

Mikenno: *eyes widen* she did. *goes demon and is immediately in pursuit of inderetta* GET BACK HERE!!!!
Twilight: mikenno only gives chase if he knows we have a chance. *goes daemon also* come on!!! *runs after them*
Lightning: oh well. time for instinct. *takes his gloves off, and his here glow* here GOES!! *gets down on all fours and is immediately running faster than his normal speed*
Me: everyone who cant run as fast follow me!! *runs back into base*
Manny: wait up!!
Me: *stops* manny, you stay here. we need you to watch the base, okay?
Manny: okay.....
Acid: *picks up vera's body and carries it inside, then lays her down near a wall* i'm coming. *dark glint in his eye* i'm gonna get a piece of that inderetta if it's the last thing i do.
TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:17:12 AM
mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:48:16 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 4:30:18 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:47:26 AM

Aria: *Stops* What's the paradox???
Me: Who cares!!??!!! KEEP SINGING!!!!!
Aria: *Shrugs, then joins back in*
Together: A paradox,
A most ingenious paradox!
We’ve quips and quibbles heard in flocks,
But none to beat this paradox!
A paradox, a paradox,
A most ingenious paradox.
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha,
This paradox.
Me: *Looks at the staring of nameless other hybrids* Maybe we should stop…
Aria: Yeah…
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:39:23 AM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:48:31 AM

Twilight: too right, manny.
Neo: who do you think is responsible??
Lightning: *through gritted teeth* inderetta.
Mikenno: i believe that is the case....
Me: O.O oh no. *panics and her voice cracks* WE GOTTA GET ECLIPSE OUTTA HERE!! NOW!!!
Acid: O.O oh no, he wouldnt.
Vera: O.O he would. *binds eclipse with her tail and starts dragging him out*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 9:42:12 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 9:56:49 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 10:00:59 AM

Me: *Eyebrow tick. The anger from earlier resurfaces. The next words are bellowed* GET ROSETTE TO THE DOCTOR RIGHT NOW SO WE CAN FIND OUT WHAT D^&* POISON SHE WAS POSIONED WITH. AND CONDEMNED LEAVE NOW BEFORE I'M FORCED TO DO SOMETHING I WOULD RATHER NOT!!!
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:42:56 PM

Acid: i'll help ya. *grapples with eclipse to help drag him out*
Twilight: i dont think a doctor will help..... knowing inderetta, there's no helping her now.......
Mikenno: ....damn it!! *gets really angry*
Lightning: he hates feeling useless.......
Manny: GIT OFF!!! *takes critic's hands off his eyes, then sees condemned* O.O oh lord. *puts her hands back*
Me: WAIT!! *thinks* critic, dont we need condemned????
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:28:58 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:33:29 PM

Acid: *winces in pain, but continues to grapple with him* grrr.... what do you need us to do with him????
Manny: *is shaking in fear from the sounds around him* ohhhhhhh..... god..........................
*other nameless hybrids are noticing the commotion and are backing up*
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:52:20 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:02:20 PM

Vera: *hisses in pain also, but smiles at acid's remark* heheh. *becomes serious again and tightens her grip on condemned*
Twilight: crap. well, here i come. *goes full daemon and starts pushing at condemned with her head* comeon, you big lump, MOVE!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:07:40 PM
mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:11:55 PM

Lightning: i gotta go too! *starts to leave*
Me: NO! *grabs his arm before he can leave*
Lightning: *surprised* what are you doing?? *anger starts building, his stripes start glowing* let. me. go.
Me: no. twilight wont bear it if she loses you again.
Lightning: 8realizes, the his stripes fade back to normal*
Manny: *whimpering in fear i-is it gone?
TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:15:27 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 2:28:49 PM

Me: *Grumps, but gives a nod of acquiescence. Watches silently as Aria runs outside, before turning to look at Manny. Running a hand through my hair, I sigh* We should get Rosette to a Doc. Quick, before it really is too late. *Glances down at Manny* And we should get him settled too… *Another sigh* I'm going to have gray hairs before I hit twenty…
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 1:25:17 AM
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 4:45:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:09:44 AM

Condemned: *roars from being bitten by Vera* I'LL KILL YOU!!! *smashes her head to the ground*
Me: NO!!!!
Condemned: I hate mobians... i hate mobians so much... they're all too happy... who really gives a damn if i kill one...
Me: ACID WILL CARE!!! THE WHOLE HYBRID NATION WILL CARE!!! I WILL CARE!!! DON'T YOU DARE KILL VERA, OR I SWEAR TO GOD, CONDEMNED -
Condemned: you'll do what? You can't kill me...
Me: grrrrrr.....
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:22:34 AM

Acid: *looks at vera, eyes wide and mouth agape* vera.... no..... *he runs to her* vera? vera!! NO!!!! you cant be dead... no..... you cant...... *closes his eyes and sobs over her*
TwilightDaemon: *is fighting, but glances over at acid, and stops, her eyes going wide* no..........*howling* NOOO!!!!
*inside*
Lightning: *head snaps towards the door* twilight? whats goin' on??
Mikenno: *is completely snapped out of his grumblings at himself and looks towards the door, his eyes going wide* oh no.
Neo: ....from the look on mikki's face, something bad just happened.
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:27:09 AM
mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:37:12 AM

Daemontwilight: *a tear in her eye* you......... *suddendly enraged, in her triple voice* YOU'LL PAY!!! *pounces on condemned, ripping at him with her claws*
Lightning: *goes over to acid and kneels down, putting a hand on his shoulder* im so sorry acid......
Acid: she was... the only one who understood me..... the only one who wasnt afraid......... and now.... *trails off and keeps sobbing*
*inside*
Mikenno: DAMMIT!! god... oh god... *punches a wall. denting it* IM SO USELESS!!!
Manny: .....someone just died... didnt they.......?
Neo: O.O oh no.... but who.....?
Mikenno: *in clear view of all the other hybrids in the base, he goes into his full demon form* NOOOOO!!!! *he crashes through the door* CONDEMNED!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 8:53:13 AM

Condemned: n...nnnghrrghaaarrrrAAAAAAAAGH!!! *turns back into Eclipse, who is now seriously wounded* *immedietly falls over and blacks out*
Me: last time this happened, Eclipse didn't wake up until three days later...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 8, 2008, 11:14:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:39:20 AM

DaemonTwilight: *realizes what she has done and immediately gits off* oh god, what the hell did i DO???? *tear*
Lightning: *runs over to her and leans against her side comfortingly* you just got angry twilight, its ok...
Daemontwilight: *crying now* NO!! IT'S NOT OK!! I COULD HAVE KILLED HIM!! HE COULD HAVE DIED!!! BECAUSE OF ME!!! *collapses on the ground from sheer guilt, she begins to sob, still in her daemon form* god... oh god....
Lightning: *drops to his knees next to her, and leans against her side, rubbing her shoulder* it's all right, twilly... it's all right.....
Acid: *manages to control his sobbing* ...........i miss her already.
Mikenno: *returns to normal, still wide-eyed* i..... *looks down, ashamed* i was too late to save them....... *punches the wall, leaving a large dent and drawing blood from his knuckles* DAMMIT!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:13:43 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 10:50:07 AM

Aria: *Ignoring Me for the moment* Go Sonic!!! Go Shadow!!! Put that demon in his place!! *Looks back at Critic* Where do you think that coward Inderretta went??
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:02:07 AM

Sonic: *is now super omg thisclose to Shadow*
Shadow: *his face is twisted with pain, and fear. The demon is making him FEAR Sonic's aura... it's not Shadow* S-ssstop.... p-please.... t-this pain... it's l-like my muscles are trying to rip out of my skin... please... no more... no more!!
Sonic: *sadly shakes his head, and touches Shadow on the Demon Claw arm*
Shadow: *his arm burns, making a loud hissing sound* OH GOD!!! OH GOD!!!!! AAAAAUUGH!!! STOP IT!!!! GET AWAY!!!
Sonic: 'fraid I can't do that, buddy.
Shadow: AAAAUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *a blue liquid slithers out of Shadow's shadow (lol), and hisses at everyone*
Sonic: *picks up the liquid. It has the consistancy of silly puddy*
The Liquid (or rather, the puddy-like goop): *catches fire, and burns away, releasing a foul smelling gas, and turning into black dust*
Sonic: aww... gross! It's like Mephiles cut the cheese or something! *blows the dust away*
Shadow: *is now shivering and wide-eyed. He stares at the ground, and is twitching a little in the eye* t-t-t-the pain... it's g-g-g-gone.... *falls over, unconcious*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:05:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:08:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:40:48 AM
mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 12:35:52 PM

Lightning: owww...... *is holding his face, which has lng cuts on it* man that really smarts............
Twilight: at least you're not dead...... *hugs*
Mikenno: *closes his eyes in deep thought*
Vera: *shivers* this place does give me chills.....
can we leave?
Neo: i agree. we should leave this dreadful place.
Acid: *is standing over by shadow* hey man... you're ok. ya remember me shad?
Me: somehow... i have a feeling this isnt over.......
TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2008, 6:31:10 AM
mechadragon13 on July 30, 2008, 10:43:47 AM

Me: OHMAHGAWSH it's good to be ooooout!! *stretches*
Vera: too right, too right.
Twilight: *sighs loudly* i never thought i'd miss being outside this much........
Lightning: same here. oww...... inderetta hits hard... *still has claw marks*
Neo: yeowch. that looks like it kills.
Mikenno: *points to where the plane is supposed to be.* look.
TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2008, 6:20:39 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 31, 2008, 8:19:34 AM
mechadragon13 on August 1, 2008, 12:05:52 AM

Lightning: ..... never thought you'd have to use that button......
Twilly: yeah me neither.
Neo: *starts humming that one song they play when someone dies*
Acid: does that meana you have to re-build it?
Me: naw.... i have another one......
Vera: thats still sucks though.
Mikenno: we still have to get back.
Neo: i got it. get ready for a warp! *holds hand out*
*everyone puts their hand on his*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 1, 2008, 8:49:45 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 1, 2008, 11:28:25 PM
mechadragon13 on August 4, 2008, 5:06:38 AM

Lightning: you guys are welcome to stay here tonight if you like--- whoa, hey!
*a black and white hybrid runs into Lightning*
???: *desperately* por favor!! ayudame mano, a los policias no les gustan los satos.. escondeme, mano, escondeme!!
Twilight: i dont understand what he's saying!!!
Me: wait, its spanish!!! *to the scared hybrid* que te pasa??
???: los policias me'stan persiguiendo mana! no quiero ir a la carcel, soy much chico!!!
Me: racist cops are after him, he wants us to hide him!
Mikenno: i have this under control. *changes his outline so he looks almost exactly like the scared hybrid, except his clothes are black-and-white and his eyes are red-brown* *in the other hybrid's voice* you take him to base, i'll be right back. *runs off to distract the cops* estoy aqui!! *runs*
Acid: come on lets go! *all run off to base*
TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 6:28:37 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 4, 2008, 10:11:05 AM

Aria: *Nods, and starts running, scooping Fugue up. Fugue squawks in protest* I know you… you won't run you lazy bum…
Me: * Sighs and glances over at Neo* It's all right… the shop'll be fine without us for a bit…
mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:47:55 AM

Acid: phew. well, we missed them.
Mikenno: *walks in* im back. fooling those cops was much too easy.
Me: lol. *to the unknown hybrid* hmmm.... quien eres? 'perate. primero..... hablas ingles?
???: ingles? english? si!! uhh.. i mean.. yes. yeah! sorry.... i go to spanish when i get scared ^^;
Lightning: no problem, kid ^^
Twilight: so... whoa and what are you?
???: oh! my name's manuel. but you can call me manny, manny the badgewolf!
everyone else: *silence*
Manny: .... what?
TheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 6:18:00 AM
mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 8:55:03 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 5, 2008, 9:16:47 AM

