Sun and Moon (Bleach Doujinshi) Prologue page 1
Sun and Moon (Bleach Doujinshi) Prologue page 1
Sun and Moon (Bleach Doujinshi) Prologue page 1 by aeris7dragon
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to try and color all these pages; I've only got 6 done, but that was over about a week and a half and I didn't exactly delve into it....
In case you can't tell, that's Hitsugaya Toushirou and Sun (here seen as Captain Tsukimaru Taiyou of 14th squad...you'll get it as I submit more pages. ^^') Also Matsumoto Rangiku; and the dead chick behind Toushirou is Zen Zen (Yuffie in a previous life.) The dead guy in front of the hollow is shootoru (Zack Fair's past life) and waaaaaaay in the back there in the last panel is Buria and Meisen (Briana Clay and Jon Masonric from Gunless)
I've translated it into Nihongo but my Japanese grammar is bad so I've left it up there so people can make corrections. Here's the English translation:
panel 1 (sfx) do- (heartbeat; I wanted it to seem like it'd been cut off)
panel 2: Captain!
panel 3: Captain...wake up...please!
There you have it. Next page in about 2 seconds. XD Criticism (constructive, mind you) is ENCOURAGED!!! I know the art sucks. I colored it to make it look better....XP
In case you can't tell, that's Hitsugaya Toushirou and Sun (here seen as Captain Tsukimaru Taiyou of 14th squad...you'll get it as I submit more pages. ^^') Also Matsumoto Rangiku; and the dead chick behind Toushirou is Zen Zen (Yuffie in a previous life.) The dead guy in front of the hollow is shootoru (Zack Fair's past life) and waaaaaaay in the back there in the last panel is Buria and Meisen (Briana Clay and Jon Masonric from Gunless)
I've translated it into Nihongo but my Japanese grammar is bad so I've left it up there so people can make corrections. Here's the English translation:
panel 1 (sfx) do- (heartbeat; I wanted it to seem like it'd been cut off)
panel 2: Captain!
panel 3: Captain...wake up...please!
There you have it. Next page in about 2 seconds. XD Criticism (constructive, mind you) is ENCOURAGED!!! I know the art sucks. I colored it to make it look better....XP
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Keiyou on October 14, 2009, 5:30:44 PM
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aeris7dragon on October 14, 2009, 5:40:46 PM
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I'd like to give constructive critisism; but I'm still learning to draw comics properly myself, so... all I can say is practice makes perfect ^-^