Ravenkit's beginning page 4

well here is page 4 up sooner then i thought it would be but anywho this takes place when she is about a moon and a half

(1) Ravenkit and Smoothkit were sitting on a branch just out side the nursery when Spikepaw started to train in the claring below.
"Hey Spikepaw what are you supposed to be stalking?" Smoothpaw yelled down to him. He looked up and wave his tail in greeting.
"Mouse."
" Well then you need to be a bit more quiet, because I hear you all the way up here." Ravenkit said to him.
"Ok hows this?" He asked as he tried again.
"Better." They watched for a lttle while then went back inside the nursery.
(2)"Ok let's practice I'll go first." Smoothkit said getting down in a crouch. "Am I doing it right?" She asked Ravenkit as Greenfur and Mapletail walked in.
"Almost you need to put less waight on your hind legs."
"WHAT are you two doing?" Greenfur asked a look of confustion and dismay on her face. Mapletail looked at her from the corner of his eye and said, " Well obviously they are practicing hunting mice."
"Hi, Mapletail!"
"Hi, Mapletail!" Both of the kits said as they came to greet him.
"Why hello. I must say you two are well on your way to being apprentices already. But I must ask you something Ravenkit."
"Yes what is it?" she said looking right at him.
(3)"Over here please." he said walking the other side of the nursery, "Now, sometimes it seems like you can see and others you are able to do things that no one would think posable for a blind cat."
"Such as?" Ravenkit asked nt quite understanding.
"You name Things that are around you with great detale."
"Oh! A Starclan cat lets me see every now and then. She is a Beautiful gray she-cat with, light gray-blue, light brown stripes, and a white belly. Ican talk to her when I sleep or if I am alone."
"How long?"Mapletail asked with excitment and curiousity in his voice.
"My whole life. She let me see my naming."Ravenkit told him a bit confued at the excitment in his voice.
"Ravenkit I know you want to be a warrior, but have you ever thought maybe of being a medicine cat?"
"Um... Once. But not much now that I am learning how to use sound to guide me.... But if you think it would be better for me..." she trailed off waiting for his answer.
"I think you should follow your heart." he said kindly as he got up. Ravenkit was surprized not hear the excitment leave his voice.
"Thank you!" She called. She could see he just wave his tail in good-bye. She smiled to herself. I have to talk to her!
(4)Walk with me Ravenkit. So Ravenkit followed. Did you see? Yes. I did But you must make the choice. Remember what i told you? As long as you walk with me and Starclan, you can do anything. The she-cat said looking over her shoulder at Ravenkit. Thank You! Ravenkit yelled as she jumped up and down.

heehee i love Maple's face it's just to funny=3

well thats the end of this one comment and enjoy^^