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Monster

Monster

Monster by _ren_tao_fan_
Monster by _ren_tao_fan_

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_ren_tao_fan_
The secret side of me
I never let you see
I keep it caged but I can't control it
So stay away from me
The beast is ugly
I feel the rage and I just can't hold it

It's scratching on the walls
In the closet, in the halls
It comes awake and I can't control it
Hiding under the bed
In my body, in my head
Why won't somebody come and save me from this
Make it end?

I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster

My secret side I keep hid under lock and key
I keep it caged but I can't control it
'Cause if I let him out
He'll tear me up, break me down
Why won't somebody come and save me from this
Make it end?

I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster

It's hiding in the dark
It's teeth are razor sharp
There's no escape for me, it wants my soul, it wants my heart
No one can hear me scream
Maybe it's just a dream
Maybe it's inside of me, stop this monster

I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I feel it deep within
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I've gotta lose control
He something radical
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster


Song: Monster by Skillet

I heard this song and demon Fang immediately came to my mind. I hope I drew the robotic eye right.
Fang belongs to super_sonic2000, do not steal or use without permission.

Here, have a story. Violence and language warning.


The voices... the voices...
Youmonsteryoumonsteryoumonster...
Shut up! Shut UP!
Monnnssssssterrrrrr...
I'm not... I'm not... a God... damn--
Murdererrrrrr.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Fang clutched his head in his arms, ran his claws harshly through his hair, and reeled. Why wouldn't they stop, why wouldn't they leave him be?

Killed her. Killed her. Your own...

Screaming, he turned and ran, ran away from the voices that echoed within his skull, within his soul, within every fiber of his being.

...mother...

He stopped dead in his tracks, breathing slowly and shakily. He was afraid. Terrified. He had tasted her blood, fresh from her living, breathing body, he had felt it warm on his paws. He hadn't meant to, he loved her more than anyone else in this God-forsaken world... why in Hell did it have to be her?!

Your angel of a mother you murdered her you bastard...

Fang whimpered.

You do not deserve life...

His claws shook and extended, the fur on the back of his neck bristled.

You are nothing...

Fang opened his mouth slowly, baring his razor teeth.

Nothing... but... a...

"Monster." Fang whispered in a gravelly voice.
Unwilling to supress the demon within him any longer, Fang let it out of its cage. It burst from his heart and, like a plague, rapidly devoured the rest of his body. It hurt, it felt like he was being consumed in a fire, and he screamed, screamed to the sky for all he was worth, but not because of the pain the demon inflicted.
He was guilty. Guilty of a crime he could never forgive himself for committing. He screamed that pain out to the world, he let his anguish be known. Nothing mattered now. Nothing in the world could hurt like this, and he had given this pain to himself.

Mooooooooonnnnnnnnnnsssssssteerrrrrrrrrr....

"MOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!"

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Category Furry » Anthro art » Canine (Dogs) » Foxes (Vulpine)
Date Submitted
Views 982
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 4
Comments 24
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
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me-someone on July 26, 2010, 9:35:13 AM

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me-someoneMe:Why does he have to suffer a lot?? :(

I mean... everyone has a character that has a UBER-powurful spirit/demon sealed inside itself (or at least had even the slightlest idea of that character)
but.. I mean.. DON'T SUFFER SO MUCH! IT BECOMES TEDIOUS (does that word exist anyways?)
No good.. at least, he had a good childhood.. right?? D: *me is really worried about fang 'x'*
At least my character almost did '3' (not Fennie or Watashi)

NUUU FANG! please don't suffer... ye aren't a monster, ye are a fluffy, furry, fox (YAY' 3F's!!) SO DO NOT SUFFER!!

* me talked to him in a bad moment and got attacked*
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
*dies from bleeding... but then Watashi used a Revive, so I'm not dead*
LETS USE TEH SOOPAH-TEKNIQUE! *me runs away*[/
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Watashi: EH? AND WHAT ABOUT ME?? *she looks at Fang*
MEEP! U are not bad, I know it ^~^U
*begins to sing "You got a friend in me"*(calm down Watashi-almdowncalmdowncalmdown)

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 27, 2010, 3:38:17 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_He has to suffer because super_sonic2000 said so. So there. -w-
And YAY for Revive. YAYYYY. Or else I'd be dead. :D
Shey: BAD Fang for attacking innocent bystanders! BAD! *flicks his nose*
Fang: *whimperwhimper whine*

me-someone on July 27, 2010, 3:56:10 AM

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me-someoneLOL XD
Revive = Pokemon reference XD
There has been lots of poké-love lately '3'
Can't help it, I've been a fan since I was 5. 'v'

So yeah.. should I go to scold super_sonic2000 because of fang's unfairy punishment?? (whoa, that sounded different XD)

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 27, 2010, 7:47:55 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_HOORAH for Revive! Or else I never would have beaten the Elite Four in FireRed. :3
And YEAH for Pokemon! YEAH I SAY!
Well... Fang is super_sonic2000's fursona, so... I guess he can do whatever he wants to him XD

UltimateYoshi1696 on May 22, 2010, 3:41:17 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_ on May 23, 2010, 12:46:50 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Super spiffy! :D Thank you ^^

super_sonic2000 on May 5, 2010, 8:44:16 AM

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super_sonic2000O_o uhh... just O_o

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 5, 2010, 8:45:22 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_<:(
You do not like it?

super_sonic2000 on May 5, 2010, 10:12:23 AM

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super_sonic2000i like it. just the red eye..seems...out of place here

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 5, 2010, 11:02:16 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Sorry. You wanted a red mechanical right eye, did you not?

super_sonic2000 on May 6, 2010, 8:14:11 AM

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super_sonic2000yes. im not sayin the pic is bad :3 its good. just his eyes looks like his normal eye...just red

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 6, 2010, 8:42:00 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Oh. Sorry.

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 6, 2010, 8:42:39 AM

_ren_tao_fan_ on
_ren_tao_fan_I wanted to draw circuit boards and everything on the eye, but it didn't look right.

super_sonic2000 on May 9, 2010, 9:37:18 AM

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super_sonic2000well its no problem.

qazqaz1 on May 5, 2010, 12:10:50 PM

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qazqaz1cool

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 6, 2010, 5:21:42 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Thanks

lashanta22 on May 5, 2010, 9:22:35 AM

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lashanta22love that song and the pic is awesome!!! love the anger and detail in it^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 5, 2010, 11:02:46 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Thank you, I love that song too. :)

lashanta22 on May 5, 2010, 2:55:26 PM

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lashanta22ur welcome!!

Falconlobo on May 5, 2010, 8:21:55 AM

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Falconlobonice expression and tails^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 5, 2010, 8:23:24 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Thank you. :)
The expression took me a long time to get it right so I'm glad it turned out A-OK ^^

Falconlobo on May 5, 2010, 8:50:30 AM

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Falconlobonp^^ the eyes are cool and teeth

_ren_tao_fan_ on May 5, 2010, 8:51:00 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Thanks :)

Falconlobo on May 5, 2010, 9:02:35 AM

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