Pretty Vampire Guy
Pretty Vampire Guy
Pretty Vampire Guy by Thirteen_Black_Roses
Description
Description
Sketch of the vampire from a story I wrote for my Vampire class. He doesn't have a name yet. It was in first person and he never introduced himself. Real flyaway hair he's got, huh? I'm gonna have to do a nicer version of him sometime, but I did this as a bit of art therapy, release some stress. Pretty good, I think, for being done while down with the flu.<br />
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Mechanical Pencil
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Mechanical Pencil
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Male
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Male
Date Submitted
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Thirteen_Black_Roses on November 18, 2004, 5:24:20 AM
Fayore on November 17, 2004, 6:40:52 PM
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Nice job! I think it's pretty good as well.
Something I'd like to mention though (as I believe in constructive critism) is that you might want to work on the hair a little bit - it looks flat, like it's plastered there, and it's a little bit too far down the forehead. Ear could be editted a bit, too.
However, some nice bits are the angle, which was done nicely, and the proportioning on the face - these are the most difficult aspects, and I think you've done a good job!
Something I'd like to mention though (as I believe in constructive critism) is that you might want to work on the hair a little bit - it looks flat, like it's plastered there, and it's a little bit too far down the forehead. Ear could be editted a bit, too.
However, some nice bits are the angle, which was done nicely, and the proportioning on the face - these are the most difficult aspects, and I think you've done a good job!
Yeah, the hair needs work. I do plan on going back to this, especially for the hair, once I'm no longer sick. When I do I'll also take a look at the ear.
Thanks for the comments and the compliments! It will be fixed and maybe colored. Eventually. Maybe over Christmas.