DragonSong request for Astronomymage by artman_ver2

DragonSong request for Astronomymage

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A request from Astronomymage. Thanks for the first comment I have ever recieved here!

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters
Date Submitted September 3, 2005, 10:35:18 AM
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artman_ver2 on September 16, 2005, 10:46:18 AM

Heh heh... Thanks... ^-^

Astronamymage on September 16, 2005, 10:18:23 AM

you got all of them! Great job! I love it! You even put in a background that is perfect for her!
Critique:(You deserve a good one for all your hard work)

Good: I really like how you did the dragons. The eyes are great;they are all relaxed. You did the dragons in many positions also. :) Her expression is well done. She does tend to be happy with her firelizards.

Bad: The proportions on Menolly are a little off. Her left hand is in a strange position and her torso meets her hips at an odd angle.
You can't see any shading in the pic though escept a little in the shirt.

Tips:
Using a white colored pencil, you can make rougher lines look smoother. You can also use a blending pencil for this.
Use a manequin for proportions or try peniling a maniquin on paper before inking it or adding details