Wishsayer's Contest pic!!

This is the pic of wishsayer's contest! ^-^ sorry it soooo long!!! ._.'' i really like the sky though. oh i saw the pic of urs that was about wavestar howling at the star she was named after, so i hope the part about you being named after the star is right. if not tell me and ill edit. ^^

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Wavestar sighed with boredom. "When is Oceanpaws gonna come help me with patrol?" she quietly said to herself. Wavestar usually had to be woken up by Oceanpaws, but this time was different. Just then she picked up a scent that made her hair rise. It wasnt a wolf of her clan. Its wasnt even a pure blood wolf, it had a slight scent of human blood. Wavestar immediately stood up with her tail rised high in the air as she heard a branch crack from the nearby forest.

"Oh sorry!" called the wolf from the nearby trees.
Th wolf tumbled out from a small bush. She was black with small scar like white marks on all of her legs and one across her eye.

"Who are you and what clan are you from?" Wavestar demanded to know.

"Im sorry I didnt mean to intrude! Im Ebony. I must have tumbled into your territory by accident. I just couldnt stop looking at the sky, and then didnt realize where I was going." Ebony explained.

"I guess thats alright, but you better not let anyone else of my clan see you." Wavestar suggested.

"I'll keep that in mind. Do you mind if I sit with you for a while?" Asked Ebony nervously.

"Ummm...I guess." Wavestar said shyly.

"Wow, this is a beautiful view!" Ebony said gazing lovingly at the sky.

"I know, this is my patrol area." Wavestar said

"By the way, I didnt ask you your name." Ebony said

"Wavestar, Im named after that star right there." She said staring at a large bright star above them.

"Wow! Thats a very pretty star!" Ebony exclaimed

"Thanks." Wavestar said with a smile.

"Uh-huh" Ebony smiled back.

Then a wolf of mixed blues came running speedily towards them. Wavestar got very nervous and whipped her head towards Ebony. "Get out of here!!" Wavestar shouted nervously. Except when she turned around there was no wolf there to hear. Ebony was already gone. Wavestar sighed with relief.
"Who were you talking to?" Oceanpaws questioned.
"No one." Wavestar said a little confused.
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i hope this is better!:]

comments appreciated