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OKAY! So this is when in my fanfic Titans West (www.fanfiction.net~chocohip2000 ) all of the members in the group go to an HUGE annual fair, and Adriane gets seperated from the group... just when the batteries in her communicator go dead. Everyone splits up to find her. Lightning is the most freaked though because she's his best friend he ever had.He goes into a frenzy on his cloud thing and he finds her. He contacts everyone afterward. They all decide (through communicators) they should go in pairs. So Lightning and Adriane go on all of the heart stopping rides together.

There's also the part where when he finds her, he is all like "OMG ADRIANE DON'T DO THAT!" She asks why he's freaked, and he confesses his brotherly like feelings for her, and how much of a friend she is to him. My friend wanted a romance thing going on between them, but they compete constantly. SO THIS IS HOW FAR THEIR RELATIONSHIP GOES... I think.

I wish I had made it more of a night time at the carnival look. MY LIGHTING SUCKS!!!! It's supposed to be a carnival by the beach on the pier, because I LOVE those settings. It's SO MUCH FUN!!!! I like how I drew Adriane and Lightning though.

What do you guys think?

EDIT: OMG look at all of the details in the backround! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG How much of a detail freak AM I?!?!?!?!