Me: Your deplorable grammar strikes once more. It's doesn't he… for future reference. And once should not judge a flock by a single bird… *Walks over to stand before Manny. She places a hand under his chin and forces him to look her dead in the eyes* The eyes are the windows to the soul, they say… *Pause* Hmmm…
Aria: Is that Fugue-ese for saying you approve??
Me: *Slightly disgruntled* It is Fugue-ese for saying I am going to watch and wait…
Aria: She approves!!
Me: *Steps away from Manny* Oh Shut up.
Me: *Sigh*
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 10:56:09 AM

Me: fugue being herself, manny...... you're ok ^^
Lightning: yeah. just coz inderetta's the spawn of the devil doesnt mean all badgers are......
Manny: 'sperate. inderetta? hmm.....
Twilight: you know him??
Manny: hold up, ya gotta let me think.....
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:09:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:17:24 AM

Me: quite a rap, our little Mr. Mustard has...
Eclipse: I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL HIM THAT!
Me: but it's SOOOO cute!
Eclipse: no.
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:24:34 AM

Me: *wide eyes* oh no.... im so sorry..... *puts a hand on his shoulder*
Manny: it's ok........
Lightning: ....... would you like to join hybrid nation, manny?
Manny: *surprised, his voice goes up an octave* que?!
(note: i dunno if i said this before, so if i didnt, manny is 9))
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:34:42 AM
TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:37:02 AM
mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:43:19 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:24:39 AM

Lightning: *looking out the window* TWILIGHT!!!! *freaks out* OHMYGAWSH!!!! we gotta catch her!!
Shidako: no need. she's freefalling.
Neo: freefalling?
Mikenno: it's actually very exhilarating. but also dangerous.
Acid: *looking ou tthe window* it looks fun ^^
Vera: dont go jumping out of planes, acid ^^
Me: ooh i LIKE dangerous!! i'm gonna do it too!!! *goes up, the dives at this weird angle that gives eyerybody a minute or two of ZERO GRAVITY!!!!!*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:26:58 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:36:46 AM

Me: ok!! landing time!! *pulls up the nose in time not to crash and land correctly* here we are!! *opens the cockpit*
Lightning: *jumps out* TWILLY!!!!!!! *runs to her* are you ok???
Twilight: yeah im fine ^^ WHOOHOO!!!!! XDD
Shidako: *leaps out of the plane final-fantasy style and turns into a silver-and-aqua blue dragon in midair. she lands gracefully* finally.
Mikenno: *jumps out* we have to get in there.
Neo: *nods* lets go. *all begin to approach the door*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:42:55 AM

Eclipse: *pushes the doors open without flinching*
Me: *looks around* oh... my... god...
*inside, bodies litter the floor, and against the walls. All are terribly bloody, and only a few are still alive, and in terrible pain. Puddles of blue liquid also stain the floor, mixing a bit with the red of the blood*
Eclipse: this... this is horrific!
Me: yeah... sheesh... I guess Shadow has had NO practice before with these creatures... he's never had to face a battle within himself...
Eclipse: *is trembling* Inderretta's going to pay...
Me: hey man, those dark thoughts of yours is what got you wound up with Condemned in the first place!
Eclipse: but now that Condemned is gone, i don't have to hold my anger back...
Me: shoot. That's a good point.
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:48:36 AM

Lightning: *equally terrified* O.O ditto......
Neo: well, we cant just stand here. mikenno?
Mikenno: *already had his eyes closed, he opens them again* *points down a hallway* shadow ran that way. *points down some other hallway* inderetta hid that way. who goes where?
Shidako: critic?
Me: any plans?
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:00:25 AM

Eclipse: the invention room!
Me: *sweetly* what the f@#k are you talking about?
Eclipse: all mechanic-based companies have one! Also, it's pretty large!
Me: large?
Eclipse: the largest.
Me: WE HEAD THERE!
*as the group heads for the room, a monster's howls and roars echoe all over the building in a creepy manner.
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:15:39 AM

Lightning: *smiles at her* you're ok twilly.... you're ok.
Shidako: *has become a relatively smaller oriental dragon that can fit through thte hallways* *sniffsniff* i'm smellin' something....
Mikenno: i sense somthing as well.........
Neo: sheesh. this place gives me the creeps.
Acid: no kiddin'? this place is freaky!
Vera: ....... O.O
Me: ....... critic? are we any closer?
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:20:04 AM
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:25:59 AM

Lightning: git that door open! *charges up*
Neo: *mentally rips off a piece of the metal wall and forms it into a large solid rod* ready.
Mikenno: *nods*
Acid: *takes out his emerald* bring it!!
Vera: *shakes her rattle violently and hisses* open that door*
Shidako: *becomes a big bad crimson dragon with black-looking eyes* rrrrrrgh...............
Me: *takes out a wrench* wherever you're ready, critic!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:32:34 AM

Inside: *A rather grotesque form of Shadow is leering over Mr. Inderretta, who is bloodied and bruised. One of his arms is is the demakarr (the type of demon) form. He is on the ground*
Demon Shadow: NNNRRRRAAAARRRGH!!!!!! *his claws are drenched in blood, and, shockingly, so are his teeth*
Eclipse: *wide-eyed* DAD!!!
Demon Shadow: *turns his head toward the group, and snarls, spraying spit and foam everywhere*
Mr. Inderretta: oh thank GOD you're all here! Now he can kill YOU instead of me! *runs off to a safe spot*
Me: COWARD!
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:36:25 AM

Lightning: *to twilight* that might not work......
Neo: but then again, it was only a small piece of condemned that got put in.
Mikenno: *takes some steps back* i... suggest you put your guard back up......
Shidako: *growls* mikenno's right. this will not be an easy fight.......
Acid: *gets out of his fighting stance* brother... plaese, listen to us!! this isnt you. not at all. you should have more control over yourself!!
Vera: *thinking* please please work.......
Me: eeeek..... he doesnt look very happy......
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 7:46:14 AM

Eclipse: no... it's no use... Condemned is powerful stuff, even if it WAS a little bit... I just hope he can hear us...
Mr. Inderretta: what are you doing?! KILL THEM!!!
Demon Shadow: *snaps out of it, and slashes at the group*
Me: *is hit* HOW MANY TIMES MUST I SAY I CAN'T DIE?????
Eclipse: *is also hit* agh! IT'S OK! ow... I KNOW YOU DIDN'T WANT TO DO THAT! god...
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:58:38 AM

Lightning: *dodges slash* come on shad, fight it!!!!
Neo: *ducks* how do we got condemned out of him!?
Vera: *slides under the blow* ha!
Shidako: *gets hit, but blow doesnt inflict that much damage* RAWR!! *goes for inderetta*
Acid: *gets hit and flies a small distance* rrrgh..... *stands* come on shadow!!!! listen to us!! you may be possessed by a demon, but i know you're still in there somewhere!!! come on shad, fight it!!
Me: i think what acid's doing is working.....
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:09:51 AM

Demon Shadow: *doubles over again, clawing at his head to try to think clearly*
Mr. Inderretta: no! NO!!!
Eclipse: You can't let him win, Dad! You can't! Everyone looks up to you! I look up to you! Your giving a damn horrible impression to everyone now! I THOUGHT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM!!!
Demon Shadow: *shrinks a bit, and turns into reg. Shadow, who is actually trembling, and has tears in his eyes* I- This - this has n-never happened b-before... how d-do i control it??? HOW??? *is curled up into a tight ball, and whimpering*
Eclipse: he's in shock. Since Condemned isn't FULLY inside him, he can remember what he did... he must be in shock from he lack of control...
Me: oy Shads! Make sure yeh don't turn into a foamy monster again - you're much hawter as you are now!
Eclipse: *shoots a dark glare at me*
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 8:20:22 AM

Shidako: F YOU!! *fireball at indy*
Neo: *launches the metal rod at indy* rrrrraaaagh!!!!
Acid: *runs over to shad* shadow!! *kneels down next to him and puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok shad......
Vera: *goes and kneels next to acid*
DaemonTwilight: *sits all wolfy-like by shadow and the others*
Lightning: *stands next to Daemontwilight with one hand on her side*
Mikenno: *a very small smile*
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:28:49 AM

Eclipse: *sits next to his father* sshh... It's fine... just... just calm down, and think happy thoughts... that's how i got through it - now it's your turn...
Shadow: *tries* *can't* aaagh.... my head is KILLING me...
Eclipse: YOU NEED TO TRY AND STOP THE HEADACHE OR SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
Shadow: don't pressure me! *moans* agh... *manages to smirk* what the hell, Devon..?
Mr. Inderretta: I DIDN'T KNOW YOU'D TRY AND KILL ME!!
Shadow: I hate you. I think Condemned hates you. What makes you think we wouldn't try and kill you...? AAAAGH!!! *his face is in a pain-filled expression* *he twitches as tenticals start crawling up his body once more* GOD!! OH GOD MAKE IT STOP!!!! *clutches his head as if it was going to explode*
Me: shoot! HE'S TRANSFORMING AGAIN!
Eclipse: everyone back away! Once Condemned starts, he won't stop!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 23, 2008, 10:04:04 AM

Aria: *Backs up a foot, at the ready. She is holding back the nauseous feeling caused by the excess blood, but barely. There is a look of tightly contained rage on her face. Her words come out cold, precise, unlike Aria's usual attitude at all. They are as cold as a blizzard as sharp as the sharpest sword* What do you have to say for yourself Inderretta??
Me: *A look of disgust is spread across my face, combined with a haughty look. It may not look like it, but I'm tense, almost at my breaking point. The murders offend me, and Inderretta even more. The glare I'm giving Inderretta is one that is similar to one who is gazing upon the worst scum of the earth.* Are you afraid now, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? Is fear nipping at you, as a wolf nips at a deer?? You should be afraid, Mr. Devon Inderretta. If Condemned doesn't kill you… we just might. *Creepy smile* I hate presumptuous men… men who proceed to think just because they can, that they should… those that play God are burned… burned in righteous fire. Do you understand? *Spreads arms apart* Is your soul clean, Mr. Devon Inderretta. *Pauses, and turns her attention to Shadow, and thus Condemned* Fear… Fear is something, we all have… no matter how we deny it… What is your fear? *Tilts head, ears flattening against the top of my skull* Or is fear your fear? Is hate your shield??? *Laughs* It matters not… leave us Condemned. You have no place here…
((Can we guess who had a bad day?? My post seems to come off as a little psychotic… and out of character. They aren't out of character… They're really mad…))
mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 11:02:25 AM

*everyone backs up*
Me: WELL?? what do you have to say for yourself, Inderetta??
Neo: *looking down* all you seem to enjoy doing is to ruin the lives of others. of other people who could have lived a normal, happy life. *looks up angriy and clenches fists* you just go and ruin it!!
Shidako: *solemnly* I have never seen such evil come from a person who could still have their heart. Not even the Nobodies and the Heartless have done something so cruel. *angry expression returns and she goes from the red dragon form into an extremely fierce-looking metallic black dragon with furious crimson eyes and demon-like wings. she grins, showing rows upon rows of huge, razor-sharp teeth* prepare to face your worst nightmare, badger.
Lightning: *his eyes are so full of anger you aren't sure it's him anymore* you will pay for all you have done, inderetta. expect no mercy from us.
Vera: *angrily* i have nothing to say to that monster.
Acid: i finally find my brother...... *shakes his head* and you............. *angry glare, but his voice breaks* you just had to ruin it didn't you??? *sorrowful* i always imagined this to be a happy moment. but NO. *gets into a fighting stance and takes out his acid green chaos emerald* you will be punished, inderetta. get ready!!
Mikenno: *closes his eyes* i'm ashamed to call you my bretheren. *he opens his eyes, but instead of being their usual dark brown, they are glowing blood red* you will pay for all the grief you have caused that family and their friends. prepare to meet your death, Inderetta. RRRRRAAAAAAAAAWRGH!!!! *turns from his hedgehog-like form into his true form: it still basically looks like him, but his quills are now enormous curved horns with the black design still on it, his hands and feet have huge claws, his tail is long and spiked at the end, and his mouth is much like condemned's, only it has a whole lot more, but smaller teeth. he also has big, feathered white and black wings.* *in a creepy growly voice* good bye.... Inderetta.
TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 4:27:54 AM

