Skin Deep - pg1

This is a manga I'm going to be doing with my friend akasume. Not sure if we are going to put it all on my acount or all on hers are switch off or what. I named it skin deep because A) Couldn't think of anything else B) I haven't consulted akasume on the name yet. I'd like feed back since I want to know if I should work more on this than on Salvation