When the War Came
When the War Came
When the War Came by TheGameArtCritic
Description
Description
Luminos is 17 in this picture. He is hot. Oh so very hot....... squeeeeeeeee...
Also, he is fighting a war that started when he was ten, died down a bit, then flared back up again. He had been drafted to fight FOR THE PURE BLOODS. NOT THE HYBRIDS.
The "pure bloods" are trying to use hybrids against southern hybrids. They're trying to draft hybrids from Moonglow City, Greenhill City, and Icecap City in order to put the "rebellious hybrids" in their place.
Luminos was drafted. He has to shoot his own kind in the faces.
Over the years, Luminos will become as tough as a rock. "So what if a little dogfalcon girl is trying to escape? She must be shot down, or else she'll come back and jeapordize the mission."
A bright side to all this, is that Luminos will be able to control Vorace as well as Eclipse, and he makes a powerful asset to the team. Yay?
Also, he is fighting a war that started when he was ten, died down a bit, then flared back up again. He had been drafted to fight FOR THE PURE BLOODS. NOT THE HYBRIDS.
The "pure bloods" are trying to use hybrids against southern hybrids. They're trying to draft hybrids from Moonglow City, Greenhill City, and Icecap City in order to put the "rebellious hybrids" in their place.
Luminos was drafted. He has to shoot his own kind in the faces.
Over the years, Luminos will become as tough as a rock. "So what if a little dogfalcon girl is trying to escape? She must be shot down, or else she'll come back and jeapordize the mission."
A bright side to all this, is that Luminos will be able to control Vorace as well as Eclipse, and he makes a powerful asset to the team. Yay?
General Info
General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1712
Favorites... 5
Vote Score 7
Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1712
Favorites... 5
Vote Score 7
Comments
66
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 1 hour 20 minutes
Reference none
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 1 hour 20 minutes
Reference none
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Snowpaw1 on November 2, 2008, 4:02:23 AM
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Snowpaw1 on November 2, 2008, 8:27:26 AM
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(new chara) Torrent: Hi! (waves to Luminos) umm waz up?TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 10:33:53 AM
Luminos: war... and pain... and suffering... and I'm causing it...Me: gawd... EMO much?
Snowpaw1 on November 3, 2008, 8:46:38 AM
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Torrent: (walks to Luminos) Im not sure its YOU thats causing it... look around you, many people suffer everyday! Its not you thats causing it. Its the war. Ocarina: If only Eclipse was still with us...
Torrent: (looks at Ocarina) Whos Eclipse?
Me: one of the Hybrid Nation members... (mumbles) who was lost... Stupid Condenmed.
Ocarina: (tears come in eyes) ...
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 12:44:57 PM
Me: well he came baaaack... he just... has... memory loss...Luminos: I'm murdering my own kind...
Snowpaw1 on November 5, 2008, 7:29:37 AM
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Ocarina: (perks up) He did!? Oh... memory lost... at least hes with us again!Torrent: I understand that Luminos, but its not your fault... (smiles and tries to comfort) you'll be fine. (smiles again)
TheGameArtCritic on November 5, 2008, 8:57:24 AM
Me: aye. But he doesn't know who you are.Luminos: it won't be ok. Not if this war keeps going.
Snowpaw1 on November 6, 2008, 9:26:12 AM
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Ocarina: Oh... hopefully he'll pop up soon.Torrent: (sigh) I know the war might take a while to end, but, you can always resign from war.
TheGameArtCritic on November 7, 2008, 9:12:49 AM
Luminos: *sadly shakes his head* I've been drafted. I can't.Me: He will.
Eclipse: hey Critic. New friends?
Me: OLD friends. That YOU forgot about.
Eclipse: oh...
Snowpaw1 on November 8, 2008, 7:33:10 AM
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Ocarina: Eclipse!!!! (:D!!!!) Im happy u came back!!!!Torrent: Oh.. I understand. Im sorry for how u feel... (gives him a hug to make him feel better)
random audience: awwwwww...
Me: (stares at random audience and pushes out of picture) uhhh... ok?
Ocarina: I know u wouldn't remember me Eclipse... (mumbles) beacuse ur suffering memory loss...
TheGameArtCritic on November 8, 2008, 9:16:46 AM
Eclipse: I'm sorry... It just feels like I've never met you before...Me: He needs something to remind him of the person, or thing. Just like how seeing Luminos' bloody body made him remember Luminos again.
Eclipse: *pulls a look of grief* please don't remind me of that...
Luminos: well I'm ok, now... quit worrying, Eclipse.
Me: why don't you call him "Dad"?
