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Winter Comes This Way

Winter Comes This Way

Winter Comes This Way by TheGameArtCritic
Winter Comes This Way by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
It was cold out. Grey and white. Visiting Mobius at the time of winter... a pleasant time filled with the joys of the upcoming holidays, and the sweet sound of boots crunching in snow. Sonic recalled past moments, enjoying this time with his many friends... most of which were now dead.

Like him.

Sonic, though, was different from the others. He was given the role as an angel... which meant he could visit Mobius as much as he pleased, and God wouldn't bat an eyelash.

The hedgehog tightened the scarf around his neck. His wings, disguised as a piece of clothing. It now tightly hugged his mouth and nose. He didn't to wear the clothing. Because he was an angel - because he was already dead, he no longer had to feel the cold, or heat of the earth. He didn't have to... but he willed himself to feel the bitter cold anyway. He wanted to feel it... to embrace it...

... because it made him feel alive again.

His glowing green eyes looked up, and watched the snow drift lazily to the ground. Slow wasn't normally his thing, but sometimes you needed to enjoy the little things in life, or else you'd go stir crazy...

Suddenly, a child darted past him, and slipped on some ice. She would have fallen, if Sonic hadn't stuck his hand out and caught her.

"Thanks mister!" She squeaked. A mouse with amber eyes.

"What's the rush?" Sonic asked.

"My grandpa's very sick... I was gonna deliver a get-well card to him... oh! I need to go!" She then ran off again.

In silence, he "read" the girl. A power that the angels had. Once he had read someone, he knew of their thoughts, feelings, memories, and other such things. It was a good way to spot someone who was up to no good. Based on the memories he had read from that girl... her grandfather was more than just sick... he was DYING...

Sonic was never one who liked tears. He could only imagine that little girl being so upset when her grandpa finally kicked the bucket... well... not if HE could help it...

Like a shadow, he followed the girl until they arrived at a hospital. Still, he trudged behind her before she entered a small room. Sonic waited.

Inside, he heard a few whispers, and finally, the cry of the little girl. Grandpa had one more day to live, it seemed. Sonic's ears drooped. Death depressed him.

The hedgehog wrung his hands, then went back out to the hospital's main lobby. He sat in a chair, closed his eyes, and waited for the visiting hours to be over, head lowering.

three hours later, the last person (not including the staff) left, and Sonic's head rose... but only because the intern was tapping him on the shoulder.

"Yes?" He asked the young-adult, hiding his face with his scarf.

"Excuse me, sir, but visiting hours are over, and we'd like to ask you to leave the hospital..."

"fair enough." Sonic replied, and left the Hospital... or at least, it's interior. The hedgehog turned a corner, away from the watchful eyes of others, and... disappeared.

Well, if a mobian were to have seen him, that's what they would have said had happened. But Sonic didn't disappear. He had teleported himself into the room of the girl's grandfather.

He walked over to the poor, suffering creature, sleeping away his last few hours. With a gentle hand, he lightly touched the old mobian on the head.

Cardiac arrhythmia. A heart disease that made the heartbeat irregular. He had suffered from a cardiac arrest, and it was much too late to fully save him... or so the doctors thought.

Sonic moved his hand to the grandfather's chest. A blue aura surrounded both the old man, and Sonic.

Suddenly, the mobian took in a huge gasp of air. His heart moniter going from a weak, off beeping to a completelly normal beeping that you would find from a perfectly healthy mobian. The blue hedgehog smiled warmly at this.

Suddenly, the old man opened his eyes, and stared long and hard at his saviour. Sonic stared back.

"I... I know you..." The old man whispered. Sonic stayed silent. "Y... your Sonic the Hedgehog... you were always in the news... when I wasn't as old... but you're dead..."

Again, Sonic smiled.

"Happy holidays!" He told him cheerily, and disappeared without a trace.

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The next day, the doctors were completelly bewildered. This old mobian... the one who was going to dye that very day, had somehow managed to restore his own heart until it was like new.

"It's a miracle!" The little girl cried happily, and hugged her grandfather.

"Yes... A miracle..." The old mobian replied, hugging his grandaughter. Had Sonic the Hedgehog really saved him, or was he just dreaming? Either way, he was happy to be alive.

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Outside, Sonic leaned against the hospital, looking out, at the sky. He pulled his scarf down, and let the cool air nip at his nose and lips. Those lips curved into a small smile. Another gift given. Happy holidays, Mobius.

General Info

General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
Date Submitted
Views 1332
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 4
Comments 47
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 1 hour
Reference none

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Kirbyt on November 17, 2009, 5:33:22 AM

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KirbytWinter is really cold...

TheGameArtCritic on November 17, 2009, 12:40:20 PM

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TheGameArtCriticnot where I live. :P

Kirbyt on November 17, 2009, 7:43:23 PM

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KirbytReally? You're so lucky! XD

SONICXROUGELUVA on December 20, 2009, 1:35:27 AM

SONICXROUGELUVA on
SONICXROUGELUVAuh, hello?! i live in CANADA 4 cryin' out loud!! how do ya think i feel in winter! all the way up north n' stuff... o.o

LOL! at least i can snowboard!

TheGameArtCritic on December 30, 2009, 1:54:20 PM

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TheGameArtCriticI can't anything, so I stick to staying indoors, and kicking myself until I work on a page of D.I.

SONICXROUGELUVA on January 8, 2010, 6:14:34 AM

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SONICXROUGELUVAreally? that sucks.

