Second Oekaki drawing

So, this is my second attempt. Believe it or not I actually spent less time on this one. 19 minutes. The other was 40. o_o See what a little patience does? ^_^; Well, this shows me there is hope for me yet. Constructive critisism and tips, please! Oh yeah, and these are just original, nameless characters, though it does look alot like an Albel kissing Fayt in my mind, what I was going to make the other character look like and stuff. Hm. *looks thoughtful* Well I'm sleep, food, and water deprived, so I'm gonna eat and hit the hay. Or matress...But anyways, tell me if you guys think I should color it-I was just thinking about it. Much love!