The Diablo by dailycandydosage

The Diablo

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This is my first drawing of Vash (and the first drawing I thought would be good enough to put online :3) I know it's on lined paper and I'm very sorry for that, but please, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Thanks for looking!

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Category Anime/Manga » Trigun » Vash
Date Submitted June 4, 2005, 6:38:09 PM
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Dark_Phoenix on July 18, 2005, 3:16:08 PM

constructive critism? i'll try..

first off, for the hair you want the part on the right to come closer to his forehead (even tho his hair 'poofs' out, the roots still have to connect to his head) and the back of his hair should go down 'passed' the ear (if not, it looks as if he has a bald spot at the base of his skull)

clothes are hard, that will come with time and practice but make the hand bigger if its facing the viewer. (the average hand is about the size of ur face so if its pointing towards the viewer, his FIST will be almost the size of his face.

one last note, the gun is slightly tilted so its gonna look more 'squished' together.

I HOPE THIS HELPS!!!

dailycandydosage on June 21, 2005, 6:10:39 PM

Thank you so much! It means so much to me ^^

MangaWhit on June 14, 2005, 12:42:31 PM

Yeah, try not to do the lined paper thing again! ^_~ But I know how it is... you start a good drawing and just can't help but to finish it, no matter what paper it's on!!

Anyway, I have to say this is well done. The fact that you can already do folds in clothes and foreshortening (where you make it look like the gun is pointing at you) is really good!! Keep it up!