Eclipse: YOU'RE WRONG! YOU DEVIL! YOU SPAWN OF SATAN! YOU'RE WRONG!
Mr. Inderretta: am i, now? *cocks an eyebrow* *turns himself to Shadow, and jumps down to him*
Shadow: *gritting his teeth* lllleaaave mmmee allllonnnee....
Mr. Inderretta: *petting Shadow like a dog* oh my... you still have some emotions to release... may i help you, Shadow?..
Shadow: get out of here... please...
Mr. Inderretta: HAHAHAHA!! *bends down, and whispers in Shadow's ear* do you remember Maria...?
Shadow: *gasps*
Mr. Inderretta: I found her body, you know... the poor thing... she was only a skeleton with a blue dress... but i heard of her... I know what happened on the ARK...
Shadow: don't say any more... please... *more tears run down his face*
Mr. Inderretta: you really seemed to care about her, Shadow... hmm... a shame i BURNED THE BODY AND THREW OUT THE ASHES! *cackles in an insane manner, and leaps out of the way*
Shadow: *his eyes widen, then, with rage, turn glowing pure red once more. He shouts out in anger and pain as the tenticals on his body cover it's new host, and once more turns him into a monster. He goe insane, smashing up everything in sight*
Me: *voice gets low and dangerous* Inderretta... you just went too far...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 4:53:22 AM

Aria: We ain't angels, we know that!! We learn from our mistakes!! But you never seem to learn from your wrong-doings… you just keep repeating it!!! You heartless ba&*^%d is there anything you care about besides power or money?? You twist and twist and twist and when the twisted breaks, you run… you're no more than a coward!! Always running from what you do!! You don't embrace anything!! You run… like a mouse!! You're a mouse Inderretta, you're no badger!! A simpering coward!! You disgrace all with your actions!! Go back to your mother, for she's the only one who loves you, if that love still exists, which I doubt. I hope the Devil has mercy for you, for we shall NOT!!!
Me: I never called myself a peacemaker. Those words never crossed my lips. You have a problem of the masses Mr. Devon Inderretta… you hear, but do not listen, you look, but you do not see… and you've made a mistake. Tell me Mr. Devon Inderretta… Have you ever heard of a creature known as a kitsune? *Starts stalking towards him, a dark glint in her eye*
TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 10:40:50 AM

Me: intimidated? Is that it??
Mr. Inderretta: *growls at me*
Demon Shadow: NNNNNRRRAAAAARRRRGH!!!!! *foam goes flying everywhere*
Eclipse: *scowling at Inderretta* you b@$&%@#... you f$%#&*% b@$&%@#!!!
Mr. Inderretta: *amused* do you want to kill me?
Eclipse: YOU HAVE RUINED MY LIFE, STARTING WHEN I COULDN'T EVEN TALK! YOU NOW DARE RUIN MY FATHER AS WELL??? HOW DARE YOU MENTION ONE OF HIS MANY GRIEFS! HOW DARE YOU!!! *growls at him loudly, his eyes are full of hate. If he still had Condemned, he would be rampaging by now*
Mr. Inderretta: *shrugs it off* oh well. *turns to Shadow* Hey there, old friend...
Shadow: *turns to Inderretta and snarls madly at him*
Mr. Inderretta: hmm... maybe i shouldn't remind him that it was i who killed Rouge... ah. But he probally already knows... hmmm to make him stop targeting me, though... *darts up to Shadow faster than the naked eye could ever follow, and rips Project Nocturnal out of his pocket. He then places it on Demon Shadow's chest. It's robotic tenticals dig into Shadow's skin, making him howl, but soon, he stopped, and lowered his head like a puppet waiting for it's strings to be pulled*
Mr. Inderretta: *in a cold, heartless tone* kill them.
Demon Shadow: *growls low at the group*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 1:30:11 PM

Aria: *Sniffs in disdain* Denial seems to be the only thing you do well… that and running like a mouse. *Looks absently at Demon Shadow, then back to Inderretta* It will have blood, they say; Blood will have blood…
Fugue: *Calmly starts to take steps forward, towards Inderretta* To earn a kitsune's wrath is to earn a life of torment neverending… a kitsune is both kind and cruel, giving with one hand and taking with the other… Do you wish to be hounded forever more?? For I can promise one thing if you continue to traverse this path…*Walks forward, in spite of the Condemned Possessed Shadow* I will not rest, until your bones are bleach white in the summer sun, your flesh consumed by the Carrion, and your soul long devoured by Satan. I abhor you Mr. Devon Inderretta… for you are more of a demon than I am, you who murdered Rouge, you who damned Eclipsed, you who damned Shadow… My hands are not pristine, but yours drip with blood, as a faucet turned on fully. *Slaps Inderretta across the face* Try to make us doubt ourselves Mr. Devon Inderretta, I care not. Your words are futile here. I fear neither death, nor dying. *Glances at Shadow* Would you make us another stain?? Another memory of death? *Stands silently, back straight, hands shoved in the pockets of her vest*
mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 7:06:56 AM

DaemonTwilight: *in the demon's double voice* We have never taken lives, devon. we may be demons, but we are not monsters.
Shidako: i have faced death, and come back to tell the tale. but those YOU kill aren't that fortunate. you find the cruelest ways to torture people, ruin their lives, until they can't take it anymore. and you say we are alike. pah! *dragon-spit*
Neo: I come from the future. i have seen the horrors of wars and death tme and time again. but you... you are many times worse than all the wars from now to fifty years from now combined! at least they fight for a reason! but you. you kill only to please yourself.
Acid: *shakes his head* i..... *glares angrily* i have never killed anyone directly, Inderetta. but when i did, i had the most horrible feeling of guilt. did you even feel guilt, devon? well?? oh and, guess what? that death i caused, lightning's death, was because of YOU!
Vera: i agree with acid completely. we may be criminals, but we are NOT senseless killers.
Me: indy, indy, indy......... F*** YOU!
Lightning: inderetta........ *walks right up to him, ignoring shadow completely* will this ever end? i'm sick and tired of all this fighting. will you ever stop? *angrily* will you ever stop killing?? *slaps him across the face* well??? will you???? you have a choice, inderetta. you cna either take it, or face the consequences. *crosses his arms and stands his ground. *the others glare threateningly*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:26:12 AM

Eclipse: Lightning!
Demon Shadow: *pounces at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *quickly gets away*
Demon Shadow: *uses a tentical to trap Eclipse. He slowly walks over and hisses loudly at him*
Eclipse: *his eys goes wide with fear, and a dose of sadness*
Demon Shadow: *raises his clawed hand like he's going to strike at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *tightly closes his eyes, waiting for the blow*
*and then the blow never comes*
Me: look!
Eclipse: *opens one of his eyes*
Demon Shadow: *his clawed hand is being held back by his slightly more Shadow-like hand. Demon Shadow growls in frustrasion as he struggles to try and slash at Eclipse. Unfortunatly for him, Shadow just won't strike at his own son deep inside himself*
Mr. Inderretta: ah... Shadow still suffers from being held back by love. COME ON! KILL HIM ALREADY! ONCE ECLIPSE IS GONE, YOU WON'T HAVE TO LOOK AFTER HIM! YOU'LL BE FREE!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 8:36:48 AM

Me: *I withdraw my hands from my pockets. Held in one of my hands is a homemade bomb.* Mr. Devon Inderretta. I have two words for you… SHUT UP!!!!! *The last phrase is bellowed, as I tackle Inderretta, trying to drag the Badger away from rest. During the movement, the bomb is lit* Are you ready to depart, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? For I am…
Aria: *Rolls eyes, then mutters to herself* So dramatic… *Soars above the possessed Shadow* Fight it!! Fight it with all your heart, with all your love!! Don't let it take control!! Shadow!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:01:26 AM

Eclipse: *uses the opportunity to punch Shadow right in the face, and hard (wow. Workouts help)*
Demon Shadow: *falls on the ground, unconcious*
Eclipse: *runs to Fugue* STOP!!!
Mr. Inderretta: WHY STOP??!!
Eclipse: shut it, scumbag! STOP, FUGUE!!! DON'T KILL HIM!! DON'T LOSE YOUR INNOCENCE!!
Me: woah woah woah WOAH. WTF? Let's kill the Plot Point!!!
Eclipse: No! I know you hate this guy! I hate him more then i need air! But no... YOU CAN'T LET YOUR ANGER CONTROL YOU!!!
Demon Shadow: *half conscious* Eclipse's.... promise... to Sonic... *turns slightly more normal, but his eys are still pure red, and he still has fangs instead of teeth*
Mr. Inderretta: blow me up.
Eclipse: DEFUSE THE BOMB!!!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:25:52 AM

Aria: Dumb %^&. *Swoops down and nabs the bomb with her talons, throwing it away, just in time for it to explode against a wall. There is now a gigantic hole in the wall where the bomb hit, and debris falls…* Don't make me scream at you, ya stupid fox demon…
Me: Why??*Is hissed out, from between clenched teeth. I'm starting to try to prevent Inderretta from escaping*
Aria: Make 'em rot in jail… torture him while he's alive, till he dies of old age. Make the rest of his days living nightmares. Take your anger out on him for the rest of your life… deprive him of all… if anything… he cherishes… I'll take my revenge too… someday… *Slight smirk* Some time…
Me: *Short terse laugh* I'm 'sposed to be smarter than you.
Aria: Ya are… your anger clouds ya brains sometimes. *Flys back and neatly touches down. She slowly walks up to Inderretta* Hey Clipsy?? Can we break his hands at least?? *Eyes Inderretta in a predatory manner, so unlike a mockingbird. Fugue's had some bad effects on the bird…*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:48:02 AM

Mr. Inderretta: gaahhh... my plans.... they are ruined.... RUINED!!!! *turns full demakarr* *looks at Fugue* huh. You, girl... you have a LOT of anger to take out on something don't you...? *Evil grin* we may have something in common... *Flies out of the hole in the wall and escapes*
Shadow: *gets up, but winces as the pounding headache that has developed because of Condemned* *he drops down to his knees once more*
Me: awww... I wonder how we'll get Condemned out?
Eclipse: well.... it's not a lot... maybe Sonic can come in? His aura is pure, and he's fast... *goes on a cell phone, and tells Sonic to get his @$$ over here*
Sonic: *immedietly runs in* hiya! What's up? Why was the hallway all.... bloody... *looks at Shadow, and just stares*
Shadow: *his arm is a claw, and his eyes are pure red. He has fangs* nnn.... stop staring, you stupid faker...
Me: ok... uh... Sonic? You may want to step closer to him...
Sonic: why?
Me: JUST DO IT!!
Sonic: ok! Geez! *steps closer to Shadow*
Shadow: *an animalistic scream leaps out of Shadow's mouth as he once again clutches his head, and shivers all over*
Sonic: *a white aura is around him, and is now visible. He takes another step*
Shadow: *double-voiced, and hissing like a snake* AAAAAAGH!! SSSSSTOP!! SSSSTOP!!!
Sonic: *another step*
Shadow: *goes down fully on his hands and knees now, pain screams at every muscle he dares to move* GHRAAAAAAAUUUUGH!!!!! *his eyes turn back to normal. They are terrified*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:55:59 AM

