InuYasha Doujinshi "Fragments Of Hope"

Jelou, well... Im doing a doujinshi with a friend =) And this is one of the pages. I just want to know what you think about it, and probably I will put the rest here. So º0º Is in spanish (Because... I... Speak... Spanish º 0º Thats why my english is so bad, but it say something like:

- We can make mistakes... But...

- "InuYasha... You know You cant leave me...
You... You belong to me"

Well o,o I hope you like it.