Death Note -Original

Well anyways This is the second part of my Death note Test. Again, This Pose does not belong to me!!! Or Death Note in that matter, hahah! I saw the picture drawn by someone and really liked it so tried to make one of my own. This is a test I did, a digital File and a Traditional one to see what I was better with and what I need practice on.

What I like
. The clothing
. The Wings
.The background
.How rem turned out

Don't Like
. O god the hair!!
. The faces and eyes kind of
.How Ryuk came out

This is my original picture. I'm adding two so you can see the original colors I used for Rem and Ryuk.