Me: He's right though… I do have a lot of anger… *Looks Pensively at the hole Inderretta disappeared through…*
Aria: That's what the psychologist is for… *Scowls when she sees her words don't penetrate her friend's thoughts* Heeeeeelloooooo…
Me: *Waves her off, turning her attention to the arrival of Sonic and mutely watches the events*
Aria: *Respectively* It's like an exorcism… How's Sonic doing that??
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 10:38:24 AM

Sonic: *steps closer*
Shadow: AAAUGH!!! AAAAAGGH!!!! *writhes in pain on the ground, still clutching his head. His teeth return to normal, but he still has tenticals on his body, and arms*
TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:00:20 AM

Demon Shadow: *he advances on Eclipse, his claw ready to lunge at Eclipse's throat. His free hand was balled into a fist. He snarls, and hits Eclipse across the face*
Eclipse: aaagh! *touches where he has been hit, and looks at his father in shock, and fear*
Demon Shadow: GRRRAAAAAARRGH!!!
Eclipse: *closes his eyes, and tries to calm himself. He then opens them once more to roll under Shadow, and punch him from underneath. He then rolls out, and gets into a fighting stace*
Demon Shadow: RRRAAAWWWGH! *is barely affected*
mechadragon13 on July 18, 2008, 7:36:36 AM

Lightning: *thinking* i need a flippin' THUNDERSTORM!!! *stripes start dimming...* *thinking* running.. out of... power.....
Neo: crap. *looks around* wait! where's acid and vera???
Mikenno: *ear twitch* mm....... *both ears twitch, then, a flash of light*
Acid: *grins widely* are we too late?
Neo: no. what took you so long??
Vera: dumb cops tried to detain us XP *sees condemned* not dead yet, huh?
Me: *ratatatatatatatatatatat!!!* NOPE!!!
Acid: *lightbulb* idea!! Vera, distract condemned.
Vera: got it. *leaps into condemned's way* hey there condemned! here i am! come and get me. *dodges around condemned's attacks*
Acid: RAAAAAAAAAGH!!! *jumps on condemned's back and sinks his fangs into condemned's neck*
TheGameArtCritic on July 18, 2008, 9:00:38 AM

Me: oh that's not nice... holy shoot! ACID! I MEAN... uh... dude?
Eclipse: *fully gets up* huff... huff...
Condemned: oh. I see my host has awakened...
Eclipse: *very very very angry and intense* shut up... *hobbles over to Condemned*
Condemned: what are you going to do? BLEED on me? You're a cripple right now! AHAHAHAHA!
Eclipse: I won't let you hurt my friends...
Me: WOOOOOOO!!!!
Eclipse: This isn't where you belong, and yet you can change everything. You can even go beyond your own transformation limits... so i fgured... why not me?
Condemned: *ears droop* no...
Eclipse: *small smile* yes...
Me: he figured it out! HA!
Eclipse: *makes a thunderstorm appear out of no where to charge up Lightning* *A light aura glows off of Eclipse. Suddenly, his wounds are gone, and his arm has been repaired*
Condemned: NO!!!
Eclipse: *turns into a glowing white version of Condemned. Instead of Condemned's wings, however, there are angel wings* *his voice echoes when he speaks* FOR THE SAKE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD, TO FINALLY FREE MYSELF OF YOUR CHAINS FOREVER, CONDEMNED, I SHALL FIGHT YOU!!!
Condemned: *eyes narrow* bring it... *pushes Acid off him* *turns into his out-of-control form*
*the scene changes. It is day. A transparant Shadow, and a transparant Rouge cuddle a transparant baby Eclipse together. The sun shines on them all*
Condemned: how symbolic... heh...
Eclipse: *turns to his friends* guys... you stalled long enough for me to regain power... don't help me fight anymore... this is MY battle...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 18, 2008, 1:33:53 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 3:38:26 AM

Condemned: *lunges at Eclipse*
Eclipse: *flies up, and dodges it, then swoops down, and rips up Condemned's back from above*
Codemned: NNNRRRAAAAARRRGH!!!! *Uses a tentical to grab Eclipse's leg, and pull him down. Then Condemned pounces on Eclipse and slashes at his face*
Eclipse: agh! *mirrors Condemned's move*
*there is a big "latched on to each other rolling around and punching each other" fight*
Me: wooaaoooaaoohhh.... look at them GO!
Rosette: w-will Eclipse win..?
Me: i can't promise you that, but he now has a better chance, considering he can control his mindscape again...
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:05:41 AM

Acid: *has numerous puncture wounds, but none of them go all the way through* urgh.......... agh.... hey vera.....
Vera: acid..... *hugs him*
Acid: *hugs her back* i'll be ok..... oww..... *looks and sees eclipse* wow. looks like he got his strength back.
Neo: *nods* too right. *walks over to acid and vera* hey acid, you ok there?
Acid: yeah i'm fine......oww.
Neo: *small laugh* hey, acid. i was wrong about you. and.. i'm sorry.
*both acid and vera smile*
Lightning: *is fully charged, his stripes glow brightly* oh yeah!! *turns +Lightning* i'm ready now!!
Twilight: whoa, hold it right there, light.
+Lightning: ??
twilight: *points to eclipse* it's his fight now. *sits down*
+Lightning: *looks over* oh. i see. *powers down and sits next to Twilight* so now we wait?
Twilight: *nods* so now we wait.
Mikenno: *puts his hands down and opens his eyes*
Me: mikenno? what are you doing??
Mikenno: eclipse is in control now. i no longer have to fight to keep us in place.
Shidako: *still a dragon, lands next to them* the hedgehog is right. *shrinks down into a mobian-sized blue dragon*
Mikenno: i am NOT a hedgehog!
Shidako: *confused* then what are you??
Mikenno: i'm.......
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 4:25:17 AM

Eclipse and Condemned: *still fighting*
Eclipse: NOT AGAIN!! I'M NOT GETTING KICKED OUT AGAIN!! *zaps Condemned with a powerful energy*
Condemned: *is hit* GGGRRRAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!! *crashes down to the ground*
Eclipse: heh...
*in all the smoke emitting from the ground, Condemned zooms back up with full force and smashes into Eclipse*
Eclipse: AAAAGH!! *spits out some blood*
Me: oh geez...
Rosette: ECLIPSE!!! *fumbles aaround for her gun*
Me: *blocks her* NO!! WE MUST NOT INTERFERE!
Rosette: but...
Me: no.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 4:30:21 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:14:33 AM

Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...
Eclipse: that was before. This is now...
Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!
Eclipse: that's really too bad...
Condemned: no... no no no....
Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.
Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...
Me: he won?
Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*
teh room: *turns white again*
Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*
*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*
In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 8:53:07 AM

Twilight: .......... is it over?
Lightning: *looks around* i... i think it is.....
Neo: eclipse? are you ok?
Vera: he seems ok....... are you?
Acid: *sigh of relief* thank GOD, it's finally over!!!!!!!!!!!!
*everyone breathes a sigh of relief*
Me: yay!!! *glomps eclipse* oh whoops. *pulls away, keeping my hands on his shoulder* you are ok, right, eclipse?
Mikenno: *smiles* *thinking* it seems like our troubles are over.
Shidako: *goes back into the human form* looks like my work here is done...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 9:00:13 AM

Aria: *Staring blankly out into the distance* Is it over?? Didn't that seem… a bit too easy, in retrospect?? I mean… no offense Eclipse… but I don't think a demon that's… possessed you for countless years would disappear just like that…
*Her face still blank, with a creepy, eerie look on her face, she turns to face Mish* I mean, that's a great strategy for a predator. Allowing their prey to think that they were gone, while they were simply… hiding, waiting to strike once more… when the defenses are down, and the guards aren't in the castle…
Condemned would do that… that seems just like something he would do…
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 9:46:08 AM

Condemned: *is silently watching, away from everyone. He disappears, vowing revenge*
Eclipse: *his breathing is heavy, his eyes are tired. HE is tired from his inner battle. Eclipse falls down from exhaustion*
Me: i knew that would happen... come on guys... *lugs Eclipse over my shoulders, and in one step, dissapears to the field where Eclipse left, taking everyone with me* *places Eclipse down, head on a rock* *I dump water on him*
Eclipse: *sputters a bit then comes to* C-critic...
Rosette: Eclipse?
Eclipse: *weak smile* Rosette... i... feel... GOOD... I don't.. i don't feel like killing you anymore... i-it's great... is he... i mean... is Condemned gone?
Me: we think so...
Eclipse: *leaps up and hugs Rosette tightly* thank you... *he lets go, leaving Rosette standing there and blushing* Thank ALL of you... you saved me from... from myself... I owe you all greatly.
Sonic: *runs in with Shadow*
Shadow: we heard the news!
Sonic: are we too late??
Me: how can you guys be the fastest things on earth, and STILL be LATE??
Sonic: well... it was the same for Super Smash Brothers Brawl...
Shadow: nah-ah-ah! Don't include me on that! That was all YOU!
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 9:50:10 AM

Shidako: too right.......... *remembers* oh! mikenno...... back when we were in Eclipse's consciousness, you said you weren't a hedgehog. Then you said you couldn't say what you were in there. so i ask you again. *turns into a silver-gray-and-blue oriental dragon* what are you?
*everyone turns to mikenno expectantly*
Mikenno: i............. i am......... *sighs loudly*
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 10:49:33 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:20:40 AM
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 4:44:52 AM

Twilight: O.O thats why you didnt wanna say it.
Lightning: and you never told us??
Neo: *thinking* oh boy... this may not end well.....
Shidako: *roaring* I KNEW IT!!!!!! *growls slightly*
Me: oh gawd. not even i knew!!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 9:21:31 AM

Eclipse: woah... she's RIGHT!
Me: are you that suprised?
Eclipse: well... uh...
Me: see, the thing is, I'm so insane, emotions don't blind me (that much). For a few seconds, i can think straight and KNOW things. Well, not before doing something completelly random...
Eclipse: ah. That sounds like you.
*there is a presence behind me. It leaks the stench of evil all over the place*
Me: *i turn around, gasp, and back way up*
Mr. Inderretta: *breathes in deeply, and sighs* is it not a lovely day?
Eclipse: what do you want, crazy?
Mr. Inderretta:*sarcastically* oh... that really hurt... it really hurt here... *points at his heart* Eclipse... i heard the news... I heard you were....... seperated?
Eclipse: that's none of your business.
Mr. Inderretta: that's ok. I already know. *holds up a glowing blue vial* He may be "gone", but he's not fully gone. (omg story arc) where is your father, Eclipse?
Eclipse: why would i tell YOU?
Mr. Inderretta: *looks offended* excuse me? I just have a "PRESENT" for him... that's all... but that's ok... I'll just find him myself... *walks off*
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 9:51:22 AM

Mikenno: *opens eyes* that inderetta man....... he's trying to get shadow posessed.
Me: !!!!! HOW DO YOU KNOW THAAAT?????
Mikenno: *points to his head* mental powers, remember?
Twilight: so what do we do about this????
Lightning: we only just fixed THIS problem! we dont need another one!!
Neo: Lightning's right. we should go after inderetta.
Me: ok critic, what do you think?
Mikenno: *was thinking throughout the rest of the conversation* odd.... i had expected a completely different reaction from eclipse..... shidako, i understand, but i..... i could have sworn eclipse was going to get angry................. i was... wrong? *shakes head and smiles* well, there's a first time for everything.
TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 11:39:33 AM

Eclipse: I told you all before: I feel GOOD. I just... i feel like a weight on my my chest is GONE... *shakes his head* as for Mr. Inderretta and Dad, I think i know where to find them... in an hour.
Me: uh... and hour?
Eclipse: by then, he would have captured Dad and taken him into the secret hideout he keeps under his ex-company. We need to hustle after that.
Me: uhhhh.... oooookaaayy......
Rosette: stupid Inderretta.... why can't he leave us ALONE?
Me: 'cause he's a crazy old fart.
Rosette: ah.
mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 11:47:00 AM

