tension/ for darkwolf333's contest

ok here is my entry i call it tension because Darksilver doesn't trust Tigerstar and want's him out of the territory but Stormyfur is telling him to calm down and that she want's to talk to him


"Darksilver do you smell someone?" Stormyfur asked semlling the air and looking around.
"Yes and i don't recognize it." Darksilver said to her as his fur started to stand up.
"Why hello." a dark brown tabby said stepping through the grass.
"You wouldn't happen to be Stormyfur would you?" he asked her as she hopped up on to a rock.
"What do you want outsider? Who are you?" Darksilver asked hissing at the strange cat. the cat turned to look at him. Those eyes they're so eh evil looking who is he Darksilver thought.
"I just want to talk. I want to help you on your mission to uh save your clan." the cat had a sinister smile that made Darksilver want to chase him out of his home.
"My name is Tigerstar if you must know. So will you let me assist you?"
"NO!" Darksilver yelled without thinking
"Darksilver! Calm down." she turned to look at Tigerstar and said, "I will talk to you. This way." they walked away talking and Darksilver said aloud to himself "I don't trust him. He's just plain evil. I'll have to get rid of him." he started to head back to camp and stopped suddenly looking over his shoulder and thought Stormyfur went with to quikly is her plan really for the better of the clan or herself?

well that's the story hope you like it enjoy and comment^^