Luminos: because I just don't know him that well... I KNOW he's my biological father, but it just seems so awkward...
Snowpaw1 on November 8, 2008, 10:29:38 AM
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Ocarina: Oh i know! oh wait... he wouldn't remember Mr. Inderetta...or does he??? well anyways, When you were possed by the evil badger, thingy, you know what I mean, ummm you kind of blasted me with dark energy...Me: Uhhh? thats not gonna help. Seriously Ocarina.
Torrent: (sits down and looks at teh sky which is dark and stormy) Looks like its gonna rain!
TheGameArtCritic on November 8, 2008, 12:12:06 PM
Eclipse: I like rain... it has a certain gracefulness to it...Luminos: wha...?
Eclipse: you wouldn't understand...
as for the badger, there was a badger who raised me for the first four years of my life... everything after that, though, is a blank.
Me: *whispering to the others so Eclipse does not hear* those are the false memories that Newman and Angel put in Eclipse's mind. they were never done with inserting all the false memories because Twilight came in and broke the machine.
Snowpaw1 on November 8, 2008, 9:53:50 PM
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Me: (whispers back) well... thats good. But Eclipse.. is wrong about teh badger raising him. (voice goes normal) Eclipse u know... ur wrong about teh badger taking care for you, Shadow the hedgehog took care of ya.Torrent: Come on, we better go inside! (house pops out of nowhere)
House: IIIII Aaaammmmm Teeeeeehhhhhhhhhhh HHHHHhooooouuuuussseeeee!
Me: Uhhhhhh...?
TheGameArtCritic on November 9, 2008, 11:17:42 AM
Eclipse: um... noooo... I actually REMEMBER Inderretta raising me... which is weird... but y'know... yeah...Me: ... house.
Snowpaw1 on November 10, 2008, 9:55:03 AM
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Me: (sigh) there's nuthing i can do....Torrent: (goes inside) Come on!
Ocarina: (small smile and follows Torrent) are u gonna stand there all day?
Me: weird house...
TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2008, 11:41:10 AM
Me: IT COULD BE A TRAP.Eclipse: *follows Torrent*
Me: fine... IGNORE me...
Snowpaw1 on November 12, 2008, 7:29:39 AM
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Me: LOL! Its not a trap!House: (snaps up and flattens Torrent, Ocarina and Eclipse) MUHAHAHA!
Me: O.O what the....
TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2008, 7:43:59 AM
me: trap.Eclipse: GRAARRRRARARARSNRFF!!!!!
Snowpaw1 on November 13, 2008, 9:53:35 AM
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Me: O.o what the....Ocarina: AHHHHHH!!!
Torrent: -.-' calm do-owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnn!!!!!(gets out and helps Eclipse and Ocarina out) Ok you were right... hey where'd Lumi go?
TheGameArtCritic on November 13, 2008, 12:52:42 PM
Luminos: OUT HERE!!! WITH CRITIC!!!Me: PAIN!!!!
Eclipse: I'm getting claustrophobic...
Snowpaw1 on November 15, 2008, 6:52:48 AM
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Torrrent: Ok! (walks over and smiles) Just wondering! You didn't talk much.TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2008, 2:07:00 PM
Luminos: sometimes I can be quiet.Me: we noticed.
Eclipse: I'm gonna smash myself out...
Snowpaw1 on November 18, 2008, 11:01:53 PM
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Torrent: ^.^Me: LOL. XD
TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2008, 9:00:14 AM
Eclipse: *goes Condemnd and smashes out of the house/trap*Snowpaw1 on November 24, 2008, 6:40:43 AM
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Torrent: O.O what the...mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 2:43:55 AM
Me: holy CRAP thats hot O.O *drool*Po: thats coooool........
Skye: O.O *drooooooool* 8D
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:45:51 AM
Me: rofl.Soldja Luminos: YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
mechadragon13 on November 2, 2008, 5:27:45 AM
Me: SUPERMAAAN!!! XDDDDOlda skye: .....luminos?
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 7:47:43 AM
Olda Luminos: Skye?Me: cute ^^
mechadragon13 on November 3, 2008, 6:09:17 AM
Skye: yeah.....Me: O.O i'm cruel!! O.O
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 8:04:12 AM
Olda Luminos: I'm sorry, Skye... *ashamed*Me: my god, you are.... XDDD
mechadragon13 on November 24, 2008, 4:14:13 AM
Me: *eye roll*Skye: *head tilt* for what, lumi? you didnt do anything wrong.
CheezyC on November 4, 2008, 11:47:38 AM
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Wow, Luminos is Hawt in this pic!Bliski: YAY *dances around* I'm a pureblood!