Mikenno: *ear twitches and he closes his eyes* hmm...
Twilight: mik? you ok there?
Mikenno: *eyes snap open* i know where shadow is. at least, sort of.
Neo: where is he???
Mikenno: he's wherever he's living right now. he's lying in his bed. looks like he's trying to fall asleep.
Lightning: then we gotta go!!!
Shidako: i dont want to have to deal with ANOTHER bad demon!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:53:14 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 21, 2008, 10:16:05 AM

Mr. Inderretta: *laughs at Shadow, who is strapped to a hard, metalic table*
Shadow: what are YOU so cheery about, Devon?
Mr. Inderretta: oh, it's a happy day for me... Eclipse lost Condemned! I found out when i met him! I couldn't sense any bit of him! *he laughs maniacally, once more, then suddenly goes serious, and leans over Shadow* but I still have that remaining bit of Condemned... *holds up the blue vial, and swirls the contents* just enough so that you don't have Condemned's personality, but plenty of his HATE... *dumps the contents into a styringe* *gets in Shadow's face* lets see how you deal with UNcontrollable power... ahahahahaha!
Shadow: *spits in Mr. Inderretta's face*
Mr. Inderretta: *sputters a bit, then glares at Shadow* I'll get back to you in fifteen minutes... *walks off*
MEANWHILE
Eclipse: arighty... Mr. Inderretta's base... uh... I don't know where that is.
Me: neh. But WE do. We went there before. YO TWILLY!
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 5:56:02 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 6:14:54 AM

Men whial:
Mr. Inderretta: *comes back with the styringe* alright... now then Shadow... lets play in God's domain...
Shadow: hmph. You still haven't told me what you'll be doing exactly, Devon...
Mr. Inderretta: why spoil the suprise... *clears a patch of fur on Shadow's arm, and aims the needle* Oh. If you really want me to tell you... then... well... *leans over and whispers in Shadow's ear, making Shadow's eyes widen. Then he quickly injects Shadow with Condemned's contents*
Shadow: *gasps* NO! It's Condem - *he becomes dazed, and unfocused. His eyes glaze over as tiny blue tenticals the size of veins start to engulf him*
*Mr. Inderretta's insane laughter fills the room and echoes in the darkness*
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 6:57:44 AM

Me: NO! it's never too late. TWILIGHT! LETS GET A MOVE-ON!!! *takes off*
DaemonTwilight: GAWT IT!!! *runs like hell!!!!!!* *thinking* oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god!!! *wills herself to go faster* come on, twilly, RUN!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:30:17 AM
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:43:54 AM

Neo: YOU HAVE TO FLY FASTER MISH!!!
Me: i can only fly as fast as twilight can run!!! she's the only one that knows where the base is!! *on the speaker* Twilight!!! can you speed up a bit more????
DaemonTwilight: 8roars back* IM TRYING!!!! RAAAAWRGGGGH!!!! *wings sprout out* O.O whoa. thats a new one. okay... here goes!!!!! *leaps into the air and flies up to where the plane is* ALLRIGHT!!!! *RAAAWRG!!!! she flaps her wings powerfullly and she accelerates greatly*
Me: WHOA!! now we're talking!!! hold ooon.......... *accelerates the plane to keep up with twilight*
Everyone else: *fall back against their seats from the acceleration*
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:49:04 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 22, 2008, 10:16:40 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 1:11:20 AM
mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:41:41 AM

Shidako: well??
Mikenno: i am a..... *turns away* i cannot say it. not now. not here.
SHidako: *narrows eyes* hmph. *thinking* what could he be that could be so bad to say? unless....... *eyes widen* is it possible...?
Acid: *gets up painfully* agh....... well, looks like all we can do is take a break....... i'm goin' over to Lightning and Twilight.
Vera: ok. *helps aacid walk over there*
Neo: *stays with mish* ....... i never thought i'd get involved in somthing like this.
Me: me neither. i mean, sure we fight egghead every once in a while, but fighting to save our friend's consciousness?
Neo: yeah, i know. this is big.
Me: wanna go over to everyone else?
Neo: *nods and walks to where the others are*
Lightning: ........ i hope eclipse gets through ok.
Twilight: *clings to his arm* he will. we have to believe that.
Acid+Vera: *sit down next to them*
Neo+Mish: *sit down also*
TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:15:17 AM

*teh battle is huge, it goes on for a while, but finally,in a fight for victory, Eclipse manages to pin Condemned down*
Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...
Eclipse: that was before. This is now...
Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!
Eclipse: that's really too bad...
Condemned: no... no no no....
Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.
Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...
Me: he won?
Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*
teh room: *turns white again*
Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*
*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*
In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*
mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 8:04:59 AM

Me: YEAH!!! I HAVEN'T FLOWN THIS FAST IN FOREVER!!! *plane is now going at 600+ mph!!!*
Neo: oh my GAAAAAWWWWD!!! *is hanging on for dear life*
Mikenno: *is totally calm and has his eyes closed*
Lightning: *is as freaked out as everyone in the plane combined* GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
Shidako: *rolls eyes* i fly all the time...... but not nearly this fast!! WHOO!!!
DaemonTwilight: *starts slowing down* *roars* HEY GUYYYYS!!! I CAN SEE IT!!! I'M GOIN' DOWN!!! *flies up, then comes to a dead stop in the air, she starts to fall and she folds her wings in*
Me: *slows down the plane* whoa.....
Lightning: TWILLY!!! whats wrong with her??? she's falling!!!
Shidako: calm down hedgie-boy! it's called freefall. it's very exhilarating ^^
Me: and that's exactly what we're gonna do!! *flies up, then turns towards the ground in an odd angle that makes everyone have zero-gravity for like, a minute or so*
TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 8:13:28 AM

Rosette: *places her hand over his mouth* ssshhhh...
Eclipse: *is terrified*
Me: WOOOOOHOOOHOOOO!!!! MAKE IT CRASH!!! MAKE IT CRASH MISH, I WANNA DIE AGAIN!!!! XD
Eclipse: *is going to strangle me with anything he finds lying around. He was trained for that. He can choke someone with a PENCIL*
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 5:19:53 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 5:26:29 AM

Rosette: uhhhh.... i dunno.
Me: we better... Eclipse is minutes away from completelly losing it... forever...
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUNNNNNNN
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 15, 2008, 5:30:40 AM
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 5:56:17 AM

Twilight: oh god.............
Lightning: oh no... i really hope you're wrong about this, mish....
Neo: whats so bad about moonglow asylum?
Twilight+Lightning: *wide-eyed freaking-out look at neo*
Neo: .....ah.
Acid: oh i've heard of Moonglow asylum. only the worst of the worst go there.
Vera: we had to bust someone out once. we can get eclipse out if necessary.
Neo: ok guys.... hold on! *holds out an arm*
Everyone on my side: *grabs on to his arm*
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 6:05:18 AM

MEN WHIAL (lol)
Eclipse: *is sweating, and in terrible pain* AAAAAAAAAGH!!!! Agh... agh... *labored breathing* W-wha... what's h-happening to me..? Has Condemned... *huff* gained enough energy..? *lowers his head* *tenticals squirm all over his back*
Eclipse's Shadow: *it's eyes narrow*
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 6:23:15 AM

(they all appear in front of the insane asylum)
Me: is this it, critic?
Twilight+lightning: O.O *wide eyes of fear*
Neo: uh... guys?
Acid: ........... this place....... *looks down* eclipse is here. i can feel it.
Vera: *nods*
*there is a disturbance in the force. shidako pops out of nowhere*
Shidako: whoa..... hello.............
Me: shidako??? *realization* critic must have warped you.
Everyone else: ???
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 6:27:01 AM
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 6:37:53 AM

Lightning: *runs in and confronts a freaked-out person behind the desk* YOU! what floor is eclipse on? a black and white hedgehog? thought he was posessed by a monster?
Desk-person: th-th-th-thirteenth floor!!!! *hides*
Lightning: thanks. come on guys!!!
(everyone follows, all start going up the stairs)
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 6:45:18 AM

Eclipse: *is on his knees, with tenticals in his back, squirming. The therapist's rotting corpse is in front of him. Eclipse, though his eyes are open, is unconcious. Every now and then, he makes a violent twitch, and grunts in pain*
Me: oh geez... this looks aweful...
Rosette: Eclipse... oh my god....
Me: ROSETTE!!! DON'T STEP ANYWHERE NEAR HIM!
Rosette: w-what? why?
Me: *gets out a pencil, and rolls it near Eclipse*
Eclipse: *his tenticals shoot out and relentlessly attack the pencil until it has been grounded into dust*
Me: THAT'S why. Hey. Does anyone have mental powers? Something that can send our wills into Eclipse's head? It looks like he needs a spot of help at the moment...
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 7:07:55 AM

Shidako: what??
Me: MIKENNO! HE HAS MIND CONTROL!!!!!!!
Mikenno: *appears out of the shadows* you called?
twilight: we need you to send our will into eclipse's mind. at least an image of us.
Mikenno: an image is possible. stand together. and send your messages. *closes his eyes and extends one hand to eclipse and one hand to us*
Twilight: Eclipse!! eclipse, you cant give up. please...
Lightning: hey man dont give up now!!! you're stronger than this!!
Neo: eclipse! listen to us! you cant let condemned take over. you cant!!
Shidako: you cant give up now, hedgehog. you must be strong. you must free yourself of this demon. it has been done before. and you can do it again!!!!
Acid: hey man, i'm sorry for what i did. i never meant it! please, don tgive up now... you have to beat that thing!!
Vera: please eclipse, listen to us. you have to beat that demon. please dont give in!!
Me: eclipse, please. be strong eclipse. you have to... you cant let condemne use you as a puppet. you must be strong. please!!!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 15, 2008, 7:34:53 AM
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 7:39:36 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 10:21:18 AM

Eclipse: g-g-grrrrrrrRRRAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! *a dark aura emits from Eclipse. His eyes turn red, but his normal irises are still there. He's fighting a battle that he may lose*
Me: wait... no. He can see us now. He's concious.
Eclipse: *his voice is a double voice again, and is mixed with a hissing* whyyy...??? Why are you here...???
Me: well we wanted to help you...
Eclipse: *winces in pain* Yyyyou have nnno idea... whatssss going on right now... I locked myssssself away for a reason...
Me: I already know what's going on. We ALL do. Did you get our messages?
Eclipse: i... i did... NNRFH!! *hunges over, and grits his teeth*
Rosette: you have to hold on!
Eclipse: I CAN'T! GRRRAAAGH!!!
Me: *thinks for a bit* hey.. wait... *turns to Eclipse* hey man. Maybe we can fight this together... *grabs EVERYONE* GAIS!!! ALRIGHTY!!! WE SHALL VENTURE INTO ECLIPSE'S SOUL!!!!
Rosette: WHAT??
Eclipse: *eyes turn pure red* AAAAAAGH!!!
Rosette: OMG DO IT!!
mechadragon13 on July 16, 2008, 12:36:31 AM

Mikenno: *understands* i see what you are doing. but this will require an amazing amount if courage from all of us. are you ready for this?
Lightning: *nods* anything to help Eclipse.
Neo: I agree. Eclipse is more important right now.
Me: *nods*
Twilight: alright. lets do this. Mikenno!
Mikenno: *nods* Alright. Critic, you know more about Eclipse and Condemned than we do. I will take you, but you have to lead us. Ready?
(all nod)
Mikenno: Alright. Here we go!!!!!! *flash of light*
((you lead, Critic!!))
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 16, 2008, 12:49:18 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 16, 2008, 2:34:32 AM

