Ravenkit's beginning page 3

ok here is part 3 this is abot a week after the last one and she has already become good firends with Spikepaw (fur)

(1)"Bet you can't catch me Ravenkit!" Smoothkit yelled to her sister as she started to run.
"Bet you I can! Get back here!" Ravenkit yelled in reply.
(2)"WOAH!" Ravenkit yelled as she tripped and rolled into another cat.
"Easy there, you might hurt yourself rolling around like that Ravenkit." Said a tom as he laughed.
"Hi Ravenkit, How are you?" Spikepaw asked helping her up.
"A little dizzy." She joked.
(3)"Smoothkit! How many times do I have to tell, you don't play so rough with your sister!" Greenfur screamed at Smoothkit as she coward in front of her.
"Greenfur, how many cats have told you that you are to protective of Ravenkit?" The tom said harshly to their mother.
"You smell nice. How do you know my name?" Ravenkit asked ignoring Greenfur.
"He is the Medicine cat that's why he smells like that." Spikepaw said smilling even though she couldn't see.
"Medecine cat Apprentice." The tom corrected Spikepaw, " I was here when you were born, that is how I know your name. My name is Mapletail, and it is very nice to meet you." He said kindly to her. He went to talk to Greenfur as (4)Spikepaw came and sat down between Ravenkit and Smoothkit.
"So, what do you think of him?" He asked them both.
"I like him! He's nice." Smoothkit said excited at meeting a new cat.
"Me too. What does he look like?" Ravenkit asked Spikepaw. She was amazed that he wasn't shocked and started to explane.
"He is tall, fluffy, and a deeper orange then me. With golden yellow eyes." He told her happy to help. Ravenkit nodded as she yawned. She heard her father come in, and she knew he had seen her yawn because he told her and her sister to go to sleep. (5) So she and Smoothkit layed down together, but she didn't fall asleep. She was listening to the older cats talk.
"They will be great warriors someday." Mapletail said to their father.
"I hope I'm a warrior by the time they're apprenticed, I want to be one of their mentors." Spikepaw said to no one but himsef.
"Sleep well my little ones. Dream of the forest and the trees and hunt till dawn, like ture warriors." Their father said soothingly as he licked each of their heads. This is great so many beleive in me and Smoothkit. Thank you starclan.

well this is the third and the forth is on it's way
comment and enjoy^^