Back to the Magic-part6
Back to the Magic-part6
Back to the Magic-part6 by bachel
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cptShort on October 11, 2005, 10:47:24 AM
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Plot-wise, it's moving a bit fast, but I'm not going to rag on you for that. I know it's hard to make the plot flow decently.
It does actually have an interesting idea behind it, so I'll keep reading.