Ravenkit's beginning page1

well i said i might and i have i am planing on doing Raven's life comic style starting with the day she was born

(1)
Hmm... Where am I? Why is it so dark? I feel like I'm floating. I... I hear something.
(2) "Wow! they're so cute. Was I ever that small?"
Who is that i can't see. That is your family look, they are about to give you your name. suddenly she saw four cats.
"Can I name the little one?" said a young tom.
"Sure. Then I will name this one. Her name will be Smoothkit."
"Ok then. Ravenkit for you my little sister."
(3)Ravenkit. That is your name now. Who are you? Can I see you? Will you let me? Yes. Who are you? I am going to watch over you, and guide you.
(4) I feel safe with you here. Why? Shhh. Go to sleep now. i will always be here when you need me.
(5)"Go to sleep Greenfur. You need it." the young tom said leaving.
"Yes, sleep well my little ones."

alright that last one is meant to be like the real world view
well hope you enjoy and comment=3