HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWORDPLAY

Read left to right and up to down, please. I swear, SOMEDAY I WILL use manga format for a comic. SOMEDAY...
Well, it was kinda hard to decide on what to say here...
HOOOOOOAAAH!!
Yes, that's right! My wittle baby Swordplay is finally a year old! I've reached 10 chapters and I've received about 64 reviews!
And THIS was my idea of a tribute to my story... and its reviewers! Basically, it's just a comic of the three major stars of the story- Marth, Link, and Captain Falcon- expressing their gratitude for the success the story has received. But seeing as the story is called SWORDplay, Roy got a little upset about not being a major star (he's a major CHARACTER, but he's not one of the story's true stars)... and this is what happened. If you can't read my forsaken handwriting or if you just really want to know what Captain Falcon's speech is about, here's the script.
Panel 1
Marth: As the stars of Swordplay, we'd just like to say-
Panel 2
Roy: HEY!!!!
Panel 3
(Roy comes marching over- stomp, stomp, march, march, april, may lol)
Panel 4
Roy: WHY IS CAPTAIN FALCON HERE?! HOW DID HE GET TO BE ONE OF THE MAJOR STARS? HE'S NOT EVEN A SWORDSMAN!! WHY NOT ME INSTEAD?!
Panel 5 (The super special awesome essay by Captain Douglas Jay Falcon. Gosh Roy, chill out!)
Falcon: Guilty as charged. But I'm still a major star. You see, I live on the third floor, along with Link and Marth. Because we live so close, I develop a bond with them, especially with Marth. The fact that I have a love interest in Samus Aran (heart) helps too. Plus, I'm also a decent source of comic relief from time to time. You know, I was originally intended to be a more perverted, villainous character before I wound up living near Link and Marth. That, and Youtube videos of the F-Zero anime, particularly the "Falcon Punch" clip, made the author dig my true character more. You're still a major character, Roy- but not as much as me.
Panel 6
Link: (applauding) Excellent speech! Now then, where were we? Oh, yeah! We just wanted to say-
Panel 7 (Roy needs to remember that interrupting is rude.)
Roy: You do supply a valid point in your fangirl-esque rant. However, I STILL think it's not right because you're NOT a swordsman.
Panel 8
(Captain Falcon smiles and holds up... a beam sword, lol.)
Panel 9 (BEWARE THE WRATH OF ROY!)
Roy: WHY YOU-!! OKAY, NOW YOU'RE IN FOR IT, MR. F-ZERO!!!
Panel 10
(A typical dust cloud of violence, while L & M stick figures watch)
Panel 11
(The awkward glance thing, lmao)
Panel 12 (It's my lucky number, you know! ^_^)
Link: ANYWAYS... we'd just like to say thanks to all the fans of Swordplay who contributed to the 60+ reviews! We couldn't have survived 10 chapters without you!
Marth: Or an entire year for that matter! HAPPY FIRST BIRTHDAY, SWORDPLAY! (big heart)
Roy: (in the background) YOU WERE ASKING FOR IT!!
Falcon (also in background): No! Not my bowtie!
Okay, end of comic. I realize the artwork's not that great, but due to poor planning on my part I didn't have much time to work with... still, I spent nearly 6 hours drawing this.
I gave this a spoiler rating because... well, now you know what Captain Falcon looks like underneath his helmet (ZOMG HE'S SO HOTTTTT!!!!!). At least, in the anime. He's dressed up like his alias, "Bart", who runs the Falcon House Cafe. However, at the end of the anime, there's a scene where Falcon loses the helmet JUST before he dies, and it's revealed "Bart" was really Falcon the entire time. So, I pretty much spoiled the entire anime for you. Congratulations. If you search for it on Youtube (particularly the "Falcon Punch" clip), you're bound to find the episodes.
PERSONAL LIKES ABOUT THE PICTURE:
~Nii, I spent even longer making this than the picture of Link and Marth!
~For a lack of detail, this looks surprisingly cute!
~THE CHIBIS AND STICK FIGURES ARE ADORABLE!!
~The first panel. Nuff said. I spent 1.5 hours on that alone.
~I'm not 100% pleased, with how Falcon turned out... but I'm still satisfied, because I was worried I would've SERIOUSLY screwed him up. Now you're forced to say it... seriously... come on. He's pretty handsome without the helmet. AND THE BOWTIE IS KAWAII!!!
~The panels remained relatively straight.
~Funny dialogue. At least I think so...
~THE BEAM SWORD OWNS YOU.
DISLIKES:
* I still wish I could've drawn Falcon better...
*The last panel! >x< I drew it with only the first panel as a reference.
*The pencil is kinda faded or smudged here or there.
* Speaking of Falcon... DRAWING HIM WAS SO TIME-CONSUMING! I had to get the outfit and hair right! That's part of why it took me so long to draw the first panel!
* Maybe I should've used more detail... (or shonen ai.)

I would love to see Swordplay fanart from you guys!

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(story for inspiration)

Total time: 351 minutes (5h, 51m)