*Condemned, who has taken on his out-of-control form, is leering at Eclipse, who is on his knees, and in terrible shape. He has gashes and bruises all over his body. There is a puddle of blood spreading out from underneath him. His right arm is broken, it looks like he's bleeding internally too, considering blood is dripping from his mouth. His eyes look up at Condemned with dispair. His breathing is harsh*
Rosette: *gasps* Eclipse... oh my god... what is Condemned DOING to him???
Me: Condemned is trying to destroy Eclipse's will... permanently. By the looks of it, Eclipse can't fight anymore.
Condemned: *to Eclipse* AHAHAHAHAHA!!! I told you before, and I'll tell you again! YOU ARE NOTHING WITHOUT ME.
Eclipse: *simply looks down at the ground, awaiting the final blow*
mechadragon13 on July 16, 2008, 5:21:11 AM

Lightning: *hands crackle with electricity* *wolf-like growl* this one's for eclipse!!!! *charges*
SHidako: *draws sword* demon creature, you're goin' down!!! *eyes are intense electric blue*
Neo: *looks around* *thinking* no technology.... oh well. hand-to-hand time! *goes to attack condemned*
Me: *holds Neo back* no, we have to help eclipse.
Neo: ....... okay. *boht run over to eclipse, who is still on the floor* wait... what about mikenno?
Mikenno: *eyes closed tightly in concentration, arms held forward towards eclipse, he is muttering something quietly*
Me: we cant disturb him, otherwise we'll be knocked out of here and eclipse will be killed.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 16, 2008, 5:28:55 AM

Aria: *Nods* Mmkay… *Starts running and leaps into the air. She pumps her wings a few times and she stays airborne* Here Demny!! here Boy!! Follow the pretty birdie!! *All said in mockingly sweet tone as she flies over Condemned, and then away from Eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on July 16, 2008, 7:49:45 AM

Condemned: NNRRRRAAGH!!! THIS IS MY DOMAIN!! *slashes at them all, then buries his hand into the white ground*
Me: oh wait! I know what he's doing!
Condemned: *tenticals sprout from the ground, all over the place. Condemned's attackers are hit. he also hits Neo.
Me: *gets impaled with a tentical* MY SHIRT! YOU GOT BLOOD ON MY NEW SHIRT! DAMN YOU!
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 16, 2008, 8:58:59 AM
mechadragon13 on July 16, 2008, 9:13:07 AM

Lightning: *lands on his feet* *wolf-snarl* oh no you don't!! *stripes glow brighly, he crackles with electricity* you don't belong here, Condemned. GET OUT!!! *Tackles Condemned while loosing an electric charge at the same time*
Neo: AAAGH!!! *flies a bit away* oww..... *gets up painfully*
Me: *thinking* neo's not good when it comes to physical fighting. he's gonna get hurt.... *runs over to him* NEO! are you ok???
Neo: *stands painfully* i-i'm fine....... ow...
Me: you should sit out for a bit. don't get close to Eclipse or Condemned might go crazy again.........
Neo: ok.......
Mikenno: *is physically straining to keep everyone in place* grr................
Me: Help Fugue guard Mikenno. *runs off to help in the fight* take this, condemned!! *pulls out a high-tech-looking gun and starts trying to shoot Condemned from a distance*
TheGameArtCritic on July 16, 2008, 9:38:15 AM

Me: MALIFICENT RIP-OFF!!!! *is stabbed again* hey Mish? Just letting you know, you're an artist. You can't get hurt here. Or anywhere. At all. *head gets sliced off* I HATE YOOOUUUUU!!!!!
Rosette: GAH! MY GOD!! *fires gun at him*
Bullets: *bounce off Condemned*
Condemned: i control this place now... *sneers*
Me: NAAAGHA! YOU SUCK!
Condemned: *thinks* hmm... heh! I got it!
Teh Room: *glows all over the place*
Me: he's sending us into one of Eclipse's memories as a battle ground.... *sigh* WONDERFUL...
Teh Room: *turns into an open field. Images of people are see through, but everything else is solid. There is a transparant bunny, and a transparant Condemned. A transparant Sonic comes in and stops Condemned from killing the bunny with an energy blast*
Me: ah. Eclipse's first transformation...
TEH REAL!Condemned: *smashes his dragon-tail to the ground, causing an earthquake*
Me: SCALEY PART IS HIGHLY ARMORED! GO FOR HIS BELLY!!
Condemned: *raises huge claw, and swats at Twilight*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 16, 2008, 1:12:49 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 16, 2008, 1:25:19 PM

Eclipse: *eyes slowly open* ...i...hurt... ack! *spits out blood* *tries to get up, slowly, and shaking, showing that it's difficult for him. For blood "splooshes" onto the ground*
Rosette: *notices Eclipse* Hey... HEY! Mish! Critic! Maggie! He's coming to!
mechadragon13 on July 17, 2008, 3:23:14 AM

Shidako: *red eyes* heheheh... no he's not! *starts transforming* if he wants to fight as a dragon, then let him FIGHT ONE!!! *has become an enormous black dragon with burning red-eyes and flames coming out of her nose* BRING IT ON, DEMON!!!!!!!!!!! *RAAAWR!!!!! she leaps into the air and hovers, charging up a fireball, then looses it onto condemned* RAAAGH!!!
Lightning: *looks around* *thinks* grr.... i need a freaking THUNDERSTORM!!!!!! *charges up electricity and barrels into condemned*
Neo: wait... *looks around* aha! *sees a car* gotcha. *lifts car off the ground and rearranges it's parts until it's a giant machine-gun* MISH! GET IN HERE!!
Me: got it!! *jumps into the seat of the gun* heheheh.... sweet job, Neo! *aims it at condemned* eat bullets, demon scum!!!!!! *shoots at condemned!!!! ra-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-....*
Mikenno: grrr......... *thinking* he is getting stronger.... i must not give in!! *uses more power*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 17, 2008, 4:45:45 AM
mechadragon13 on July 17, 2008, 4:53:07 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 17, 2008, 10:46:55 AM

*the open field glows a bright white. The scene changes into a rooftop, with thirty dead thugs laying in pools of blood*
Condemned: *changes from a dragon, to a clone of eclipse with fangs for teeth, tenticals coming out of his wrists, and long claws*
Me: HEY!!! ECLIPSE HAS A TRADEMARK TO PROTECT, WHAT'S YOUR EXCUSE??? *is stabbed for the billionth time* ow...
Eclipse: *looks up at Condemned, glaring at him*
Rosette: oh no! That form he's taken on! I... i couldn't shoot anything that looks like Eclipse... I could never...
Condemned: AHAHAHAHAHA!! *claws Rosette*
Rosette: aaaauug! *backs away, clutching her now bleeding arm*
Eclipse: *struggling to get up* s-s-stop... it... *falls down again, spilling more blood*
sonicfan1 on July 13, 2008, 1:29:21 PM
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mechadragon13 on July 12, 2008, 3:12:38 AM

Vera: acid! *runs over to him and hugs him* that was amazing. i'm so proud of you........
Acid: thanks vera.... *hugs her back*
Lightning: *eyes open and he sits up*
Twilight: so it's true...... there is no light in his eyes....... Lightning? are ya there?
Lightning: *shakes head* *actually speaks, but in a creepy, almost alien voice* his soul is not present....
Twilight: oh...... Fira? if you sense his soul, tell us....
Me: but i thought he couldnt speak..?
Twilight: my daemons are doing the best they can to help, but i dont want to strain them too much..... so...rosette? you'll have to help me out with this. you had this happen once already....
TheGameArtCritic on July 12, 2008, 6:02:45 AM
mechadragon13 on July 12, 2008, 7:28:55 AM

Neo: twilight? Twilight!!
Twilight: *looks away* huh?? oh..... sorry..i couldnt help it.....
Me: so...... who has the soul finder?
Neo: ..... good question.......
Acid: *steps forward with vera* again, is there anything we can do to help? anything at all?
TheGameArtCritic on July 12, 2008, 8:42:17 AM

Soul Finder: *is pretteh good*
Eclipse: really, all you CAN do is wait... it takes a while...
Rosette: *notices Twilight* TWILIGHT! Yeesh! DO NOT look into his eyes, because, and I've told you before, it's UPSETTING! I know it's hard, but please try not to...
Me: whee! The soul finder is working!
mechadragon13 on July 12, 2008, 8:48:04 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 12, 2008, 9:22:29 AM
mechadragon13 on July 12, 2008, 9:26:12 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 12, 2008, 9:33:02 AM
mechadragon13 on July 12, 2008, 9:41:56 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 12, 2008, 9:46:25 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 12, 2008, 12:43:34 PM
mechadragon13 on July 13, 2008, 5:24:11 AM

Twilight: LIIIGHTNING!!! *runs to hiiim* lightning, are you there??
Lightning: *suddedly opens his eyes* aagh!!! *fire daemon shoots out of him*
Fira: it is done. *flies back into Twilight*
Twilight: grrrrrrack... *colors and appearance return to normal* agh..... yuck....... *back to Lightning* lightning..? are you there.....?
Neo+Me+Acid+Vera: *wide eyes, waiting for a response from lightning*
Lightning: ...... gaah................................. T-.........twilly?
Twilight: LIGHTNING!!!!!! *hugs of luvvv*
Me:
TheGameArtCritic on July 13, 2008, 6:23:33 AM

Me: I'M HAPPY AGAIN!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAYYY!
Eclipse: well then... I guess... that's it for me...
Rosette: hey.. what? What do you mean "that's it"?
Eclipse: I'm leaving, Rosette. I'm leaving for the good of others.
Rosette: w-what? NO!!!
Eclipse: Shh.. i already decided.
mechadragon13 on July 13, 2008, 6:52:15 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 13, 2008, 6:56:05 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 13, 2008, 9:33:29 AM
mechadragon13 on July 13, 2008, 10:05:56 AM

Twilight: *to eclipse, but still looking at lightning* he's right eclipse....... he's here.......... *helps him up, tears forming in her eyes*
Lightning: thanks, twilly....
Twilight: oh lightning!!! *hugs him fiercly* dont ever go away again... please...... i wont be able to take it..... *is totally tearing up*
Lightning: twilly...... *hugs her back* i promise. i'l never leave you again..... *is also tearing up*
Me: *is trying not to tear up, but is failing*
Neo: *tears up also* good to have ya back lighning.........
TheGameArtCritic on July 13, 2008, 1:48:17 PM

Me: oh no...
Rosette: I WON'T LET YOU LEAVE!!! *desperatly clings to his arm* I DON'T CARE IF YOU WANT TO KILL ME, RIGHT NOW!!! I WON'T LET YOU GO AGAIN!!!
Eclipse: *sighs, and pulls his arm away* *without looking at Rosette, but directing his words to her* don't follow me...
Rosette: b-b-but... *starting to tear*
Eclipse: DON'T follow me!
Rosette: Eclipse...
Eclipse: *walks off until he is out of sight*
Me: D:
Rosette: *stares out onto the horizon for a bit, then falls onto her knees and starts sobbing*
Me: he did it... he actually did it...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 14, 2008, 12:05:00 AM
mechadragon13 on July 14, 2008, 5:03:09 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 14, 2008, 10:08:14 AM

meanwhile...
Eclipse: *is walking down a city street. He plans to find a place that's abandoned, and has no sign of life*
Someone kinda shady looking: *leaning against a wall, glares at Eclipse as Eclipse walks past him*
Eclipse: *thinking* hmph... this place isn't too friendly... I'll have to be careful here...
*some thugs jump Eclipse*
Eclipse: *mutters every swear word he knows under his breath*
Thug Leader: YOU'RE IN OUR STREET!
Eclipse: listen guys...
Thug1: shaddup!
Eclipse: *sighs*
mechadragon13 on July 14, 2008, 11:21:15 AM

