My darkside O_O

Woah, that creeps me out... o_o'' Okay, to the explaining all you people are wanting, I quess.
So, this is my darkside. I STILL AM only Daware in this world; this is copy of me what Destroyer made to do something to me, my family, this galaxy.. who knows, but it would been terrible if it came to truth. (even in fantasy truth, you people there who want to keep fantasy so so so well separated from reality...) But as you can see, he failed copying me... But created a monster far more terrible than I am. When he realized his mistake, he decided to use her as his killing machine. When he realized that this beast, Marana, started to go far out from control and kill his own warriors, he chained her in deepest of his dungeons, in his black hole what he's quardian of. (BTW, just to give you little spoiler for my comic, Destroyer was once quardian of one of the stars, but when the star died and became a black hole, Destroyer didn't die but became a fallen; what he is now.) Then, in jail, Marana realized that Destroyer just used her, and with amazing strength she breaked out. Destroyer realized he had also gave her far more intelligent than meant. Marana then figured out why she was made, and then found out about me. Then she decided that because she now doesn't have reason to be, she'll kill me and take my place in universe..
Then to facts. She'll have a role in my story, and then you will find out more about her. One thing: You really should not get in way of her; Every wound caused by her, exept ones she makes with shackles, will keep bleeding and bleeding 'til a Sailui Beast drops its own tear in wound, by it's own want. And sailuis aren't that common... That's why she has killed almost all of her opponents. Creepy person.. o_o''

Anyhoo, comments?