Ravenstar's story pt5

her is the last one or is it... MWAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHA *cough cough* any way 1-4

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"No she didn't. May i continue?"
"Oh sorry."
"She was slowly getting white on the tips of her ears, and on her paws and tail tip. And then on her face a white star."

pt5
(1)"Her father Lightheart was the last to give her a life. But not everyone was thrilled at this.(2) Manly Lightclan was arguing, Robinbelly yelled saying, 'She can't be leader she was never even a deputy' Firemask yelled, 'She has never had an apprentice' and a darkclan cat said, 'She is blind how can she lead' While Treeclan cats yelled back. Bladetail said, 'Starclan has chosen there is nothing you can do about that' Darksilver said, 'She is one of the greatest warriors she has as much right to be leader as anyone' Blacknose started to yell, 'RAVENSTAR, RAVENSTAR, RAVENSTAR" Spikefur closed his eyes, and smiled remembering.
(3)"My father Nighteye and I both went to Ravenstar's sides. Nighteye yelled loudest of all Saying, 'Who will go against the will of Starclan? I believe they have chosen the best and purest cat to lead. She has always been loyal, and always tried her best for her clan. But if you want to go against Starclan speak up now for they are here to listen.' Everyone was quiet, and I felt so much pride knowing what my father had done her my former apprentice. I expected her to make him deputy, and I think everyone else did too. But she shocked everyone when she jumped to the top of the lowest rock so all could see her. She said like true leader, 'I say these words before all of Starclan and Goldensun's body, so that they hear and approve my choose. Spikefur, will be Treeclan's new deputy.'"Spikefur stood and stretched.(4)
"Well come time to go back to camp."
"Aw, come on tell me more. Oh! Tell me how she got her Warrior name." Brightpaw said still sitting on his rock.
"Haha maybe you should ask her. TO-MOR-ROW."
"Pl---ea-----se?" Brightpaw asked pleading.
"No hehe. Come on I'll race you back."
"OK! GO!" Brightpaw yelled as he raced off ahead of Spikefur. He stopped suddenly and turned around.
"How did she have kits then?"
"We found out she was two moons along after she became leader. Now Go!" He said pushing on Brightpaw's bum to make him move.


Well there you go the last part of how she became leader. i am thinking of doing her life before this in comic from as well, starting with her as a kit and then going till the battle.
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