(everyone in my group is sitting in a booth at an icecream shop)
Twilight: i cant believe he really left....
Lightning: yeah... i mean, i know he feels bad, but we told him it wasnt his fault........
Neo: but he didnt listen. he was being too hard on himself..
Me: too right.....
Twilight: *shudder* i cant help but feel like.... like somthings wrong................
TheGameArtCritic on July 14, 2008, 12:08:25 PM

Rosette: WHAT?? WHAT IS IT???
Me: he's refusing to use Condemned. At all. No super strength, no claws. Nothing. What's he DOING???
Rosette: i think he's afraid to use Condemned again...
Me: oh no.
MEANWHILE:
Thug2: come ON! Don't you have ANY money? ANYTHING?
Eclipse: *calmly* I told you. I'm broke.
Thug1: LIAR! *smashes Eclipse against a wall*
Eclipse: Gah!
Thug Leader: Well... if there really is no money, I think we have to mess up his face...
Eclipse: ... heh. You guys are terrible at holding people... you have to always make sure the victims legs are held down, or else THIS happens... *smashes his knee into the thug's... er... "sensitive spot"*
Thug1: *drops down, whimpering*
Eclipse: stupid noob thugs... *hits Thug2 real good in the stomach, then darts off, away from any more trouble*
mechadragon13 on July 15, 2008, 1:29:56 AM

Lightning: you wouldt be nothing. it'd be different is all.
Twilight: but i wouldnt have met you guys and joined Hybrid Nation...... *hugs lightning* *quietly* i wouldnt have met you........
Lightning: *hugs her back* eclipse will be fine. he has experience from being in a gang.... it could save his life.
Neo: good point there.
Acid: *walks in with vera* hey guys....
Neo: hey a----
Acid: *SHHH!!!* Emerald. remember?
Neo: oh.
Acid+Vera: *sit*
Vera: hey.. where's eclipse?
Twilight: he left...........
Me: *sigh* i hope he realizes his mistake............
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 15, 2008, 1:58:02 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 15, 2008, 3:24:13 AM

Eclipse is now in a top-notch Insane Aslyum. He figures that maybe it can keep him in check.
Eclipse: *the light that hangs over him darkens his features, and hides his eyes in shadows. It makes him look sinister*
Eclipse's Shadow: *is in the shape of Condemned with his wings spread out all over the cell*
A Therapist: *walks in, pulling a chair behind her, and sits infront of Eclipse* I don't think you should be here.
Eclipse: *in a dull tone, without looking up* i want to keep the monster inside me at bay...
Teh Therapist: yes, yes. That's all you've said since you got here. Is this "monster" imaginary? Maybe this monster is an image that you THINK you see, but really you need help with your violent nature...
Eclipse: *finally looks up* I wish he WAS imaginary... of course, he couldn't be, because when i transform, others see it as well...
Teh Therapist: *sigh* there IS no monster... i wish you could see that *gets up and walks a little closer to Eclipse*
Eclipse: i wouldn't get any closer.
Teh Therapist: *laughs* you're in a straight jacket. I don't think I'm in any danger... *steps closer*
Eclipse: *lowers his head once more* *unseen from behind, tenticals start to rip out of the straight jacket*
Teh Therapist: *crouches down so she is face-to-face with Eclipse* there... see? Nothings happeni -
Eclipse: *the tenticals rips out of the straight jacket completely, and start stabbing the Therapist in all directions until, finally, she is cold, and swimming in a pool of her own blood* *to the dead body* I warned you... i warned you not to get any closer... he's too unstable now... too unstable... my will gets weaker every day...
MEANWHILE:
Me: *eyes widen again, my hands tremble, and i shudder* H-he killed someone... Eclipse killed a female therapist down at what looks like an Insane Asylum... I can't believe she didn't notice his shadow... it would have saved her...
Rosette: his shadow?
Me: yeah. I-i-it's changed.... it doesn't look like Eclipse anymore... it looks like Condemned... Maybe Eclipse was right to do this... maybe he sensed that Condemned was getting stronger, while his will was getting tired of fighting...
OH!
Rosette: what?
Me: We need to track Eclipse down! We need to hurry!
mechadragon13 on July 8, 2008, 9:31:25 AM

Vera: they're right, Acid... we should have known.....
Twilight: no....no.......
Me: *turns on acid* you killed him.... you killed Lightning...... *is now yelling* HOW WILL HYBRID NATION FEEL ABOUT THIS??? HOW DO YOU THINK TWILIGHT FEELS ABOUT THIS???? *is totally pissed, but still crying* even if you get away, you will have dozens of mobians looking for you and a huge bounty on your head. so dont even THINK about moving. *opens up some more guns on the plane*
Twilight: no...... NOOO!!!!!! *totally loses it and goes into an extremely powerful and uncontrollable form of the wolfidna demon, smoke coming out of it's nostrils and front claws covered in ice* GRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!! *totally goes after acid*
TheGameArtCritic on July 8, 2008, 2:47:06 PM

Me: I WANT THIS "ACID" FIGURE ARRESTED!!!! I WANT ALL HIS "FRIENDS" ARRESTED AS WELL!!! *conjurs up some cops*
Rosette: oh my god... oh my god... *keeps trying to look away from Lightning, but failing*
Eclipse: *falls down onto his kness* *he still stares at his blood-drenched hands* i can't believe i let this happen... no... all my fault... this is... this is all my fault...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 9, 2008, 3:42:57 AM

Me: You mean… have Neo go back and try to fix it??
Aria: A paradox, a paradox, a most ingenious paradox!!! That's what we need!! And we have to hurry!! Time and tide wait for no man!!!
mechadragon13 on July 9, 2008, 6:07:17 AM

Neo: *appears* what is it whats wrong?? *sees lightning* oh no. no-no-no-no-no. not possible. please tell me this isnt happening....
Me: *starts tearing up again* unfortunately it is.... we need you to go back and fix this. go back, and stay hidden until Acid takes out his emerald. then, snatch it and get away. that should fix things over here....
Neo: got it... *is about to start tearing up* im gone! *pushes a button on his watch and disappears*
Me: now to deal with... *looks around* ... Acid? *swears loudly and profusely* HES GONE!
DemonTwilight: *is standing there, glaring at mish, smoke coming out its mouth*
Me: oh no. *jumps into plane and flies off*
DemonTwilight: *sprouts wings and follows*
meanwhile.....
mechadragon13 on July 9, 2008, 6:13:41 AM

Acid: oh whats the matter? too overwhelmed? i have more to add. *grin* when Dr. Robotnik went up to the ark to use the eclipse cannon, he found an undidcovered locked room. so he opened it. Lo and behold, there i was. After he released me, he immediately realized that he had gained a very powerful ally. I was 15 at the time.
Twilight: *blood firey red* you LIAR! *pounces at acid and pins him down to the floor* YOU LIE! TELL US THE TRUTH!
Acid: *laugh* well, im sorry to say, that WAS the truth.
Twilight: *ears droop* b-but...no.. *gets off* h-hes telling the truth...... *eyes fade back to dark blue*
Lightning: O.O no way..........
Eclipse: NOO!!! *Condemned uses his rage to take over his body*
Condenmned: free.... i am free once more... i can kill once more... AND IT'S ALL ECLIPSE'S FAULT FOR RELEASING ME! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *stretches out his claws, then proceeds to attack Twilight*
Mish: WRONG PERSON! WRONG PERSON!!!
((continue the present!!! i'll work more on the past next post))
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 6:43:49 AM

Eclipse: *is now falling apart* this is ALL MY FAULT! I should have CONTROLLED Condemned BETTER! Now Lightning's DEAD! *is tearing up*
Rosette: *is sobbing*
Me: Twilly... TWILLY!!! *runs to the Wolfidna Daemon* oh no! She must have gone out of control!
Eclipse: *looks up to Twilight-Daemon* yeah...
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 9, 2008, 7:24:07 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 7:25:31 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 9, 2008, 7:31:13 AM

Me: A butterfly flaps its wings in South America, Hurricane Katrina hits New Orleans. The same butterfly flaps its wings again, New Orleans has clear skies… do you get it??
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 7:31:46 AM
mechadragon13 on July 9, 2008, 7:50:26 AM

me: WHOA!!! *steers it away* im sorry for this!! *takes out the laser guns* SORRY TWILLY!!! *starts shooting non-lethal shots*
WolfidnaDaemon: *starts trying to dodge them, but the sheer number of them knocks her down, and temporarily out* grr........... *KO*
Me: oh god....... the world is going to hell......
meanwhile......
Neo: come on... come ON! wheres the emerald!?
Twilight: *is trying to get a hit in*
Lightning: *manages a small zap at condemned's arm*
Acid: *is attempting to get up* yeowch....
unknown snake girl: *sneaks in unseen* acid... *pokes acid in the arm* hey acid it's me. come on lets get outta here.
Condemned: GRRAAAAARRRR!!! *pushes them all away* *FINALLY targets Acid* *snarls at Acid, and charges at him in an insane bloodrage*
Acid: WHOA! *jumps over condemned as he charges under him* oh no you didnt! here.....lets try this..... *takes out his emerald*
Neo: gotcha! *speeds out and snateches the emerald* "oh no you didnt!" heheheheh... i'll be taking this!!
Acid: No! WAIT!!
Neo: *warps somewhere far away and throws the emerald in a lake* there..... that should do something... lets see what happened..... *presses button and warps back*
((back to the present!!! what happens now?))
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 7:55:15 AM
mechadragon13 on July 9, 2008, 8:01:29 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 8:18:01 AM
mechadragon13 on July 9, 2008, 9:38:11 AM

Acid: *seriously scraed for his life* NO! DONT! PLEASE!
Vera: *honestly pleading* dont hurt him!! please dont!!!
DaemonTwilight: *joins condemned* he doesnt deserve to live. not after what he did!!! *if ya look closely, you can see a tear rolling down it's cheek* we will show no mercy!!
Neo: *realization* oh no...... *looks around and sees...* lightning.......
Me: it.... it didnt work........ NO!!!!!
DaemonTwilight *ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAARGHH!!!!!!!!*
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 9, 2008, 12:56:49 PM
TheGameArtCritic on July 9, 2008, 1:46:58 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 9, 2008, 9:14:26 PM
mechadragon13 on July 10, 2008, 6:26:10 AM

Vera: NO!! PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! I BEG YOU!!
DaemonTwilight: *maniacal laughter* RAAHAHAHAHAH!!! *goes to bite down on acid's leg*
Me: condemned is out of control!! aria is right. we have no right to kill him!! *gets in the plane* sorry guys!!! *takes out the cannons and shoots a targeted energy blast at condemned and DaemonTwilly*
Neo: grrr........ *raises hands and a car flies up above his head. he holds it there threateningly* grr...... *looks back and forth between acid and the demons* grr......
Me: neo..... cool it....
TheGameArtCritic on July 10, 2008, 10:19:59 AM
mechadragon13 on July 11, 2008, 12:46:46 AM

DaemonTwilight: *returns to normal and is unconcious(spell check)* urrrgh....
Me: ......... we might end up doing something like that..... but i think we should use one of Twilights daemons. she has two. i think she can spare one for a while...
Twilight: *becomes conscious* err........ ugh...... what happened? *remembers* ........lightning......................... no................
Me: do you think it would work?
Acid: *freaked from the near death experience* *is also in pain* aghhh....
Vera: *relieved, she runs over to acid and hugs him* acid!!! you're ok.......
TheGameArtCritic on July 11, 2008, 1:41:18 AM

Eclipse: nnngh... *wakes up* w-what happened..? huh? *see's blood on his hands* *has a repeat of last time, and is all emo*
Rosette: i think the deamon idea is good... it's for a good cause...
mechadragon13 on July 11, 2008, 7:16:09 AM