TheGameArtCritic on November 7, 2008, 11:43:24 AM
Luminos: T-TMe: you made him sad. Also, thanks ya! I DO agree with the hawtness...
CheezyC on November 9, 2008, 11:28:09 AM
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..Sad.^^ Sowwy!EternalDarknessWaitsForDawn on November 5, 2008, 9:26:47 AM
Wow... cool.Awesomeness
Stuff like that.
TheGameArtCritic on November 7, 2008, 11:42:42 AM
awesome. Thanks.ShadzGirl on November 3, 2008, 12:33:28 AM
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Oh dear...Cool pic^^Okay you just made me think of how all writers say the south (Cival War)was evil.IF I READ ONE MORE STORY ABOUT HOW WHERE I COME FROM IS EVIL I'M GONNA SPIT IN SOMEONES FACE!!!!!!!!!
Okay,sorryX3It pisses me off how people say,"Oh the South was all wrong."Makes me sick):<
anway,cool pic,as ALWAYS!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 5:06:00 AM
I'm not saying the South was evil....ty!
ShadzGirl on November 3, 2008, 5:10:46 AM
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I know,but for reading last week it was a bomb of anoance,you know what I mean?I let Shatoro explain,Shatoro?Shatoro:IF I READ ONE MORE F**KIN' STORY 'BOUT HOW MY KITH AND KIN ARE EVIL AND I'M GONNA F***K THE GOVERMENTAL ******* AND THEIR F**KIN' LACKEES!!!!!*puts on dixie flag bandana*
Me:Okay,maybe you didn't have to e that violent,but seriously,I'm not mad at you.Never would be,just lit. in school last week pissed me off.
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 8:40:41 AM
ah. I am sorry to hear thatShadzGirl on November 4, 2008, 12:39:43 AM
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Even homeschool can be mean,despite what people say>.<And what makes it worse is it's a Christian curriculm,and saying what they did.that's what people call racism,ya know?Shatoro:S.O.Bs!
sonamylover on November 3, 2008, 9:58:33 AM
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zOMG this is one of ur best pics yet! plz put iin more class doodles!!TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 10:19:22 AM
lol, ok...Zukoinferno on November 2, 2008, 5:54:51 AM
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lol master chief luminos. i thought you stopped working on the war comic?aakela: 8DDD ... must... glompage... *pool of saliva*
TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 8:07:28 AM
it's a different thingy.sorta.
Zukoinferno on November 3, 2008, 8:46:06 AM
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oh, ok.aakela cameo ftw!
SONICXROUGELUVA on November 3, 2008, 5:21:53 AM
H'oh god this is cool!!!! Y'know whats funny? i was gonna do a pic of noir in the war but decided not to.!!^^TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 8:29:41 AM
coolio? I don't know what to say about that...TheCon on November 2, 2008, 11:47:21 AM
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No other word except awesome came to mind when i saw this...Great job!
TheGameArtCritic on November 3, 2008, 5:06:30 AM
thank you so much, Con ^^I always love hearing from you!
Falconlobo on November 2, 2008, 4:03:51 AM
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cool nice armorChaoscontroler1992 on November 2, 2008, 1:10:35 AM
O_O Tight! Man XD I love your Art so heavy!! X333 And yay The first Comment! Need to fave *Favez*TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:05:50 AM
ty for the fave, and saying that you love my art so "heavy" XDDDChaoscontroler1992 on November 2, 2008, 2:07:53 AM
I do! X3 it looks so damn Awesome XDTheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:18:11 AM
ty! XDI'm ashamed to say that this is only, like, HALF of my work, though... :P
Kirbyt on November 2, 2008, 1:28:45 AM
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Total Brilliantness!!!TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:06:43 AM
is that a word?ty anyway XD
Kirbyt on November 2, 2008, 2:09:01 AM
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Yes it is.TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:17:06 AM
are you suuuuuuuuuuuuuure?It doesn't sound like a real word... MUST. CHECK. DICTIONARY.
btw, I am taking animation classes. We learned cycle flying.
mangakid on November 2, 2008, 1:39:27 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:06:30 AM
ty! I based it off Master Chief...dingocat on November 2, 2008, 1:47:04 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on November 2, 2008, 2:06:01 AM
i think he should.
Ocarina: Hi Luminos!
Me: Luminos is older than Ocarina! O.O' Ocarina is 16!
Thunder: Im 18! :P!
Kara: Hi guys!
Foam: (swims up in a nearby river) Hi guys! Oh whos that? (waves to Luminos) Well... Hi!