Back to the Magic-part6 by bachel

Back to the Magic-part6

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(other parts in my gallery)

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Category Books » Harry Potter series
Date Submitted June 15, 2005, 8:12:31 PM
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cptShort on October 11, 2005, 10:47:24 AM

These are a bit hard to read. If it had some kind of panels, that would help keep everything seperated and understandable.

Plot-wise, it's moving a bit fast, but I'm not going to rag on you for that. I know it's hard to make the plot flow decently.

It does actually have an interesting idea behind it, so I'll keep reading.