Unfinished Karst and Thorne

These are the characters from a failed manga my friend Kyle and I started in freshman year. Karst (on the right) was kyle's character and was the bad guy. He doesn't look like it. The other is my character. He has a Genjo Sanzo feel to him because he's a little rough around the edges (and his weapon is a gun not featured in this picture) but he is a genuinely good guy. I'm not going to finish this picture because I screwed up Thorne's other eye but this is a precursor to what is to come. I had to beg Kyle to let Karst have striped pants. They give him a maniacal feel and also He kind of looks like Roy from Fullmetal Alchemist. I may have altered the characters a little from the original but Karst was completely Kyle's creation so if you have any issues with him, it ain't my fault.