Reborn

This looks really good- the colours are gorgeous and her face is so determined! I love the detail you put into her midsection and arms. And her sash is great- cloth can be very difficult to draw! A few things, if I may?

The wrist closest to the viewer seems a tad too wide. Also, her shoulders seem a little too narrow for her whole body. But overall, this is very good. Much better than what I draw. ^__^;

Thanks so much for such a thoughtful comment. Personally, I thought the near wrist lined up fairly proportionally to the rest of her body, but I appreciate your thoughts and I'll keep it in mind. The narrow shoulders were a bit of artistic exaggeration on my part, more than what I normally do, though I do see that compared to the head, certainly, they seem a tad too small. Thanks again for commenting!

And thank you</i> for not freaking out at me! ^__^ Some people can't take even a little criticism.
And I do now see what you meant about the wrist.

Well, I, for one, really appreciate politely worded constructive criticism, so please continue to give it. ^_^

That's nice^-^

Thanks.