Ravenkit's beginning page 5

wow it's up so quick well i'm bored and am trying to get use to photoshop so here is page 5 they are now 2 moons old

(1) "Hey guys!" Spikepaw said cheerily as he came in the nursery.
"Hi Spikepaw." Ravenkit said loking up from the moss she had been playing with, "What's up?"
"Heh, If you want to know then... You'll have to catch me!" He said bouncing away.
"Get him!" Smoothkit yelled as she ran after him, with Ravenkit hard on her heels.
(2) "Stop right there!" an angry sounding she-cat said.
"Woah!" Spikepaw and Smoothkit yelled as they skidded to a stop.
"Oof!" Ravenkit grunted as she flipped on to her back when she tried to stop.
"I was playing with my friends, Stormyfur." Spikepaw said shrinking back.
"Honestly, Spikepaw. Your warrior serimoy is today, and you are playing with kits. How do you expect me to ever have a chance of becoming leader if you don't behave like a warrior?"
(3)"If you ever became leader Starclan would not give you your nine lives." Ravenkit said absintly.
"Oh, really? And just how would a young kit like yourself know this?" Stormyfur taunted her.
"Stormyfur!" Stormyfur wipped around to see who had said her name. It was Robinfur the only other queen in the nursery.
"This young kit has a powerful conection to her ansesters, perhaps they told her this. Now drop it, and take you apprentice to his serimony. Ravenkit, Smoothkit, If you yell down to your father, and Mapletail they will take you down so that you can watch." Robinfur said as she curled back up to sleep.
(4)"This is so cool!" Smoothkit squeaked.
"Shh." One of the warriors quieted them, as the leader started to speak.
"Today is a great day for Treeclan. We have two kits and more to come, but better still, we have two young cats ready to become warriors!" The whole clan cheerd as he called Deeppaw and Spikepaw to the front.
"I Redstar,leader of Treeclan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as as warriors in thier turn. Spikepaw, Deeppaw, Do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to defend and portect your clan even at the cost of your lives?"
"I do!"
"I do!" They both anweserd.
"Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior names: Spikepaw from this day froward you shall be known as Spikefur. In honer of your bavery and good, and quick judgment in all situations." Redstar stepped forward and rested is nose on his head as Spikefur liked his shoulder.
"Deeppaw," He said turning towards him, "From this day forward you shall be know as Deeprain. In honer of your strong will and loyalty to your clan." he did the same with Deeprain then stepped back so that their clan could cheer.
"Spikefur, Deeprain! Spikefur, Deeprain!" Ravenkit yeled as loud as she could for here brother and freind. Now you might be able to train one of us just like you wanted.
(5)"Now they must sit their vergal. Come on we'll take up back up." Lightheart said getting reaady to pick up one of his kits.
"Wait, who is that cat talking to Spikefur?" Ravenkit asked.
"Yeah. And why does Deeprain seemed annoyed by her?" Smoothkit added.
"Well that is Leafface. She really likes Spikefur and is probably really happy he is a warrior now." The tom who had quited them said. She likes Spikefur. Hmm... I wonder what she is like, and how long she has been a warrior?
"Yes I'd have to agree Deadfur. As to why Deeprain is annoyed, he doesn't like her very much and really doesn't like that Spikefur kinda returns the feelings. But you need to go to sleep." Lightheart added quickly when Smoothkit opened her mouth to asked another question.
So he likes someone. Why should that bother me like it does?


well that's it very long anywho comment and enjoy^^