Twilight: *sniffle* they do.... everyone always notices how i heal so fast.....
Neo: then.... then maybe we should try it.
Vera: *still clinging to acid* is......... *gets angry stares* is there any way i can help?
Acid: i--- *gets VERY angry stares* i wanna help too....
everyone: WTF??????
TheGameArtCritic on July 11, 2008, 8:53:17 AM
mechadragon13 on July 11, 2008, 9:16:13 AM

Acid: i-i didnt mean for this to happen....... i didnt know this could happen........ i thought you would be able to handle him.....i guess i underestimated his strength.... and his ferocity....... i....... yes.....i feel guilt. and i admit it. *gently pushes vera away and takes a few steps forward, holding his arms at his sides* do with me what you will. i wont resist.
Vera: acid....... *is tearing up*
Twilight: *eyes open wide* agh! *fiery energy starts swirling around her* *looks around* watch out you guys... fire daemon comin' out!!!! RRRAGH!!
Fira (fire daemon): *a big red wolf-like spirit bursts out of her and lands in front of her*
Twilight: *closes eyes and points at lightning* *pauses* ..........................go.
Fira: *rears up like a horse* I obey. *runs towards lightning, then stops, sniffs at his body, backs up, and literally jumps in*
Twilight: *gasps and falls to the floor* agh.... that takes a lot outta ya........... *colors fade into a more white- blue and her ears shrink*
Me: ............well...... now what?
TheGameArtCritic on July 11, 2008, 9:31:31 AM

Eclipse: *stands up, and walks to Acid* I won't kill you. Not in cold blood. I'm not a murderer, Acid. Just remember... some things aren't going to be entirely in your control. Also... *tiny smile* that girl... Vera? Don't blow your chance with her... *turns around, and walks to where Twilight is*
mechadragon13 on June 30, 2008, 11:25:30 AM

Acid: O.O well that was unexpected. doesnt matter. i have a few tricks up my sleeve as well... this one being literal. *pulls an acid green chaos emerald out of his sleeve* made for me especially by Dr. robotnik. *evil grin* your father and i arent that different, eclipse.
Twilight+Lightning: LEGASP!
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 11:36:34 AM
mechadragon13 on June 30, 2008, 11:52:08 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 12:04:11 PM
mechadragon13 on June 30, 2008, 12:08:08 PM
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 12:19:10 PM
mechadragon13 on July 1, 2008, 4:07:14 AM

twilight: y-you.... LIE! *eyes start turning red also*
Lightning: uhh, mish? critic? twilly and eclipse are gonna lose it real soon......
Me: no kidding!!
TheGameArtCritic on July 1, 2008, 4:19:33 AM

Eclipse: *eyes turn pure red* GAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Me.: oh there we go.
Eclipse: *heavy breathing, he falls down*
me: oh you made him mad. Or seriously messed up. I THINK IT'S MIXED FEELINGS!
Eclipse: nnnnrrrrrghhhh... *more fangs*
mechadragon13 on July 1, 2008, 4:28:26 AM

Twilight: *blood firey red* you LIAR! *pounces at acid and pins him down to the floor* YOU LIE! TELL US THE TRUTH!
Acid: *laugh* well, im sorry to say, that WAS the truth.
Twilight: *ears droop* b-but...no.. *gets off* h-hes telling the truth...... *eyes fade back to dark blue*
Lightning: O.O no way..........
Me: yes way...... by the way, im using colors cuz i have too many characters on XD
TheGameArtCritic on July 1, 2008, 6:09:00 AM

Eclipse: NOO!!! *Condemned uses his rage to take over his body*
Condenmned: free.... i am free once more... i can kill once more... AND IT'S ALL ECLIPSE'S FAULT FOR RELEASING ME! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *stretches out his claws, then proceeds to attack Twilight*
Me: WRONG PERSON! WRONG PERSON!!!
mechadragon13 on July 1, 2008, 8:03:51 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 1, 2008, 9:46:55 AM
mechadragon13 on July 2, 2008, 4:32:39 AM

Twilight: WHOA! *dodge* ok thats it. *goes daemon* bring it! *pulls an avatar rip-off and freezes condemned to the floor*
Lightning: need backup? *looks up to teh sky, closes his eyes, and concentrates* come on.... come on...
Me: O.O BUT WHAT ABOUT ACIIIID????
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 3, 2008, 12:20:34 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 3, 2008, 2:44:09 PM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 3, 2008, 3:11:52 PM
mechadragon13 on July 4, 2008, 6:44:19 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 4, 2008, 11:53:37 AM
mechadragon13 on July 5, 2008, 9:55:42 AM

Twilight: *is trying to get a hit in*
Lightning: *manages a small zap at condemned's arm*
Acid: *is attempting to get up* yeowch....
unknown snake girl: *sneaks in unseen* acid... *pokes acid in the arm* hey acid it's me. come on lets get outta here.
TheGameArtCritic on July 5, 2008, 2:10:10 PM
mechadragon13 on July 6, 2008, 5:53:40 AM

Unknown snake girl: acid! stop fooling around! we gotta go!
Acid: aww... and it was just getting fun...
twilight: uhh... condemned?
Lightning: what did that green hedgehog do??
Me: O.O bad bad bad....... he turned condemned against us.... O.O
TheGameArtCritic on July 6, 2008, 11:09:09 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 7, 2008, 2:21:39 AM
mechadragon13 on July 7, 2008, 6:46:57 AM

Lightning: TWILIGHT! *angry glare of rage at condemned* ok you asked for it!! *starts charging electricity* *stripes glow*
Acid: and now we leave.
Me: *blocks acid and teh snake girl* oh no you dont. *holds up arm, showing a techy-looking watch* hehehe.. you're not going anywhere. *pushes a button* hehehehe.......
(a big jet plane thing lands right behind mish)
Me: not when you're up against the Red Bolt! *gets in plane and aims the cannons at Acid and the snake girl*
Acid: O.O Vera, we are so screwed.
Vera: O.O no kidding.
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 7, 2008, 7:13:25 AM
mechadragon13 on July 7, 2008, 7:35:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 7, 2008, 10:40:13 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 8, 2008, 12:50:21 AM
mechadragon13 on July 8, 2008, 1:39:12 AM

Me: NO! LIGHTNING!!!!!!!
Twilight: *iz waking up* hmm, what? *sees Lightning* oh no. Lightning, LIGHTNING!!!!! *runs to him*
Me: *tears start coming out* you'll pay, hedgehog, and your little friend too. *starts charging up cannons*
Acid: ok, we're officially screwed. vengeance gives you strength. *sits down* we know we're done.
Vera: *sits down also* we surrender.
Twilight: *crying* LIGHTNING!! lightning.... no.........no........
TheGameArtCritic on July 8, 2008, 2:56:08 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 8, 2008, 3:38:51 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 8, 2008, 4:31:29 AM
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 8, 2008, 5:02:26 AM
TheGameArtCritic on July 8, 2008, 5:04:48 AM
mechadragon13 on July 8, 2008, 7:07:56 AM

Vera: O.O acid what have you done????
Me: *is so distressed that she doent have the strenth to pull the trigger* LIGHTNING!!!! *is sobbing*
Twilight: *is sobbing over lightning* no... no..... you cant be gone....... please no........
TheGameArtCritic on July 8, 2008, 7:13:46 AM

Eclipse: *looks down at his hands, which are covered in blood* *looks up and see's Lightning* no...
Me: *turning on Acid* HOW COULD YOU NOT NKOW WHAT ECLIPSE COULD HAVE DONE????? *super pissed*
Eclipse: i.... murdered.... L-l-l.... *can't finish his sentence*
Me: *to Twilight* I'm so sorry.... :(((((((
mechadragon13 on June 19, 2008, 5:54:43 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 19, 2008, 7:17:33 AM
mechadragon13 on June 19, 2008, 8:10:10 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 19, 2008, 9:36:39 AM

Eclipse: gaaaah... whenever he does that, i get forced deep into my subconcious.... it's not a nice place...
me: i already KNOW that Eclipse. It's no wonder CONDEMNED doesn't like it in there!
mechadragon13 on June 19, 2008, 10:01:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 19, 2008, 10:26:54 AM
mechadragon13 on June 20, 2008, 4:49:13 AM

Me: uhh... Lightning? you're glowing again ^o^
Lightning: *still blushing and glowing* h-huh? *looks at self* aww crap not again.... -/////////-
Twilight: wow lightning, last time that happened...... no im not getting into that.
TheGameArtCritic on June 20, 2008, 9:07:35 AM
mechadragon13 on June 21, 2008, 4:01:01 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 22, 2008, 12:57:11 AM
mechadragon13 on June 22, 2008, 6:31:36 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 22, 2008, 9:51:42 AM
mechadragon13 on June 23, 2008, 10:43:03 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 23, 2008, 11:44:25 AM
mechadragon13 on June 24, 2008, 8:06:14 AM

Lightning: *low growl* that's Acid the Hedgehog. a thief.
Twilight: AND THATS NOT ALL HE IS!!! *pounces again*
Acid: *dodges her again* yawn... and it's true, im not just a thief. i'm an assasin too ^^
Twilight: y-you LIAR!!! *manages to smack him across the face*
Me: uhh........ yeah, about that.....
TheGameArtCritic on June 24, 2008, 9:37:40 AM
mechadragon13 on June 25, 2008, 7:50:42 AM

Twilight: FAT CHANCE! you PERVERT!!! *smackes him again*
Acid: OY! stop thaat!
Twilight: PERVERT!!!! *tries to smack him again*
Acid: *dodges it* GOD! do you mind!!??
Lightning: O.O'
Me: i think twilight's making it clear..... O.O'
TheGameArtCritic on June 25, 2008, 10:42:57 AM
mechadragon13 on June 26, 2008, 7:59:20 AM

Acid: ok, you asked for it! *crouches and pulls out a small knife* bring it!
Twilight: with pleasure! *puts hands on the grass and sucks water out of it making an orb of water*
Lightning: *forehead smack* oh jeez, not again.
Me: too right. like you with inderetta, i hate him, but i love him too much to get rid of him.....
TheGameArtCritic on June 26, 2008, 10:35:47 AM
mechadragon13 on June 27, 2008, 5:54:52 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 27, 2008, 7:54:42 AM
mechadragon13 on June 29, 2008, 11:42:17 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 10:38:15 AM
mechadragon13 on June 30, 2008, 10:42:54 AM

Twilight: HEEEY!!!
Lightning: oh, you did not just say that. *cracks knuckles*
Me: *coughhypocritcough* yeah its a neat little trick he can pull. somehow he can emit this aura that causes you to just not be able to look at where he is. your eyes just tend to slide away from him....... *coughhypocritcough*
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 11:06:54 AM
mechadragon13 on June 30, 2008, 11:13:22 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 30, 2008, 11:22:01 AM

Eclipse: gah! *falls over* well now... aren't you full of suprises... *gets up and brushes himself off* play time's over. Did you ever think you'd be fighting a slave of the damned? *turns into Condemned form* GRRAAAAAARRRGH!!!!
Me:............. "slave of the damned"? are you really that emo about Condemned possessing you?
mechadragon13 on June 4, 2008, 2:39:30 AM
TheGameArtCritic on June 4, 2008, 8:29:05 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on June 10, 2008, 8:21:07 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on June 18, 2008, 10:49:07 AM

Me: using someone'a feelings for personal gain? that's LOW.
mechadragon13 on June 18, 2008, 10:51:18 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 21, 2008, 11:15:43 AM

Lightning: ah yes, i remember when i first met werewolf-sonic.........
Twilight: yeah he beat the pulp outta you XD
Me: LOL XD
Lightning: not funny. >:P
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