Ravenkit's beginning page 2

here is page 2 this is after right after she opened her eyes

(1)"Ravenkit! Ravenkit where did you go?" Greenfur called waking up to Smoothkit looking at her, and Ravenkit gone.
(2)"I'm over here, Greenfur." Ravenkit called from the other side of the nusery. She was sniffing a ladybug.
"Oh thank Starclan. I thought you fell out of the tree. Come back over here."
"Oh, all right." Ravenkit said disapointed. She started to sniff the ground and air making her way back.
"Ravenkit open your eyes so you can see." Smoothkit said to her.
"Won't help."
(3)"What do you mean, of course it will. You'll be able to see."
"All I see is black when I open them." Ravenkit said plopping down in front of Greenfur and Smoothkit.
"Let me see your eyes." Greenfur demmanded. So Ravenkit opened her eyes, and heard her mother gasp.
"What is it? What's wrong?" Ravenkit asked scared.
"Your blind! Oh, Starclan why."
(4)"So what if I'm blind I will still be a great warrior!" Ravenkit said turning away.
"But if you can't see how will you fight? If you can't see how will you even get to the forest floor?" RAvenkit realized that her mother was right. She had heard Spikepaw and Deeppaw talking o how all the dens were in the trees.
(5)Ravenkit closed her eyes hoping to see the she-cat she had meet when she was born. Where Are You? I need you! I am here Ravenkit. What do you need? Will I ever be a warrior? Greenfur said I won't because I'm blind. As long as you stay on the path you feel is right for you, you can do anything, with Starclan's help, Ravenkit. Are you sure? She couldn't help but be unsertin.
Yes I am sretin, Ravenkit. Don't worry.

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