Ravenkit's beginning page 6

well after more then a month i have the next one up in the first panel they are two and half moons old then they are three and half in the rest of them.

(1)"Wow. She's so tiny." Smoothkit said as the newest kit nuzzled her mother's belly.
"What will you name her Robinfur?" Ravenkit asked. She was able to see at the moment and said. "Maybe Shinekit?"
"Yes, yes I like that Ravenkit, thank you. Shinekit that's your name my little one." Robinfur said licking her head.
(2)Shinekit sat and watched in amassment as Ravenkit and Smoothkit play fought.
"Ha now try and tackle me!"
"Ok you asked for it!" Smoothkit said as she pushed Ravenkit to the floor. Ravenkit rolled out of the way just as Smoothkit tied to flatten her.
"Why are you staring at me Shinekit?" Ravenkit asked her seeing her wide eyes that got wider after she asked the question.
"YOUR AMAZING RAVENKIT!! Please tell me how you knew I was watching!"
"Ha-ha Ok." So raventold her about the Starclan cat that talks to her and helps her. About how she let's Ravenkit see threw her eyes.

a week later

(3)"Hey Ravenkit, how are you and that rascal sister of yours?" Spikefur teased as he and Leafface came into the bottom level of the nursery.
"Hey I head that Spikefur!" Smoothkit yelled at him from the top level.
"Heh-heh. Hey have you met Leafface yet she was a warrior two moons before me. She is really nice."
Leafface waved her tail in gretting then said, "Oh sorry I forgot you couldn't see."
"I can see just fine. You are not going to make the jump Shinekit." Ravenkit said licking her paw.
"HA. OOF!" Shinekit said with a flop about two fox tails from Ravenkit.
"You need to get closer."
"Yes but then you know I'm coming."
"I still knew you were coming, didn't I?" Ravenkit sighed, "So is there something else you want?" she asked Spikefur with an annoyed tone.
"What I'm not aloud to visit my friends? But yes Mapletail wanted to know if you wanted to help him sort herbs."
"Sure!" Ravenkit said cheered up. Spickfur always stayed to help too.
(4) "Hey Mapletail!" Ravenkit said with her tail in the air as she came into the medicine den.
"Why hello Ravenkit, Spikefur how are you two today?"
"Good." Ravenkit said as she sat next to Mapltail in front of a pile of herbs.
"I'm good but I have to go on portal with Leafface soon, but I can stay for awhile."
"But you always stay and help." Ravenkit wined.
"I know I'm sorry. But she asked Goldensun to put us together so... I can't really say no."
"Spickefur time to go!" Leafface called from outside.
"Bye"
(5) "Oh she gets on my nerves."
"Why" Mapletail asked looking at her suspiciously.
"Well... just because she does. She's always calling Spikefur away from Shinekit, my sister, and me. He almost never comes to visit because he's with her. And well... she is ... just... so.. ugh!"
"Heh-heh sounds like your jealous of how much time she's getting to spend with him, to me." He said to her teasingly.
"I am not jealous." Ravenkit snapped at him.
"Can we just sort the herbs."
"Ok but I still think your jealous."
"Be quiet Maplekit." Ravenkit said staring at him from the corner of her eye.
"Oh-ho nice comeback. But your still-"
"Don't say it."
"Jealous! Ah!" he yelped as Ravenkit jumped on him, and they began to wrestle.

yes the nursery has two levels to it the first is for the nursing kits and the kits that aren't playing and the second and bottom level is for the kits who like to rough house
well that's page 6 comment and enjoy^^