Sandy and Maxwell: Love at First Sight

This is basically my Valentines Day present to a friend of mine, who is a complete S/M fan. This was also based off one of my Hamtaro fics.

Anyway, I love how it finally turned out after all the outlining and coloring. This has to be my best one in terms of a true finished work. However, I dun like how Sandy and Maxwell themselves came out. Sandy's head is too long, and I screwed up Maxwell all together. Oh well, at least it looks cute. Please tell me what you think of it. Here's the link to the fic if you're interested:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1146003/1/