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 7:36:35 AM

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ZukoinfernoYou. Have just made my day even better. This is what I really love to read about; a happy ending to everyone. You get a cookie as big as Mish's. Doubled.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 7:37:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticYay! *nom*

Of course, if you like happy ending's for everyone, you really shouldn't be reading my comics/stories/looking at my pictures. :P

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 7:41:44 AM

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ZukoinfernoYeah I kinda figured that out XD Thats why I was happy for this. T'was a nice change of pace.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 7:44:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticindeed (i guess. :P)

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 7:47:29 AM

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Zukoinfernooh you :P

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 7:53:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticoh me.

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 8:06:57 AM

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Zukoinfernono me.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 8:10:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticno u?

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 8:11:59 AM

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Zukoinfernoyes me.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 8:15:58 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticno me

Zukoinferno on November 11, 2009, 8:22:12 AM

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ZukoinfernoME.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 8:31:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticur mom

Zukoinferno on November 12, 2009, 7:28:34 AM

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Zukoinfernour dad

TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2009, 11:58:28 AM

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TheGameArtCriticno ur dad

Zukoinferno on November 13, 2009, 9:16:50 AM

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Zukoinfernoyes my dad

TheGameArtCritic on November 13, 2009, 10:37:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticurANUS LOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOL

Zukoinferno on November 14, 2009, 12:58:11 AM

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Zukoinfernorachet & clack: up ur ARSEnal LAAAAAAAAAAAWL

TheGameArtCritic on November 16, 2009, 9:07:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticomfg.

*insert ten bajillion ED jokes*

Zukoinferno on November 17, 2009, 8:50:08 AM

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Zukoinferno*smothered under the jokes* DDD8

mechadragon13 on November 11, 2009, 7:15:28 AM

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mechadragon13.......wow.

that's all i can say right now.

wow.

the colors, the concept, the story, the... everything...... it's just... wow. WOW. this made my day. my WEEK even.

amazing.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 7:20:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticBecause Sonic can cure terminal diseases? Lawl.

Thaaaaaaaaank you, ma'am! I appreciate the comment! This is much more serious compaired to "CRACK LOL"

mechadragon13 on November 11, 2009, 11:20:20 AM

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mechadragon13*facepalm* XD you LOVE not getting things, don'tcha?

lol no freaking kidding.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 11:35:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticyuppers. :3

lololololol.

A. Sonic: lol, I'm a Christ figure!

The Chruch: BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!! *shoots him three times* BLASTPHAMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

mechadragon13 on November 12, 2009, 8:48:29 AM

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mechadragon13XD

oh. i noticed ONE TINY ERROR....

you forgot to color in his tail. unless that was on purpose >.>

TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2009, 8:50:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!! *shot*

mechadragon13 on November 12, 2009, 9:02:12 AM

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mechadragon13uhhhh... i'm sorry....? ^^;

TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2009, 9:09:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticvwat evah. I will make three more pictoor stories. One with Tails and A. Sonic, labled "Haunted", One with Knuckles and A. Sonic labled "The mobian with one arm", and one with a random murderer dude and a very SCAREY A. Sonic, who forces the murderer dude to basically shoot his pants, denounce himself from all sinning, and turn himself in. :D

mechadragon13 on November 12, 2009, 9:39:05 AM

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mechadragon13DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD. ._. WANT TO SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2009, 9:46:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticI can quickley draw what Sonic will look like as a SCAREY dood on iScribble if you want. :3

mechadragon13 on November 12, 2009, 10:03:56 AM

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mechadragon13OKAY!

TheGameArtCritic on November 12, 2009, 11:45:15 AM

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TheGameArtCritiche's totally scarey, amirite?

mechadragon13 on November 13, 2009, 11:59:55 AM

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mechadragon13YES ._.

CreamandPoppufan166 on November 11, 2009, 11:15:46 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166I like this picture :3 HAPPY EARLY HOLIDAYS!

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 11:17:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticHAPPY EARLY HOLIDAYS! *glomp*

WillHawk14 on November 11, 2009, 8:56:18 AM

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WillHawk14Wow Critic.

This Pic is great, you've not only made an amazing picture of everyones favorite Hedgehog, but you've made a great and touching story to go with it.

The blue outline, the shading i love every piece of it.

What should I score this picture?

...Over nine thousand.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 8:58:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticWhat? 9000? There's no WAY that can be right!! D8<

lol, thanks Willhawk!

WillHawk14 on November 11, 2009, 8:59:57 AM

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WillHawk14It is! *Scanner breaks* F***! now I have glass in my eye! I has been blinded by the awesome Picture!!! D: ...and glass shards!!!

Yur welcome Critic :3

Falconlobo on November 11, 2009, 8:27:06 AM

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Falconloboawwwww nice story

_ren_tao_fan_ on November 11, 2009, 7:24:28 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Oh my... God...
This is so sweet. It made me smile. You have a lot of talent when it comes to writing stories, almost as much as your artistic skills. This is such a wonderful piece of work. Well done.

TheGameArtCritic on November 11, 2009, 7:30:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticIt certainly is wondeful when you drag your mouse over the blue "Sonic the Hedgehog" in the description, you get "KOSMIX! See videos, pictures, news, blogs, and a whole lot more. Learn all about Sonic the Hedgehog NOW!"

pfffft. XD

Thanks for the comment, anyways. XD

_ren_tao_fan_ on November 11, 2009, 7:32:16 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_LOL. XD
You're welcome. =)